*RePost* Pimpin Round

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  1. TheRapGame

    TheRapGame Playa Generation

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    Pimpin Round

    I seen this fine bitch,
    across the room from me,
    sittin at bar,
    lookin at me,
    I slipped on my sly smile,
    and stepped up to the plate to say,

    Hey bitch,
    lets go to my place,
    dont matter yer race,
    i dont hate,
    lets just play,
    its all the same,
    no matter the way,
    each guys the same,
    wanting to go all the way,
    no matter the time of day,
    no it doesnt matter the way,
    we all play,
    females are so great,
    its all just a game,
    the hardest game to play,
    but i’ll win either way,
    i get it all in the end,
    either way it should be great,
    not matter the state u in,
    no matter the bitch u is,
    just remember the place u in,
    and come back again,
    24/7 if u wish,
    u can be my bitch,

    Believe me,
    if you know any tricks,
    you can teach me,
    with how you go down,
    you were meant to work for me,
    the perfect hoe,
    this aint no joke,
    yer working fer me,
    lets go on down to the boulavard,
    get ready to work,
    right to yer spot,
    and put on a show,
    act like a hoe,
    you know how it goes,
    i know yer a pro,
    i just want the dough,
    now yer working fer me,
    the master pimp,
    yea thats me,
    always working the streets,
    takin the dough,
    from all these hoes,
    when darkness is closin in.

    doesnt start off the best but i just wrote it so it need's some work tell me what u think
    test
  2. illpoetical

    illpoetical raising the bar everyday

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    i liked it, it flowed pretty nice
    test
  3. eatemup

    eatemup New Member

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    yeah it did have a str8 flow to it , the subject kinda made me laugh but nice work
    test
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