[Round 3] 5. Vern Acular(2-0) vs 6. nom is dull.(2-0)

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Sep 13, 2011.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008

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  2. billy nomates.

    billy nomates. rain cancels play.

    Dec 12, 2009
    I’ll make diamonds from the ash
    Of the bridges I burned

    The boats at low tide remind me of us
    At the first light of dawn in a time we could trust
    Where the salt turned rust into the graffiti we speak
    With white gold smiles was how we greeted the week
    A thief with teeth made from the belief of death
    With our lips touching smiles so sweet we slept
    As cheetahs crept by under a mourning sky
    River tongued speech swept into a shortened lie
    Tip toed by your bed as a cautious spy, coxcomb eyes
    That created the hall of mirrors that I’m lost inside
    So drop a dime in this jukebox and we’ll dance tonight
    Trace the wind with our fingers and carve the light
    With stars and stripes, movements cartoon sleights
    Until our nails bruise skin like barroom fights

    We tongue tied ourselves in unmade beds
    Where we’d wait for the mood that the sunshade set
    You tripped off a punch line thread I strung
    From bed to bathroom where the pennants hung
    Shedding drummed skin under cover and cloaked
    In each others scent that a summer evoked
    In slumber we spoke like two beggars entwined
    Clutching sheets each other so tender and blind
    Our sun we set it alive, dust peppered the light
    Got caught in the needle we cast records aside
    Hunkered down where the pessimists thrive
    Telling my story on your back penning my side
    A ten minute binding contract in the passage of time
    Lace my fingers into yours as a saccharine bribe

    When you asked if I was happy I almost broke
    I’ve built my life on soft land and the shoring slopes
    Torn and bloated but I still ask for your hand
    With a look on my face like it was part of the plan
    It only sharpened my stand, I watched a night fall drown
    As my eyelids dropped and my sights so sound
    Still time slows down I picture you reading a book
    With the world at your feet but you see how you look
    So you step down check the mirror and grin
    With a look like you know it’s a pivotal sin
    This is my dream that you’re shivering in
    So drag your voice from the floor we’ll sing it again
    With similar whims minus the sinister tinge
    I’m shinning your tower to visit your hymn
    With a tip of the wing I’ll shake these halo marks
    Take my hand we’ll run and evade the dark
    A sailboat marks the moment I went off track
    And told you I loved with a dissenters tact
    But I meant all that so I let your lips pick shams
    And only notice too late that they taste like quick sand

    Quick Sand.
  3. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

    Aug 3, 2005
    And to think we were all under the impression it was you who would no-show vs Vern.

    There were slight wording things that I didn't enjoy here, like cover and cloaked I feel would have worked better as just cover and cloak. Also the way the first stanza ended seemed abrupt. Your imagery and wording was strong throughout, the only issue I have sometimes is your writing is to caught up in the images it creates and the story itself behind the great writing is redundant nomsy 101.

    I'd love to see you press the envelope like you did the one time you swept me.
  4. billy nomates.

    billy nomates. rain cancels play.

    Dec 12, 2009
  5. Nu'maaN

    Nu'maaN Anu'naki, Nuqqa.

    Aug 27, 2005

    what a fucking showing.

    the final four lines gave me an erection.

  6. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

    Apr 11, 2004
    Nom wins via No Show...Vern Eliminated
  7. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008
    nom wins by no show
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