Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by Tacky Jones, Nov 25, 2010.
lol @ the tag.
join the rstl, jase.
knock off shadow from the champ spot ...
Man... with Stace sick and things picking up at work it just doesn't fit in my schedule at the moment. I've been wanting to though.
First verse came on strong, it had a lot of thought into it, too much thought. The first 5 bars were settin it off then it seemed to rely on the imagery of torture rather than the flow of it ya kno.
2nd verse was str8 too, it flowed all the way thru gud, but not as much thought put into it. I do like the irony of shootin up da gay pride parade in a thong, wouldn't advise it however(the dress n thong part!)
Overall it was a decent read, the hook wasn't a fav and "there all lookin at me" might fit on an audio but not on a text. Too much repetition. Ya'll seem like a good team tho, keep at it.
s/n when ya'll get a chance hit my link(s) up in my sig and let me kno wut ya think. They're audios I don't really post in open mic anymore but I don't forget my roots, and it'd be appreciated if ya rtf. Gud Lookn.
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