Round 2: Buzzooka Joe vs. Past-One

Discussion in 'GRB - '13 Grand Royal Audio Battle' started by J o o k, Aug 10, 2013.

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Who won?

  1. Past-One

    28.6%
  2. Buzzooka Joe

    71.4%
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  1. J o o k

    J o o k Win your battles before they’ve even been fought.

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    GRB - Grand Royal Audio Battle 2013 Rules - Second Round


    $1,700.00 up for grab!


    - 2nd Round Audios are DUE Monday night August 19th at 11:59 pm EST.
    - Theme: up to 2-3+ Minutes must be about your opponent(s).
    - You must mention their BOARD name(s). Must be at least 2 minutes.
    - YOU MUST post using your board name that is registered to the match. Others will be DQ'ed.
    - NEW RULE: All participants must vote on at least six (6) other battles and post the links to the battles they voted on in their matches using ONE post to do so. If your links are not in by the time the battle closes for votes (Friday 11:59EST) then you will lose one vote for every link missing. YOU MUST LEAVE AT LEAST THREE LINES OF FEEDBACK WITH YOUR VOTE (IN ADDITION TO VOTING ON THE POLL). IF YOU DO NOT LEAVE FEEDBACK YOU WILL NOT BE CREDITED FOR THE VOTE.- No Comments allowed on battle until both battlers have posted their battle songs. You can also post videos.
    - Aiming for votes or voting rings will not be tolerated. If my team catches wind of such you will be DQ'd without question.


    If you have any questions, comments or concerns, contact me immediately via PM or Email -Yelp001@gmail.com

    Polls will be edited in mid-week (as they are only allowed to be open for seven days due to board settings).
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  2. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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    you not a rapper you a girly guy/
    i'll spill his blood on the hard wood like turpentine//
    i slaughter house when cats give crooked eyes/
    fly to carolina and turn joes crib into columbine//
    bazookas not tuff he's t he rapping George Castanza/
    while i'm out killing off all of these kids like i'm adam lanes//
    leave em black and blue seeing stars like the logo for the panthers/
    serpents mind take my time when i'm writhing cancer//
    bazooka joe playing the side lines like a back up dancer/
    i'll execute your swagger you lost on the island//
    you think you've been where i've been but couldn't match my milage/
    the kids going crazier then Amanda Bynes driving//
    back in high school you got less ass then Miley cyrus/
    i define rhyming something me and joe don't share in common//
    bazooka joe run from the image of me shadow boxing/
    got no music on the net so name flipping my only option//
    fagot you dressing like women singing like mary poppins/
    y'all no who i am there ain't no more of me playing possum//
    the lions out his den make buzz's rap look microscopic /
    it must suck to be from carolina lonely like gothic//
    joes on he's knees so much theres semen in his vomit/
    you skinny homo rap with a lisp passionately pissed//
    born with a gift every battles a fortified hit/
    your fucking stupid like your sleeping with my ex chick//
    back with a vengeance spitting fire in the booth/
    while going crazy on the board like noodles and jook//
    the first round was a cake walk and so is round 2/
    fuck an aim ring an voting circles i don't need a voting crew//
    all my votes are real thats something you gotta prove/
    i win you lose queens new york thats where they raised me at//
    crazy cat who grew up in a house with 1000 maniacs/ (beat change up)

    i'm respectable your shit is destitute /
    nothing left of you when hands crash like the bandicoot //

    i'm fucking sick like sticking my dick in a chick with leprosy/
    i rap like no one out here can fuck with me//
    your shit is garbage translucent and watered down/
    the king back fresh from the ground bearing the crown//
    every round i'm like Popeye eating his spinach/
    you harry potter the only mallet you carries for playing quidditch//
    i swing swords with shoaling soldiers over some vintage/
    past traveled back into time murk your existence//
    my last round was 12- 2 you can do the statistics/
    you sound like you smoking crack through a glass dick//
    joe i'm just clowning on you know to be a dip shit/
    your dealing with a gray pit now joe's my biggest fan//
    cause every punch he threw at me could never land like peter pan/
    while i pushed his face into the spinning blades of an open fan//
    joe lacks the common skills and what it takes to be the man/
    for know i'm just spitting these bars to feed the fame //




    letsss gooo
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  3. Rex Skully

    Rex Skully .......

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    Http://soundcloud.com/buzzookajoe/vs-past-one-grb13-round-2

    http://m.soundcloud.com/buzzookajoe/vs-past-one-grb13-round-2

    I'm curious how he won last round if he no showed
    I peeped his verse didn't hear one line and no flow

    Past-One sound like Necro when he's rhyming
    Not the rapper Necro, I mean he sound like he dying
    Dead man walking he a fucking living corpse
    I seen his video, he was rocking denim shorts
    No punch line there, he was wearing denim shorts
    In a wardrobe 1994 wiggers wore
    And you know this faggot swallow, what's he spitting for
    He bout to get mopped up like dirty kitchen floors
    I'm straight killing, He don't want it like a rape victim
    And he ain't winning like a 2nd place finish
    Yo the music threads he post, yeah they stay slipping
    So much that they got more up's than Blake Griffen
    Pretty sure he UP more than insomniacs
    And Ima son his ass like his mom and dad
    Yo his coke fiend face stay white like hockey masks
    Taking loads for change he think his mouth a laundry mat
    Tried to listen to his tracks but didn't get past one
    He rap tough but wouldn't bust caps with cap guns
    This cat come from queens so lm'a smack dun
    Til he (Rev) Run cause he really ain't bout that Action (Bronson)


    Y'all gonna see no One in round 3 like the tourney's over
    He got killed by bazooka, like a murdered Soldier
    He's crazy to think that he could match me lyrically
    One thing we all know is, Past is history
    I'll take him out his misery and end his fucking life
    Claims he got stabbed but he was just cut with a butter knife
    Him winning is like D-Omen on a hunger strike
    Ain't happening, even if we battle a hundred times
    There's no hope for this joke with a silly flow
    Only dope line he got is the coke in his video
    I'm going in like pigeon toed he ain't hitting Joe
    With none of those weak punches he fixing to throw
    If he throwing anything he should throw in the towel
    Cause this faggots a pussy and I'm blowing him out
    He rapping horror-core so what's he nervous for
    he ain't ready for beef, like he a herbivore
    He spitting shit we ain't ever heard before
    Not because it's unique, we just ain't heard of this dork
    His tracks are so shallow and they fucking trash
    That stab wound's the only deep cut he has
    Past One dimensional like a straight line
    And he couldn't get ahead if he was using face time
    I put him in deep sleep like he counting sheep
    Swear to God I'm already writing for round three
    Cause they ain't no way that he knocking me out
    I got this shit in the bag like a colostomy pouch
    I put this wack faggot out fast like a cheetah
    We forgetting all about past like amnesia
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  4. double ML

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    i don't recall past-one's first round shit, but he showed up nice on this
    love the wu tang beats, and the flow and voice were dope
    a few rough spots where you kinda missed the beat a bit, but it is what it is


    vote past-one
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  5. its papi

    its papi inellek my middle name

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    I didnt know mc prop was in this battle double



    @J o o k really allowing this guy to vote tho

    Ill vote later or tomorrow
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  6. double ML

    double ML plekz = wannabe thought police

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    swear i saw mc prop's name :drakecheese:

    it's papi is a fucking cocksucker though
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  7. g.t.

    g.t. RM Radio Host

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    Imma vote tomorrow but yo past youve gotta structure your bars better, time-wise....youre rushing and squeazing so much in that it falls off beat and sounds unnatural. Nice emotion though. Imma evaluate actual bars and vote next time i get a few moments.
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  8. Bonnie B

    Bonnie B Friday's Child

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    Joe got the vote here from me...

    Punchlines on both ends were comparable... Joe had the cleaner verses overall tho
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  9. Bonnie B

    Bonnie B Friday's Child

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    also keep in mind i can't hit the polls so count my verbal vote or w/e
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  10. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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    verse was a bit rushed but i have a different style i go on and off beat on purpose allot
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  11. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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    thx to all who voted so far
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  12. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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    thx dude appreciate the feedback
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  13. Free Lynx

    Free Lynx ®m legend Peter Parker

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    way different styles here


    delivery was decent on both ends,

    it all comes down to quality of punches


    i think you both had some fairly generic lines, then one or two harder hitting ones per verse

    past one said, theres no hope for this silly hoe, only dope lines u got r n ur video


    shit like that i smh at, because i think if you took a little more time you could go back and figure out a better line that fits in that scheme,


    either way u both had some good ones and show potential


    this def could go either way in the polls but my vote is for Joe


    goodluck to whomever moves on
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  14. PicholasNaugam

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    Past-One:
    I love the beat choice man, sounds really sick. Really got emotion in this track, punch lines are alright, but I think your delivery was the best part of this. When the beat switched up, I liked that as well... Never land punch was pretty played.. but I think you came pretty decent for a round 2 track..
    Joe:
    Instantly I think this is the worse beat in the world, ha but its straight, its bumpin in these headphones. Less emotional, came calm, but got your point across. “Taking loads for change, he thinks his mouths a laundry mat”, pretty straight line.. I like the switch up, no adlibs no nothing! One thing we all know is “ past is history” lol your ending was hilarious.. “ like amnesia, Jesus!! Resses Pieces”
    Pretty straight battle here, overall Im giving this battle to Buzzooka Joe.
    Good job both of you, its anyones round! PROPS!
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  15. xMetasiNx

    xMetasiNx Met-uh-siN

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    I was actually impressed with both verses, which is cool because I haven't heard anything from either of you guys before. Pace has some KILLER punches that I bet a lot of people missed because they're really subtle. Joe also had a lot of strong punches, they just didn't go as deep.

    However, I don't like how Past-One goes on and off beat, even if it's on purpose. That makes the lines sound forced to me... Like you're trying to fit too much material into one bar.

    I voted for Joe because his lines fit his beat. It was smooth the entire way through. I truly believe that Past-One is the better writer here, and if he took the time to condense his lines he wins this... well done on both parts though. Good battle!
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  16. its papi

    its papi inellek my middle name

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    Felt joe had the better lines and was a slightly better rapper then past.. Wasnt feeling the way past flowed, sounded forced to me. Only thing past had over joe was that intensity in his delivery

    Vote joe
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  17. Killa B Kilt

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    Past comes out swinging, sounding like the stronger emcee with his mean delivery, idgaf if people aint feelin his "rushed" or "offbeat" flow, i understand it. It gives it character, if you don't got your own swag then it can sometimes be generic and boring.. but I don't dig the simple rhymes. some multis are present but not as consistent as I'd prefer.
    @xMetasiNx mentioned Past's punches were more subtle- I had to go back and listen to notice this and it's true but it wasn't enough in comparison with Joe's punches for me to give Past the W.
    (respect to Past for defeating me in round 1, I didn't vote against you out of spite, was hoping you'd carry the torch a bit longer. I think with your style you have to rhyme more eg. -internal rhymes not just rhyme at end of sentence etc...)

    Vote for Buzooka Joe- I wouldn't say his punches were all amazing but he had more punches than past. He almost lost it with the first beat, It wasn't horrible but past was comin a bit more live at this point. When the nas beat kicks, Joe flows hella nice on it and edges to take the W cuz he simply came clean in all areas of judging. I think if Joe stepped up his aggression/passion/swaginometry, came with a bit more complex punches, he would become threat because he already has the template for success.

    (notice the KooL La!d faggotry neg) VVVVVVV
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  18. g.t.

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    Being off beat isn't having your own swag. Staying on beat is a basic fundamental of being a rapper, it's also a basic fundamental of vocals in music, in general. If you're not on beat, you are not making music you are just making awkward sound.

    Past I listened to this a few times. I have to say - you've got most of the tools to be a good aggressive-styled rapper. You just lack the finishing touches - the polish. Your mixing is decent, your emotion and voice is note-worthy. Just tighten it up, and you'll be a monster. Stop with the nonsense about rushing off beat as an excuse. It's not on purpose, and if it is, then you're hurting your own brand intentionally.

    Y'all both had some witty lines and some average lines. You're a dead-heat as far as lyrics. I liked the creativity, but the overall "rapping skills" of Joe I thought a bit better in this case, and he has my vote on account of nothing much else separating the two.
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  19. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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    very bizzare anyway good looks killa
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  20. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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    GOOD LOOKING OUT
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