Resilient vs. Jai Z (Round 2)

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  1. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    First to 5 Votes
    3-0 = KO
    No Flips - Straight 1 Round battle.
    Verses due Sunday 11:59 PM Est Time

    People who can not vote in here:
    Deth Stryque, Chase Murda, Brown Jesus, Strike2

    Make sure you check in so I don't waste more time on you to write a verse.
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  2. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Check n.
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  3. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Whn I say bars over bullshit.. thatz a fraction
    get on ur Math, so I can put this Calicoe into action
    My gatz zooted up, popping Ecs wth the trigga
    Jst to "fat bitch, bungy cord, snap on this nigga"
    Testing me? Nope! Im schooling Res, peep
    Ima Kindergarten Cop, puttin this Wee kid to sleep
    A dictionary wth flowz, by definition? I mean
    These hard jabz Fantastic, 4? Sweet dreamz whn u catch that Thing
    U on ur Grizzly shit? Pause.. itz nota game, Sorry
    I guarantee u hava bullet-headin for u.. Steve Harvey!
    Exploding ur mental, emplodingz ur kin folk
    Wack ass, bodybag! Missy Elliot video
    U Powder Puff tough.. that stuff'll leave u bent
    If u ever spit fire, Res ud b a circuz event
    So spit that "fire".. I doubt that ur ammo carryz heat
    U buck shotz nigga? Bitch plz u buck teeth!
    Res nice? No relation.. he could nvr come hard
    I'll turn this ring nto a blackhole and eat RMz Star
    He aint ill hez sick of me, he'll die, cz Im holding
    If he spit his shit, the crowd'll literally get going[/QUOTE]
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  4. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Im on my phone sex shit, grabbing checkz
    He aint shit like me.. aint hada hotline yet
    Ur stylez off, no light switch, goodnight this bitch, check it
    We hear ur bars and think of Martin quotez .. "GETTA STEPPIN!"
    Jai's barz Insanity, and ur not fit for this life
    Uza fall back nigga, Im catching this BODY tonite
    If Rez rock fly gear, this bird couldnt stunt me
    His lifez ass, I wouldnt pen that tale ona donkey
    Heard ur a track star.. bobbing and weaving wont do
    And thatz y u will nvr D, Jai.. get the Clue?
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  5. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    My phone wont let me put my verse as a whole. Can a mod plz copy and paste my 2 versez as one plz?


    Take out "the quote" wrd plz and add this line after:

    ........................"If he spit his shit, the crowd will literally get going"

    And thn copy&paste the 2nd half of my verse after that line.^^
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  6. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    It's okay about your verse in 2 posts. Doesn't bother me, and it should bother the readers.

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    You failed Hip Hop 101 in your first battle against me..
    This is Hip Hop 100 - No credits for this course...

    Listen..
    That shit your posted is trash, we know you’re retarded..
    My flow is the harshest..
    I didn’t have to read your lines to know that you posted some garbage..
    ‘n I’ve seen your pic, Weez will rip this sleezy bitch..
    Feel the whip; she’s dyke ‘cause no one wants to give Z their dick..
    “I’ll squeeze the clip, fuck that; Pulling triggers so duck back..”
    ^ That’s my impersonation of your verse, something else that you suck at..
    You’re the worst in this rap tip, your verses are wack bitch..
    I beat you, ‘n I didn’t know you were a chick in our first match..
    You’re getting worked up, take a few breaths to calm, boo..
    You have Deth riding you, but Weez is bringing Death upon you..
    Shoulder to shoulder, Jai .. We know who’s better..
    I beat you already..
    But you come back for more like you’re in a homeless shelter
    This fight’s the worst, I’m hungry - you barely ignite a thirst..
    ‘n if you want a chance to win - have someone write your verse..
    Why the fuck you respond, Jai? You’re fucking beyond gay..
    ‘cause the only Jai Z we listen to has been fucking Beyonce..
    A flow by Weez is lucid, see the truth it’s not me being stupid..
    But I beat already - Does this mean we need to be exclusive?
    You ain’t toppin’ mine I peeped your sig, listen to this veteran boo..
    ‘cause bottom line, you’re weak as shit - that’s how many times I’m better than you..
    But why’s this dyke spastic? Try rapping harder or die faster..
    You vs. Gramur?
    He no showed in your pic battle because he probably died laughing..
    But "that’s a nice profile pic” - I’m sure you heard the saying..
    You’re a virgin, Jai..
    ‘n apparently can pull off lookin’ like the male version of Wayne..
    You’re fake and not worth disses, I’m blatantly optimistic..
    You’re battling me for a challenge - I’m waiting for competition..
    I’m so bananas, I’ll kill you, then show up to the open casket..
    My knowledge was born - even with the use of prophylactics
    I slammed this dyke the first time, Jai go back inside
    Didn’t you learn you lesson last time?
    …Still you came back like a battered wife..

    Class Dismissed...


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  7. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    vote - resilient, for obvious reasons.

    jai, i dug the vibe you had, but unfortunately the content didn't quite match the raw and rugged feeling i got when reading your verse. i mean, the style felt as if you were going in when in truth, you were not. nothing was notable, and that's why you lose. nothing was memorable. there was nothing that made me want to quote it and give you credit for producing a great idea. that's what this is about. how many good lines can you produce and own at the end of the day versus your opponent. instead, you just had a bunch of ghetto shit and weak punches. fantastic four line was corny. steve harvey and missy elliot lines were funny, but also corny and poorly executed. i mean, talk about forced—emplodingz ur kin folk?? i'll move on.

    resilient, you come off as quite the cocky fellow, and i know why. you're atop who's left at this site. you've been here a long time, and finally you stand out amongst the rest. i caution you that it comes off as silly to boast around so many bottom feeders. many weak spots in this verse, but overall, you actually had lines that i could rock to. some decent disses mixed with a lot of weak disses. and i wonder if you actually saw her picture, because it's so easy to go in on jai after seeing that and your first line about her picture was awful. give her dick line was stupid, nothing clever or new about that. squeeze the clip line was the best for me. straight clowning, and it worked so well because her verse was so much of that. i've never seen more z's in a verse. death upon you was decent. the concept was nothing nice, but it was a well structured couplet. a few more here and there. good flow too.

    that's that.
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  8. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    Thanks for the crit. I was referring to her RM profile pictures of her.
    Uppin for more votes!?
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  9. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    There are many who would dispute this contention about and characterization of the text battlers on this site; but I merely find it mildly interesting that you characterize the rest of the [ presumably text battlers ] on the site as being bottom feeders.

    I'd like to see what you would call top flight or even "just" good bars. Especially from the Emcee Battle or RBL text arena. From ANY era.
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  10. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    Stop posting in here. Take it to the hookups. Me and jai are trying to have a battle.
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  11. MrFlux001

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    Jai - fantastic 4, circus event. That's about it. Fantastic 4 line wasn't the best play on words. Circus event line was your best. I can see where you tried to throw something at Res but it didn't even raise an eyebrow.

    Res - fucking beyonce, waiting for competition. decent lines and coupled with the better flow and setup's, a more solid verse overall. I wouldn't say it competely blew Jai out of the water though.

    V - Res.
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  12. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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  13. Strike2

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    Not close Im sorry

    Jai
    I think Q said it best when he said Jai wrote in a manor like she was dropping some hot shit, when the content was pretty bland, unoriginal and most importantly for me in a battle not really that damaging to the opponent. Never really seemed like she was hurting Res. I guess I should give you a few points for style, but the flow wasn`t really consistent (or at least didnt seem that way to me) If you`d like to improve I suggest you really focus on hurting your opponents feelings instead of sounding all internet gangsta on people. It just doesn`t really have impact in textbattles.

    Res
    Style and flow were cool, came of a little stretched in a few instances, but I doubt I can critique you on much you don`t already know. The reason you get the vote is that you had more then a few disses and punches I could enjoy. I didnt see anything that wow`d me but you really didn`t need to either and I think it shows, cause Ive seen you drop more heat. Still I liked the latter part, it had some pretty cool lines and easily won you the match... Still if at all possible you should battle opponents who would kill you for the weaker lines you used and make you try harder...
    just my 2 cents regardless of any criticisme its good to see people still try to be active

    vote Res
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