Romantic Places

The sandy beaches of Hawaii
The cool waters of the Nile
A cozy cabin in the woods
With no one around for miles.

The pyramids of Egypt
The Outback down under
A blanket by the fireplace
While listening to thunder.

The Eiffel Tower in Paris
A view of Niagara Falls
A garden full of roses
Surrounding the Taj Mahal.

The peaks of the Alps
Arabian desert dunes
The tropical Caribbean Isles
During the month of June.

The snow of the Arctic
The canals of Venice
Holding you in my arms
While awaiting a kiss.

These images appear in my dreams
And I find it to be true
That I'm content wherever it may be
As long as I'm with you.

lovey type stuff is nice sometimes.......being in love is a nice feeling......nice lil piece you have here lp.....i like the ending.......its so true, if youre truly in love with someone it doesnt matter where you are.....there was this quote i used to like but i dont rem. who said it.....it was something like "two people in love could sleep comfortably on a knife".......i dunno, this just made me think of that........

much love

i adore the imagery and rhyme scheme in this poem. i felt as if i was in every place you mentioned... and the sweet comment at the end was lovely...

"These images appear in my dreams
And I find it to be true
That I'm content wherever it may be
As long as I'm with you."

i wish someone would say something like that to me...

Basic rhyme scheme but it worked. Nice imagery (coulda been a little bit more descriptive to really take me to each spot but it was good).

The last stanza sums up the piece nicely.

Nice job Prophet

ayo i liked the whole thing. the imagery was mad deep

stay up and keep doing your thing

The name of this piece fit it completely. The title was right to the point, mos def.. As for the joint itself, very nice descriptive imagery you had used. Just simple ways of detailing how the area looked or felt, feel me? I found this to be a rather relaxing piece to think of all the harmonies of the world you may go to. My blessings..

[color=ffcc99]Sweet & short, yet expressive & rich. This is a feel good poem, and I really dug it. Very well done.
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yeah the imagery was dope and i like the last part alot. Keep doing ya thang lp

and ya what's good with the collab?

one luv

[color=ffcc99]lol get in line..

And yes, props on the imagery!
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I like the innocence in this one...This reads like one of those poems that you get on the Hallmark card and you read it to your girl and she's like "Awww...that's soo cuuute". I can dig that.