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  1. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    word ,thanx for the feed stay up
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    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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  3. SmiRk

    SmiRk Logic or Death

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    besides what seems to be a hurried mix. liking this.

    got a serious attitude vibe through the verses. hook was a little plain, but did the job as filler. adlibs were on point, and i like the scheme you used in the 2nd verse a bit better. some of the emotion was almost too much, but never over the top.

    keep shit on point.
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  4. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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  5. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    I liked the hook on this, it flowed good to the beat. Your flow was pretty good, kinda like a young em flow a little. I think your delivery is good, but you slip at some points. I think once you get your delivery down pack you'll be real nice. Overall this was a nice song I liked it. Keep elevating...peace
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  6. Hodges

    Hodges New Age Writer

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    Yeah this was pretty good man. Yeah the way I am flow on this...but sometimes that just happens, not always deliberate. I just generally like the vibe of the track. Nothing spectacular but I mean you got your point across.

    holla
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  7. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx for the feed....
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  8. Mizz Tres

    Mizz Tres Ur woman loves me =/

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    50 cent beat.. hook is arigh.

    Your flow is ok, it sounds forced so just try to relax on the mic next time.
    Delivery is coo as well.
    You got a good voice and your presence is dope ..same with lyrics.
    I just wasnt feeling how you flowed on the track just like how Em did, i donno, defeats originality with me but if ppl feeling it ..then that's all you gotta care about.

    Someone said you sounded kinda like K-Nice I agree.. just wasnt feeling how you flowed on this one but thats just me lol.

    Good shit, keep bangin.
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  9. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx foe the feed and believe it or not I havent heard fifties version of this I jus downloaded an instrumental lol
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  10. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    upped ..........
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    upped ............
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  12. ? THA RIDD ?

    ? THA RIDD ? New Member

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    catchin u back homie sorry bout the delay....

    well beats nice...no question....and u ridin it nicely...u sound real comfy on the mic which is always good....make ya presence much betta...i was feelin the hook fits the track nicely...i would just kinda put another effect on it to make it stick out a lil more nah mean...kinda seems now likes its part of your verse unless thats what u were looking for...and its kind of a short joint but other then that homie i was feelin it propz playa....

    pzzzzz

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  13. Prime Evil

    Prime Evil Registered Abuser

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    nice beat. yeah this is pretty dope. the way you spit it reminded of eminem somewhat...not too much though.

    i peeped some of your other shit..you're pretty nice.

    p's.
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    iNKredible -!Ya Favorite Producer!-

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    the beat is tight. lyrics fit well. shit is type hot. keep bangin
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  15. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx fo rthe feed ...
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  16. KamikazeLyricist

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  17. Stash

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    chea big K im feelin this ...

    good job
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  18. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx stash ... upped
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  20. GODSCRIBE

    GODSCRIBE Meet the Retailer

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    okay now this beat is fucking redic. feeling this a lot..sound and vibe...not too hype, not too mellow. i like the chorus...does its job...flow is a bit eminemish in my opinion, but the lyrics are good. im feelin this track though...good shit
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