Romantic Places

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  1. Lost Prophet

    Lost Prophet 11/04/2000 - 06/19/2009

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    The sandy beaches of Hawaii
    The cool waters of the Nile
    A cozy cabin in the woods
    With no one around for miles.

    The pyramids of Egypt
    The Outback down under
    A blanket by the fireplace
    While listening to thunder.

    The Eiffel Tower in Paris
    A view of Niagara Falls
    A garden full of roses
    Surrounding the Taj Mahal.

    The peaks of the Alps
    Arabian desert dunes
    The tropical Caribbean Isles
    During the month of June.

    The snow of the Arctic
    The canals of Venice
    Holding you in my arms
    While awaiting a kiss.

    These images appear in my dreams
    And I find it to be true
    That I'm content wherever it may be
    As long as I'm with you.
    test
  2. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    lovey type stuff is nice sometimes.......being in love is a nice feeling......nice lil piece you have here lp.....i like the ending.......its so true, if youre truly in love with someone it doesnt matter where you are.....there was this quote i used to like but i dont rem. who said it.....it was something like "two people in love could sleep comfortably on a knife".......i dunno, this just made me think of that........

    much love
    test
  3. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    i adore the imagery and rhyme scheme in this poem. i felt as if i was in every place you mentioned... and the sweet comment at the end was lovely...

    "These images appear in my dreams
    And I find it to be true
    That I'm content wherever it may be
    As long as I'm with you."


    i wish someone would say something like that to me...
    test
  4. Old Soul

    Old Soul Nipple Nibbler

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    Basic rhyme scheme but it worked. Nice imagery (coulda been a little bit more descriptive to really take me to each spot but it was good).

    The last stanza sums up the piece nicely.

    Nice job Prophet
    test
  5. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    ayo i liked the whole thing. the imagery was mad deep

    stay up and keep doing your thing
    test
  6. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    The name of this piece fit it completely. The title was right to the point, mos def.. As for the joint itself, very nice descriptive imagery you had used. Just simple ways of detailing how the area looked or felt, feel me? I found this to be a rather relaxing piece to think of all the harmonies of the world you may go to. My blessings..
    test
  7. ~S*T*A*R*M~

    ~S*T*A*R*M~ Goddess

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    [color=ffcc99]Sweet & short, yet expressive & rich. This is a feel good poem, and I really dug it. Very well done.
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    test
  8. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    yeah the imagery was dope and i like the last part alot. Keep doing ya thang lp

    and ya what's good with the collab?

    one luv
    test
  9. ~S*T*A*R*M~

    ~S*T*A*R*M~ Goddess

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    [color=ffcc99]lol get in line..

    And yes, props on the imagery!
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  10. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    I like the innocence in this one...This reads like one of those poems that you get on the Hallmark card and you read it to your girl and she's like "Awww...that's soo cuuute". I can dig that.
    test
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