rhyme for rhyme biggie was crazy

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  1. makaveli21

    makaveli21 king of the world

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    Biggie Smalls is the wickedest
    Niggaz say I'm pussy? I dare you to stick your dick in this
    If I was pussy I'd be filled with syphillis
    Herpes, gonorrhea, chlamydia, gettin rid of ya
    Got it locked like the penitentiary
    Niggaz mention me for M.C. execution, who you choosin?
    The wack MC? Or the black fat MC?
    Jack Dempsey would start shakin
    All it's takin, is some marijuana and I'm makin
    MC's break fast like flapjacks and bacon
    Backspins to windmill, who's still the gin drinker
    Ill thinker - explodin when the paper hits the ink, uhh
    Take your gangsta chronicles, turn to page 666
    Holocaust, Big the merciless
    Niggaz press they luck-and they get a buttfuck-in
    Straight up the ass, raw dog with the rash
    and I don't fuck wit the condoms
    The condoms is a problem from the AIDS gettin sprayed
    Diseases, Big pleases, MC's across the seas
    is just the way I clutch my prey, hey
    I'm crazy and deranged
    Blowin niggaz out the frame, simple and plain
    But gettin back, to the black, rhinocerous of rap
    Big took a loss, how preposterous is that nigga?
    Recognize.. notorious Biggie Smalls, ninety-four, "Ready to Die"
    Y'all niggaz hold y'all heads
    Mister Cee, set it off baby-pop..
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  2. WeezyJColeFan

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    Biggie's vocal presence was the best ever but his rhyme schemes were mad overrated.

    Even a guy like J. Cole uses more multi's than Biggie did.....
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  3. makaveli21

    makaveli21 king of the world

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    lol j cole is no where no near biggie lyrically

    that verse i just posted was nothing but multi's
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  4. WeezyJColeFan

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  5. makaveli21

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    lol they were barley any multi's in there im convinced u have no idea what u talking about.
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  6. WeezyJColeFan

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    This is for them street n*ggas to them deep n*ggas,
    Them politics, them geek n*ggas,
    To them freak b*tches that swallow dick, its real.
    Or them sheet n*ggas ain’t proud of shit and still,
    Even them bleak n*ggas without a cent could feel.
    I never sleep n*gga, I gotta get them mills
    I never cheat n*gga, my heart is with the ville.
    When n*ggas greet n*ggas with hollow tips, but chill.
    You’ll never reach n*gga, I got an itch to kill.
    Word, a n*gga bringing heat to the third
    My shit in every street, like the curb.
    So b*tches wanna meet cuz I’m deep with my words,
    So them n*ggas wanna peep like a perv,



    swallow dick it's real - proud of shit and still - without a cent could feel - gotta get them mills - heart is with the ville - hollow tips but chill - got an itch to kill

    ^^^To go along with those multi's at the end of his bars, he uses INNERS line after line rhyming street-deep-geek-freak-sheet-bleak-sleep-cheat-greet-reach before "nigga". Not impressive on its own of course, but remember, those are only inners to go along with the other end-of-bar multi's I posted above, and when you combine the 2 schemes line for line, it's a PERFECT verse structure-wise, especially when you consider that it all fits together so well

    then the last 4 bars:

    word - heat to the third - street like the curb - meet - deep with my words - peep like a perv




    Barely any multi's??? He rhymed a total of 60 syllables in those 12 bars. That's a 5-syllable rhyming average per bar for those 12 bars.

    YOU have no clue what you're talking about, it's OFFICIAL now
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  7. WeezyJColeFan

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    Biggie's verse is mostly rhyming 1-3 syllables at a time

    He can't group phrases together to create a longer syllable-rhyming chain like J. Cole can

    i.e. (swallow dick it's real - proud of shit and still - without a cent could feel - gotta get them mills - heart is with the ville - hollow tips but chill - got an itch to kill)

    ^^^This is 7 straight bars of maintaining the same multiple syllable rhyming chain at the end, while using a 1-syllable inner before every "nigga". It's a set structure that is extremely difficult to set up and have it all make sense and flow perfectly.

    This takes more talent to do than the multi's you displayed in the OP.

    Lesson learned?
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  8. WeezyJColeFan

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    Here are Biggie's multi's laid out:

    wickedest
    dick in this
    syphillis

    chlamydia
    rid of ya

    tentiary
    mention me

    execution
    you choosin?

    wack MC
    fat MC?
    Jack Dempsey

    shakin
    takin
    makin
    break
    bacon

    mill
    still
    gin drinker
    Ill thinker
    ink

    chronicles...666
    Holocaust.....merciless

    press they luck
    get a buttfuck

    ass
    rash

    condoms
    problem

    Diseases
    pleases
    seas

    just the way
    clutch my prey, hey

    deranged
    frame
    plain

    back
    black
    nocerous rap
    posterous is that




    See the difference with what J. Cole did?
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  9. makaveli21

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    u a idiot because u missed like most of the multi's not only did
    all the syllables sound the same but they had the same syllable stress
    and was on point with the syllable count u just exposed yourself and also
    rhyming n1gga for the most of the verse isn't impressive that shows u have limited vocabulary.
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  10. Ace the Prophet

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    lmao....I see J.Cole and Biggie as similar. Both have amazing mic presence and both flow very well. Both have overrated lyrics as in they're not super complex, nor super amazing, but HOW they say everything they do is what makes them. Their deliveries are extremely unique. It's why Big's remembered as a legend and why Cole's the hottest up and comer to most rap heads in years (especially since most were off the Drake bandwagon before TML dropped)
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    Having fun, you two?
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    THISSSSSSSSSSSSSS^^^^^^^

    Man Biggie could make a single word sound better/more memorable than some whole verses.
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    no it's not fun i like talking rhymes but not with people that
    have no idea about what they talking about .
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  14. makaveli21

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    to each his own i disagree though biggie was super complex lyrically
    the only people i would put over him lyrically is pun eminem nas pac and g rap that's it
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  15. Ace the Prophet

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    You'd put Pac over Biggie lyrically? Quite the opposite of what the majority thinks when they compare the two. Biggie was lyrically better, Pac had raw emotions and a deeper message
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  16. makaveli21

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    yea i would pac over biggie lyrically it's just popular opinion that people say biggie was better pac lyrically but they never tell u why though they just he was but when u actually look at the rhymes on paper pac was farrrrrrrrr better lyrically
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    biggie music is boring and sucks

    he is overrated
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  18. WeezyJColeFan

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    Lyrically and emotionally, J. Cole is better than Biggie

    Biggie never made a "Lost Ones" or "Breakdown" or "Lights Please"

    Obviously, Biggie destroys J. Cole in charisma, delivery, presence, versatility and is the better overall rapper.
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  19. makaveli21

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    big verses on vitcory is better then anything j cole has done.
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    You're both idiots sitting there like cunts.
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