Revenge

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    (Whispered)
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me

    Verse
    Acceptance? Why the fuck cant I have that
    Instead I’m the peon kid, always being laughed at
    The jackass, all the other kids couldn’t stand T.a.C
    that’s why I always went to school fucked on Xanax
    They’re all lookin at me (lookin at me)
    They’re all laughin at me (laughin at me)
    Got me acting Tacky, slapping back queens
    Attacking crack fiends, lashing out is my vaccine
    Ill never be happy, forever scrapping, don’t doubt that
    No Andre or Big Boi, but I was an outcast
    Never about that fitting in or getting around crap
    I found that the cool kids should be bound, gagged
    Beat down, dragged, no wonder girls were often scared of me
    They never cared for me cuz I never cared for their popularity
    Ahh, Fuck! I got em all shook, I’m snapping
    They all lookin at me, QUIT LOOKIN AT ME

    Hook
    Insanity brandished me
    Bashing these faggot G’s after cheese
    You fags’ll be writing sins, I’ll write tragedies
    Getting revenge on whoever laughed at me
    Don’t try to act like we friends
    Tryna kick it on the weekends
    No words need to be said
    You need to bleed dead, I’m out for revenge

    (Whispered)
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me

    Verse
    Its time for revenge, its what I have ta do
    show up strapped to school, attack and move
    knife in hand, gat to use, clappin fools
    If only Ted Bundy woulda had this muse
    I enter my first class, sit next to the worst fag
    Reachin into my book bag, this jerk asked
    “You reaching into your purse, drag?”
    I pull the gun out “What now? Get the fuck down”
    Girls screamin, “You tryna get done now?”
    Turn to the chick in front of me “Pull your skirt down
    How many times did you hurt me? Its your turn to hurt now”
    Shoving my dick in her, full of truthful hate
    First victim of the day would face a brutal rape
    The girl I pursued to date who said soon she’d move away
    is getting it in the poon and face before I blew away
    her cute face, I blew a load and made her taste
    placed the pistol and laid to waste saying “this aint your place”
    grabbed a gatorade, pacing, makin decisions
    takin the image of a degraded shit head and flippin it
    “time to put an end to the bull shit world you’re livin in”
    I walked out the classroom, shooting everyone I pass
    You run, I blast, you’re done, I laugh
    School cop? The fools shot
    Math teacher? You wont pass either
    Best friend? Stabbed in the neck, end
    Lunch lady? You’re fucked baby
    (Whispered)
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    Ran out, motherfucker, I shot your mom
    I needed a car, stole one from a soccer mom
    little kid in the back seat, somone was meant to love it
    pulled over and cut it up from neck to stomach
    punched it when it cried, left it as dead and nothin
    back of my mind, what I should do next is fuck it
    decided against it, that instant I seen an innocent old lady
    urges and desires go crazy as I go approach and told Sady
    get in the car before I run you the fuck over
    as she climbed in I put my knife in her dumb shoulder
    threw her out on the freeway, got alotta cops to snuff
    ditch em, now where can I kill alotta schmucks
    drove down I-5 to Central Cali, next to the aquadux
    I seen cars roll by, blasted and shot them up
    got on up, pulled em out, snappin their knees
    breakin their legs thinking if they should get left to bleed
    I tied them up, had them bound and set
    threw them in the water so they could drown to death
    my profound revenge has spread, this fuckers heartless
    but before I finish I have one other target
    hop in the car, get headed straight for Los Ang
    thinking this fuckin cunt needs to get got bad
    my ex internet girlfriend, the reason Id start smokin
    cunt cheated on me, left me heart broken
    I pull up at her crib, its midnight, kick the door
    I run inside, gun on thigh, I get the whore
    showing her my knife “I’ma rip you apart ya see”
    but now that were apart, youre gonna become a part of me
    cutting her into pieces, meeting her death
    disposing of her body by eating the flesh
    leaving a bleeding mess, I now need a rest
    parking the car, I try to sleep but then
    I see the sirens coming, ten squad cars
    seeing now prison and death would be not far
    I put the gun to my head to meet my death
    I cock the gun and then I said

    (Whispered)
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me

    Hook
    Insanity brandished me
    Bashing these faggot G’s after cheese
    You fags’ll be writing sins, I’ll write tragedies
    Getting revenge on whoever laughed at me
    Don’t try to act like we friends
    Tryna kick it on the weekends
    No words need to be said
    You need to bleed dead, I’m out for revenge



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    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1243859-fireworks-aced.html
    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1243826-thug-life-crime-pays-muthafucka-all-day.html
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  2. Radical Sun

    Radical Sun New Member

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    You one sick bastid.
    Not quoting anything - whole thing was sick - literally.
    Nice
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  3. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Lmfao

    thanks man
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  4. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    hahah...damn dude. really lashing out here, lol...was pretty good. Flow was cool, maybe could be tightened up in some places but fuck it. To me some parts may have seen a little forced with what you decided to rhyme, but it's all good. Overall was nice man. Just be sure to never actually do this shit, haha

    And yeah, i'm down for that collab. Get at me with the idea again and I'll try to get it going soon
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  5. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    haha, oh, i intend to...jk


    but uppin
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  6. JASON ANTHONY

    JASON ANTHONY White Devil

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    Should have let me in on this one, fucker.

    You know where mind resides.

    Good shit. Get a mic, you faggot.
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  7. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    this shit was tight homey u gettin better at this keep it comin
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  8. Arsenic P

    Arsenic P A.K.A. PROPOSITION P

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    yo i want in on the remix like that hook and the verse's were hot to hit me up if you tryinto do sumthin
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  9. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    for sure. hit me with a 16. ill get jason on it too
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  10. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    t.a.c. aka bomb.com

    nice work bro
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  11. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    thanks homie
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  12. miscreant

    miscreant 1996 was the shit

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    Nice piece man.

    Pretty good storytellin, the image was vivid.

    Flow was nice readin it. Didn't try it over a beat.

    I liked the whole lot but this was nice...

    Turn to the chick in front of me “Pull your skirt down
    How many times did you hurt me? Its your turn to hurt now”
    Shoving my dick in her, full of truthful hate
    First victim of the day would face a brutal rape
    The girl I pursued to date who said soon she’d move away
    is getting it in the poon and face before I blew away
    her cute face, I blew a load and made her taste
    placed the pistol and laid to waste saying “this aint your place”

    and this...

    Ran out, motherfucker, I shot your mom
    I needed a car, stole one from a soccer mom
    little kid in the back seat, somone was meant to love it
    pulled over and cut it up from neck to stomach
    punched it when it cried, left it as dead and nothin
    back of my mind, what I should do next is fuck it
    decided against it, that instant I seen an innocent old lady
    urges and desires go crazy as I go approach and told Sady
    get in the car before I run you the fuck over
    as she climbed in I put my knife in her dumb shoulder
    test
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