Rivalry - "Tonight" [DROP LINKS!!]

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  1. Rivalry

    Rivalry chyea.

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    Rivalry ft Andrew Tschudy - Tonight

    andrew tshudy is a singer for a big punk band around new jersey

    i could give a fuck about punk but i thought it might be dope to combine a little.

    he sings the hook
    test
  2. Rivalry

    Rivalry chyea.

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    uppin this bitch
    test
  3. kyILL

    kyILL Mister ILL

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    ehh.. you should probably do your own chorus' from now on. not feelin' this kid on the hook. your aight, need to put some more energy in your tracks though. your flow is steady. just need to work out a few kinks and keep makin' tracks and keep being creative.

    production is cool. quality is aight. forget the sleepers man. just do you and keep posting your stuff. don't be discouraged.

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=917080 <<hit that up if you don't mind..

    .kyill
    test
  4. Rivalry

    Rivalry chyea.

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    thanks ky.

    yeah im not feelin his hook either.

    i try to keep it real and do my own thing.
    test
  5. E_Spangler

    E_Spangler GHOstBuStaH

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    returnin the fav homey-

    beats pretty cool....damn, hook is mad different, dark shit, its cool tho....ur lyrics are pretty ill, original shit, nice imagery n multis...ur voice is original, has lots of potential...ur flow is good, just polish it up a lil more, its generally on point....delivery is strate, practice enunciatin ur words better to improve the clarity of it...mebe a lil bit more energy too....yeah, im feelin ur lyrics, creative shit man....props on the hip-hop/punk fusion lol...overall, this is a pretty nice track....keep spittin that realness man...peace
    -EGON
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  6. Rivalry

    Rivalry chyea.

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    thanks uppin
    test
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