[Round 4] 2. ShadowWarriorfs(3-0 vs 3. Got Life?(3-0) vs 4. nom is dull.(3-0)

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Sep 19, 2011.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008

    VERSUS DUE: Every Friday @ 11:59 PM PST
    LINE LIMIT: Minimum of 16 lines, Maximum of 64
    •Recycling is the equivalent to that of a no-show and will be treated as such, thus resulting in a loss in favor of the participant whom chose to recycle and a win in favor of his/her opponent
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    •Verses MUST incorporate AT LEAST 1 of the provided topics or pictures
    •A failure to show will result in a loss and a sign out by default. A no show in the tourney will result in elimination.
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    T.a.C- thedude8125
    ShadowWarriorfs- ShadowWarriorfs
  2. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

    Apr 11, 2004
  3. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

    Aug 3, 2005
  4. billy nomates.

    billy nomates. rain cancels play.

    Dec 12, 2009
    lolz going to get drunk lolz

    I sing sea shanties till salts stuck in my gums
    It chafes my lips and roughens my tongue
    Pulling in dust to toughen my lungs
    Catching bits of sky and coughing up sun

    I wanted a son to be my friend, laugh at my jokes
    Now I’m down to my last shoes, starving and broke
    Thick tongued, tar in my throat, I still dream though
    As steady as the tree’s grow my beliefs hope
    I cry as the leaves show the trace of a tear
    Another workshop extra with a painted veneer
    A saint with a sneer grafted from years of
    Tears and peers
    And queers and spears
    And meers and deers
    And jeers and cheers
    The cheers are jeers
    Are queers are Pinocchio

    to the picture of the woodwork table.
  5. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

    Aug 3, 2005
    I hide my boredem behind the stars,
    I drink my sorrows in a flask of hearts,
    I try my hardest to mask the dark,
    And I do what I can to align the parts,
    I let the swirl of lights create the night's mood,
    Not the blackest of holes could stave the typhoon,
    And if you let wrap it around you, and hold you close,
    It might keep you warm, from the frozen cold...

    ...Just like James, had a love-life,
    Also had a one-time great, she was sunshine,
    And everytime the sunshine came, he was love-blind
    staring at the sunshine's rays, gets 'em tongue-tied,
    But one fine day, when the sunrise came,
    She was gone with the dawn of her gun shy faze,
    Let her bullets fly loose in the wind, sinned,
    Somehow blamed it on him, a grim whim,
    But the limbs that she found with her hips on the ground
    never gave her the smile that he'd give...

    ...It seems like a tale that is told to a toad,
    To show there ain't a princess on the road to the throne,
    But no... as the sunshine left his life,
    He was sitting in the stars, breathing breath of night,
    In his chest beat the stress and strife,
    But in his rest, dreams pressed deep entering his sense of sight,
    And as his eyes slowly closed, the glow-
    of soul ignited, as he let go of control,
    He felt excited, he was close to growth,
    And his bones, felt guided by the holy ghost...

    ...As he opened his eyes, he caught a view of a star,
    Slowly, cascading towards his crucible's farse.
    She was different from the sun, made use of the dark,
    She operated in it, changed views from start,
    While most people thought it was the time for crime,
    When the night came, it was her time to shine,
    And as the light faded from James' life, she waited,
    Until the perfect time, and the night was greatest,
    "I thought I was the only one that knew of this place,"
    Who knew that the stars could move with such grace...

    ...That night, they spoke for hours,
    On the bay of life with an ocean's power,
    Sunshine went, and the night was left,
    And that's where he found his brightest friend...

    So I no longer hide my boredom behind stars,
    And there's no sorrow to drink in a flask of hearts,
    I no longer have to mask the dark,
    For I've done what I've done to align the parts,
    Where the swirl of lights creates the night's mood,
    And the blackest of holes can't stave the typhoon,
    So now let it wrap around you, and hold you close,
    Perhaps it'll keep you warm, from the frozen cold.

  6. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

    Apr 11, 2004
    Stupid T.a.C. didn't change EST to PT....keying something now

    Some good deeds are best undone

    Carrie Parker was my best friend
    We dated but she desired more in the end
    Wanting love but I expected the same
    Breaking up with a text in the rain
    Bodies wet as the heat departs
    Yet we remained high school sweethearts
    Perhaps it was the comfort that we shared
    That kept us close, no on compared-
    to Carrie, yet i watched as she ran to another
    My close friend Charlie, he was like my brother

    Years passed as i watched their love grow
    Each day I'd regret ever letting Carrie go
    Yet Carrie started avoiding me, staying indoors
    Charlie was protective but a typical man-whore
    One morning i watch him drag her down the street
    Kicking and punching her while she admits defeat
    I stormed outside and grabbed her from him
    He tried to fight me but i bashed his face in
    The police arrived and questioned Carrie
    She lied and told the cops i initiated the crime
    I was taken into custoday, she ran to Charlie's aid
    Perhaps she wanted revenge for the actions i used
    or maybe was like every other girl and loves the abuse
  7. fairydance2000

    fairydance2000 don't wait, Procrastinate

    Mar 10, 2004
    Wow guy, what is happening to this tourny, it’s a real joke now, what is it with GL, and crap verses, nom doesn’t even try, but you shaft the players that play. Way to go to get a good name for the tourny,
    Any who, back to the joke vote

    Nom, its really sad you didn’t finish your verse you could have taken this one out.
    Your rhymes in the story were strong, then rubbish, the imagery was strong, then jargen.
    The story would have been good, you just stopped.

    I can see you tried to create a story buy using the most amount of repeated words possible.
    weak at best. No antisipation, dull to say the least,
    Rhymes are basic when they are there.
    You get brownie pionts for writing more than 6 lines this week

    Rhymes were a bit wishy washy, story was short, but I understand why. When rule are changed through the tourny it makes it hard, I feel there would have been so much more.
    The imagery was there creating what I would guess would have been a brilliant story if complete.

    Shadow, for using less repeated words or even nom for much nicer rhymes
    but according to rules
    GL has to get the vote for his longer no show verse.
  8. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008
    nom - you bitch. you had a chance to give GL? an L and you got drunk instead. you really think i wanna hear him brag about winning two straight tourneys? you fag. anyway, the verse started off cool. the imagery was good. but obviously this was just a no show verse. too bad you couldnt finish it. and yes, pinocchio is a queer.

    GL? - "And if you let wrap it around you, and hold you close," obviously you need to start proof reading your verses. clearly missing a word there. but really, your rhymes were what stood out the most from this verse. the story itself was kind of boring. but obviously this is going to win. off to check if its recycled.

    Shadow - lmao. damn dude. had you finished this, you probably would have got my vote. the story was the most entertaining, thought told too fast. you know any rule change would have gone through you, so not sure why you were confused about the deadline. anyway, there were some awkwardly worded lines that took this down a little.

    "Breaking up with a text in the rain
    Bodies wet as the heat departs"

    saying bodies makes it sound like they were standing face to face, but she sent him a text dumping him anyway. anyway, nice try.

    vote- GL? for obvious reasons.
  9. billy nomates.

    billy nomates. rain cancels play.

    Dec 12, 2009
  10. Nu'maaN

    Nu'maaN Anu'naki, Nuqqa.

    Aug 27, 2005
    your first four lines > shadow and gl's verse combined.
    but to be fair, you didn't finish this shit.

    i don't know why t.a.c is telling gotlife that he missed out on a word, when he clearly didn't. So now let it wrap around you, and hold you close. he isn't missing any word at all there, i don't feel anything was missing from that line.

    edit ; got your pm tee, i thought you were talking about the second instance he used that rhyme, not in the first (my bad).

    to discredit gotlife for repeating (moreso reiterating) some words is pretty harsh, especially that it fit into the story well. he started off with it, and ended with a changed mind. and throughout the middle there was alot of strong rhymes, and beautiful imagery to go with the picture he used.

    shadow had the most complete story, but gotlife had the better wording.
    shadow, i've seen you do a million times better than this, and i don't know why this story was so short.

    my vote.
    if it counts - gotlife.

    sorry shadow i really wanted you to win this comp, and fuck you nom.

  11. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008
    Got Life? wins 3-0
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