Revenge Remix Ft. Jason Anthony

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Hook
    Insanity brandished me
    Bashing these faggot G’s after cheese
    You fags’ll be writing sins, I’ll write tragedies
    Getting revenge on whoever laughed at me
    Don’t try to act like we friends
    Tryna kick it on the weekends
    No words need to be said
    You need to bleed dead, I’m out for revenge

    (Whispered)
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me

    Jason

    Why you lookin at me? Ain’t got a reason, do you?
    I didn’t kill your family, cook em and feed em to you,
    I didn’t rape your girlfriend and stick a tazer inside her,
    I didn’t wrap the bitch in razor wire, and set her face on fire,
    Well… I did, but what chu wanna do about it?
    I severed your trigger finger, how you gonna shoot without it?
    You gonna go to the funeral and stand there in your stupid outfit,
    In front of the mass grave similar to the Jew’s in Auschwitz,
    TaC’s got nothing on what I’m about ta do da you,
    I come to your family’s funeral too AND sit in the same pew as you,
    Later you come home and swear that ya heard somethin…
    And find your de-boned cat stuffed in your dead dog like a turducken,
    Sure as fuckin shit, I’m sittin there in the recliner,
    While you stair at your cat-dog screamin “this isn’t fair,” right beside her,
    This whole experience was special, and I WILL cherish it,
    But first, I think I’ll iron your shirt… while you’re still wearin it.

    Hook
    Insanity brandished me
    Bashing these faggot G’s after cheese
    You fags’ll be writing sins, I’ll write tragedies
    Getting revenge on whoever laughed at me
    Don’t try to act like we friends
    Tryna kick it on the weekends
    No words need to be said
    You need to bleed dead, I’m out for revenge

    (Whispered)
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me
    They’re all lookin at me, lookin at me

    T.a.C

    Jus ask GLAAD, I keep em stressin dog
    Shot up the gay pride parade wearing a dress and thong
    Best of all I really do this, forget a song
    Stuck my pipe in your grannys mouth, bitch, bless the bong
    I’m wild now, wildin out, I don’t care of what I know not
    I’m violent, BLOW, with a violent scowl, I’m scared of my own thoughts
    Takin nose shots of coke rocks in the dope spot with no cash
    Breakin a whole lot of hope off when I go knock your ho ass
    Jason, I’m heading north, put me up in your spare room
    A hole I’ll stare through your wall, pop in and do more than scare you
    Let me prepare you by telling you the doctor wont repair you
    Cuz I’m keeping your eyes, brain, skin and whats left of your hair too
    Your neighbor gets decapitated, had em waitin at stall paces
    While I grab a jaded blade and place it under the neck of a person of all races
    Motherfucker, I’ve snapped, been deranged all of my life
    Now it’s time for the big pay back, as I follow my Columbine Mind

    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1249593-best-one-so-far.html
    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1249565-please-read-short-verse.html
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  2. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    I like the first verse much better. I like the sick deranged flavor, the iron shirt line, and the use of the word "turducken". You can't go wrong with turducken.

    As far as TAC's verse...it was mediocre. Nothing too special about it. Good flow with the steady rhymes within the verses, but the message didn't move me like "turducken".

    I'm sure this is a good song in audio though. Holla at me what y'all record it, I wanna put a verse on it.
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  3. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    This was a nice verse keep bringin da heat
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  4. miscreant

    miscreant 1996 was the shit

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    Why you lookin at me? Ain’t got a reason, do you?
    I didn’t kill your family, cook em and feed em to you,
    I didn’t rape your girlfriend and stick a tazer inside her,
    I didn’t wrap the bitch in razor wire, and set her face on fire,

    ^nice opening

    last couple bars closed nicely too

    didn't try it over a beat, but jus readin it seems it'll flow alright

    im wit omega, first verse was better than the 2nd
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  5. Radical Sun

    Radical Sun New Member

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    You guys are crazy bastards - I liked the remix.
    Think I liked the original a little more though.
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  6. JASON ANTHONY

    JASON ANTHONY White Devil

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    Thanks for the feedback. Unless TaC's momma buys him a mic for christmas though I don't think there will be a recording.

    Get a mic, TaC. It's your birthday. Ask pops.
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  7. bagglad

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    wow this shit was sick dude enjoyed this have to have a certain frame of mind to write like this dude keep bringing it
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  8. MCKuShhhhhh

    MCKuShhhhhh New Member

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    sick verses all the way around.. even if the second guy admitted to wearing thongs and shit.
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  9. JASON ANTHONY

    JASON ANTHONY White Devil

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    uppin cus my verse gives me a boner
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  10. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    lmao @ jason anthony for that boner response. Shit was pretty sick.

    JA- Your verse was dope. I liked the way it opened up. Everything flowed nicely and stuck hard with me. Really dug reading it.

    TaC- Verse was cool. I'm really diggin the rhyme schemes. Flow was pretty nice. I'm thinking some parts mighta been a bit stretched but you probably make that fit to a beat (I say that shit like all the time when shit seems stretched so nevermind it, lol). You always come good on that "insane" shit, lol.

    Cool shit as always. Keep it up. 1
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  11. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    thanks for responding Ace. how you been man?
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  12. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    Haha, I've been good man. Just chillin. Went pretty much everywhere for the holidays with my girl, lol. So that was good.

    Completely off-topic: You see Cargo and Tulo are locked in with the Rockies for a good while? The Giants are fucked in the years to come if both stay healthy, lol
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  13. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    i saw that

    Cargo scares me more. Tulo can't put together a full season. he always gets hurt.

    Cargo shoulda been MVP. i bet the A's feel stupid as shit.

    but hey, good pitching beats good hitting. and were the muh'fuggin world champs, nigga
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  14. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    Cargo is ridiculous. He didn't get MVP cuz of Coors Field's "Inflated Stats" cuz of the altitude and how he didnt do as well on the road, but the dude hit nearly .400 at home. Like stfu, 400 is 400 and he nearly got the Triple Crown, lol. Tulo's here through 2020 though, so one healthy season from both and I'm stoked, lol.

    On a side note....I've always thought Brian Wilson looks racist as fuck, lol. Hate when he comes in against us, but he seriously does, lol. Just a random thought, haha
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  15. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    lmfao. B Weezy reminds me of my cousin's husband. similar personalities. though i didnt know Wilson is a MENSA genius. he's the man

    it'd be interesting to see what Cargo would do with another team. throw him in AT&T for a full season and see the numbers he puts up.

    last season, pretty late in the year Cargo hit a homer like 10 feet from me. turned out to be his 30th of the season and he was trying to get the ball back. made me wish i actually made an attempt to catch it. coulda got an autographed bat or somethin.
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  16. JASON ANTHONY

    JASON ANTHONY White Devil

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    I just like this song.
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  17. Nu'maaN

    Nu'maaN Anu'naki, Nuqqa.

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    jason.
    you started off fucking strong.
    had me amped, and angry, but then the verses became longer, and the vibe vanished.

    tee.
    your opener was killer.
    the rest seemed like shock-value filler ...

    [turn] ...
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  18. JASON ANTHONY

    JASON ANTHONY White Devil

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    I agree that I started and ended strong with a bit of forced rhyme in the middle. Thanks for pointing it out.

    I like how Nu comes in here and actually critiques the shit rather than placing the typical "Good shit. Keep it up. 1" circle jerk remark.
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  19. Radical Sun

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    Most of the ppl that up sh!t in here only do it so their new post don't get locked...kinda like the MODs that post sh!t in here.
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  20. JASON ANTHONY

    JASON ANTHONY White Devil

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    I never post shit in here. I just tell people what I really think of their rhymes. I cypher.

    No Good is gone. I don't think threads will be getting closed anymore.
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