" Rme In This Bitch " Part 2...Need Rm Heads Opinions...Please Enter

Discussion in 'Audio Producers Discussions' started by Yung Rich, May 4, 2008.

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  1. Yung Rich

    Yung Rich The Truth

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    Once again whats good RM...some of yall may know me some may not...I put together a track that I have been sitting on for a week now and just want opinions on if I should finish this or not. Please leave any form feedback possible, weather its hate or just good knowledge of how the track could or could not sound better. Enjoy.


    Demonstration : Produced By : Crunkman

    JUST HIT THE LINK [stunna]

    http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6516055
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  2. Hardkore

    Hardkore Blunts@TheBeach

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    if this is you spittin', you kind of sound like a southern version of juelz. lyrics are on the drug talk and car talk, so if you're really on that, keep doin' your thing. flow is real smooth and the delivery is real hard on this shit. i can feel the emotion when you spittin'. quality is on point like a motherfucker. i love the horns and drum pattern on this beat. the little echoing clap or snare is dooope.

    very nice track, man. i'm returning the feed. i kind of wish you had a hard chorus on this and didn't spit the whole time over the whole beat, but it's okay.
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  3. Yung Rich

    Yung Rich The Truth

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    i hear that a bit about the juelz thing but only from southern catz....thanks for the feed i know off rip that i need to change the hook so it sounds more like a hook....cause you thought i rapped all the way thru...and my dude told me already i need to do something to differentiate the hook from verse
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  4. Keystone

    Keystone I Got This...

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    not bad not bad...the beat isn't really my cup of tea but the flow is always on point...the song is put together good, quality could be a little better but solid joint my dude....ez
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  5. Yung Rich

    Yung Rich The Truth

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    i appreciate it my dude
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  6. DamoSport

    DamoSport There can be only 1

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    excatly...not my thing...but quality is there...


    Im more into backpacker shit.


    Good Job
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  7. SoulBoy

    SoulBoy Bitch wheres my Grammy

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    Shits hot to me... Dope vibe and beat. You always come with the quality music. Good presence and energy in the vocals. I would definanltly finish it. Might wanna throw a change up in there where the beat simplfies and only the brass and drums play. Would sound hot ha, ha... But dope track either way.
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  8. Covelli

    Covelli New Member

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    always brings some of the hottest songs. the beat is coo, amazing quality altogether. the vocals are on point but i expect that, i like how its mixed especially when the beat cuts out to accent certain lines. all i can say is another great post. hopefully well have another one up soon
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  9. Yung Rich

    Yung Rich The Truth

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    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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  10. JaMarcus Cock Sucker

    JaMarcus Cock Sucker BOSS

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    i like this right here....
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  11. Big Dick Black

    Big Dick Black bout a check

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    you be having some good beats

    u still gotta start making the hook stand out more...other than that u good bruh.I'm lovin the dope boy talk

    i remember we had our lil differences in opinions awhile back but i aint no hata...this shit straight
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  12. Mr.BYTCH KILLA

    Mr.BYTCH KILLA Hater Abolisher

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    "All Haters Die"...



    Nice Shyt Though Rich....Stay In The Lab.....
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  13. Yung Rich

    Yung Rich The Truth

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    no prob. fam im not like these young cats here I dont hold grudges fam...good look on the feed
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  14. Yung Rich

    Yung Rich The Truth

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    Appreciate all feed
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  15. Allurre

    Allurre New Member

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    what up bro.. delivery was clean, qualitys coo.. lyric wise, yall spoke your story! keep with the heat, keep it moving.
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  16. the exposer

    the exposer The Music Luvas

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    jus some adlibs and maybe a double on the hook and it will give the lyrics some more umpphhh...

    i likes aswell
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  17. HYPNOTIK

    HYPNOTIK Fully Loaded

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    Beats hot.

    Feeling this.. u do sound kinda like juelz.. shits hot though..

    keep doing it
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  18. Yung Rich

    Yung Rich The Truth

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    appreciate it ^^^^^^^^^^^^
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  19. ChaseNCashe

    ChaseNCashe If it aint Polo, Keep It!

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    This is straight. Sound like a freestyle though. Need to make it sound like a record.

    Tell the producer Shawty Redd said give him his drums back and stop remaking Jeezy first album.
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  20. Yung Rich

    Yung Rich The Truth

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    appreciate it
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