Round 1: Con.Found.Dead vs. Duane Jackson

Discussion in 'GRB - '13 Grand Royal Audio Battle' started by J o o k, Jul 29, 2013.

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Who won?

  1. Con.Found.Dead

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  2. Duane Jackson

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  1. J o o k

    J o o k Win your battles before they’ve even been fought.

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    GRB - Grand Royal Audio Battle 2013 Rules - First Round


    $1,700.00 up for grab!


    - 1st Round Audios are DUE Monday Night August 5th at 11:59 pm EST.
    - Theme: up to 2-3+ Minutes must be about your opponent(s).
    - You must mention their BOARD name(s). Must be at least 2 minutes.
    - YOU MUST post using your board name that is registered to the match. Others will be DQ'ed.
    - NEW RULE: All participants must vote on at least six (6) other battles and post the links to the battles they voted on in their matches using ONE post to do so. If your links are not in by the time the battle closes for votes (Friday 11:59EST) then you will lose one vote for every link missing.
    - No Comments allowed on battle until both battlers have posted their battle songs. You can also post videos.
    - Aiming for votes or voting rings will not be tolerated. If my team catches wind of such you will be DQ'd without question.


    If you have any questions, comments or concerns, contact me immediately via PM or Email - Yelp001@gmail.com
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  2. Con.Found.Dead

    Con.Found.Dead Active Member

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    https://soundcloud.com/confoundrap
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    Duane, you think you're a person of interest?
    You're staying in the shadows like a personal mistress
    Crying deep inside, you're only called as a witness
    Don't play hard with me, boy, you're softer than Pintrest

    This is a coming from an un-legit white cracker
    You sound like every nondescript unsigned rapper
    It doesn't take a lot to decrypt your patterns
    I'm technical and versatile like Hewlett-Packard

    Your rhymes leave you aired less, for lack of ability
    My lines leave you airless like infertile nobility
    Michael Jackson was a king, you sing like Bill Murray
    I'm a do the world the favor and ether you like Con Murray

    It's not a pissing contest to see whose is bigger
    I'm pissing on you 'til you drown, compliments from my liver
    Piss off before my mood changes to a Chris Nolan thriller
    I'm pissed he turned the Man of Steel into a killer

    No, what I'm saying is, keep your character in check
    'Cause when you claim your masked up, gloves on I gotta interject
    How you claim to use toasters for bread
    When Joe Rogan's kissing you goodnight, before you go to bed

    You wish he'd Thai clinch you, every time you get depressed
    And hold your head in his chest, just like breast sex
    You question everything with him on his show
    Well all except him, which is why you're a joke

    'Cause Rogan's experience is your only theory
    From matters of weed, UFC, and the excretory
    Sit down, kid, and let me give you some advice
    You're not an expert because you seen an episode of VICE

    Stop before I launch a kick that makes you eat crow
    Cop the chin of Mark Hunt and then you could throw
    I'm dropping more blows then Cain did to dos Santos
    Causing you to plop like you were Olaf Alfonso

    Cause you're a bearer of error, though endeavor to better yourself
    And sever the tether of woe, but you'll never be clever enough
    However you measure the road, your effort's forgettable
    Altogether the pleasure of hearing you is unbearable
    Now your character's perishing, under weight of embarrassment
    'Cause I'm here to disparage you in ways that unloving parents do
    You don't have the endurance, to keep up with my emergence
    Your just a virgin in pain, so I'll just call you Ma Perkins
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  3. Duane Jackson

    Duane Jackson Active Member

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    let me record/mix mine right now

    ill edit it in here very soon
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    Duane Jackson Active Member

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  5. Killa B Kilt

    Killa B Kilt Member

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    sounds like a body to me... Duane beastin and im scared of him
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  6. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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    duane went beast mode real dope con had a good drop but d deff took this respect to both emmces
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  7. Newportz

    Newportz Bang Bang

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    Duane went off.....
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  8. niboswald

    niboswald Paradoxymoron

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    Well, different sounds here for sure haha

    Con.Found.Dead: clever lines and subtle puns, but your writing kind of suffered to your rather offbeat vocal delivery that landed on the wrong syllabic emphasis every other line. Your ending was more solid. I couldn't tell if your wrestling theme was relevant or just a random digression, link up some images that show Duane liking wrestling or dressed as Superman etc if those are the jibes you're going to make about him (Dwayne Johnson??)

    Duane Jackson: much stronger vocal delivery. Came with some personal background about his blog, theology studies, likeness to a Trekkie, that's the kind of stuff I'm keeping my eye out for. Brought enough to the table to take this one for me.

    Vote: Duane Jackson
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  9. Webz_Creationz

    Webz_Creationz Shutin' Shit Down

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    Duane...

    The two periods line at the jump was sick. I liked the setup and follow thru. The flow was 10000x better, beat was on point, voice was better. Duane really outshined Con on this one. Part of this is just personal preference, but I wasn't feeling Con's voice. I think you need to work on riding the beat a little more. This was pretty one sided.
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  10. Newportz

    Newportz Bang Bang

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  11. Webz_Creationz

    Webz_Creationz Shutin' Shit Down

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  12. SHITTY Bang Bang

    SHITTY Bang Bang freestyle fanatic

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    Duane...hand down.
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  13. SiegeSupreme

    SiegeSupreme Well-Known Member

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    Yeah Duane got this pretty easy. All around more polished verse. Flow, delivery, beat selection, lyrics, everything was on point and it was overall just a very dope drop. CFD came aight but his wasnt nearly as polished and his punches also werent as strong. Pretty clear win for DJ
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  14. double ML

    double ML plekz = wannabe thought police

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    this. loved the use of the fuck soundcheck beat.
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  15. Sin Skywalker

    Sin Skywalker #184 Gladiator.

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    Duane was just more polished overall. Rode the beat better. Flow was crazy. Voice was nicer. Lines was nicer.

    Wowowowow @ around 1:15 in the verse. Went the fuck offfff. Jeeesus.

    Duane got more shots he firing man. Definitely a contender in this tournament. I knew dude was gonna be nice and called that out from that drunk cypher on his site. I like Con... wanted him to bring it a little harder. Put up a little bit of a fight but Duane just went in, man.
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  16. g.t.

    g.t. RM Radio Host

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    Con - you need a lot of work. Here were my impressions, and please know it's only to help you elevate and not generic hate I don't have any of that: Your emotion was flat and it was overt reading, as opposed to being loose on the mic and being emotionally vested in your piece. You fell off beat a lot and your lines were sub par as far as being clever or well though out. I'm not going to ding you on your sound quality, but your actual presence needs a lot of work. Try to read less, emote more, and take a little more care when you're writing not to just say lines that fit but that you know were not up to standard.

    Duane got this. Just work on breath control a tiny bit. Your flow was tight and you've got a good voice for this shit, your sound quality is just fine and dandy. More hard hitting lines next round, but you did the job this round clearly. Strong work.

    Vote - duane.
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  17. Free Lynx

    Free Lynx ®m legend Peter Parker

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    first off thanks to both of you for joining and competing.

    Con, I can tell your early in the game,

    i think id like to hear you more aggressive more not giving a fuck... sounds like your trying to outflow duane and tho this is my first time hearing both of you, duane wasnt letting that happen lol
    keep at it bro


    duane u killed it, period line was illlmatic and delivery was calculating, good shit



    vote-Duane
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  18. DefKnotEmo

    DefKnotEmo G.R.G.

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    Con- I think you need to take a more aggressive approach on these kind of beats. You were too laid back. I dont think you had enough hard lines. Are you new to battling? A few good lines were sprinkled in there. But definitely keep at it. I LMFAO'ed off at the "Its just creepy bro" at the end though.


    Duane Jackson- Love the beat. Does anybody else think how he puts his words together is similar to how @Cire does? Really dope delivery. Alot of quotables: Periods in your name/build up to the change, in a tiger shirt sitting in his mom's crib, dyings easy I can coach you through, wanna be a paster this verse will make you closer to god, making asher look like pac or big, if you ever start to recover i hope you change course, etc.


    Vote=Duane Jackson
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  19. MC propaganda

    MC propaganda Well-Known Member

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    Con - beat had a nice dark ring to it. Flow was cool too, just need to work on making it a little more fluid. Need a little more confidence and umph behind it. Overall though, this wasn't bad. I like the con murray line. You had some other good material lyric wise too.

    Duane - Beat is dope and a classic. Flow is solid. What stands out the most is the clarity and polished style. You have a dope style for this type of format and the difference in the amount of polish between you two was a clear difference. It stood out alot more and hit hard.

    Gotta go with Duane on this one. But definitely good showing from both.
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  20. Vulgar

    Vulgar 80s baby

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    Con-wasn't really feeling it my man. Ya flow and voice had me struggling. Only line I can remember chuckling at is the Pintrest one.

    Duane- this nigga out for blood. Flow was crazy. The fluttering eyes line ET line. The flips on the period in his name. You just came at his whole manhood. Really looking fwd to you in later rds bruh.

    VOTE-Duane




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