| Renaíssançe | vs URA IV

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  1. Kapital

    Kapital RIP epiC

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    10 Barz
    First to three votes (must give reason for vote)
    Drop by midnight tonight

    good luck ... this is my first ever battle.
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  2. | Renaíssançe |

    | Renaíssançe | Ar†is†iç Revivä|

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    It ain't nothin' for me to end some bullshit quick/
    'Cause I'm guessin' you spent less time on your flow and more on your sig/
    To you it might seem that rhymes are dreams/
    My bars are autobiographical, you just mimic what you see on BET/
    This is based on a consensual agreement/
    These cats know my mental is vehement, yours is fabricated and based on dreamin'/
    10 bars penned with haste, but the 'cause ain't urgent/
    I know UR A doomed coward with nowhere to go like Iraqi insurgents/
    Fuck it, my morals force me to quit this verse/
    Dude gives oral and makes it clap faster that a southern church...

    Blah
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  3. | Renaíssançe |

    | Renaíssançe | Ar†is†iç Revivä|

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    Done. I work at 4, so I had to do it. And that last line...."that" should be "than". But whatever. G'luck UR. One.
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  4. Kapital

    Kapital RIP epiC

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    just got home from school ...

    This guys a schizophrenic thinking he's someone he aint/
    Renaissance is a fake repping an era 6 centuries to late/
    Hot? That verse was so flamin I cant think straight/
    Ima be forced to expose my weight like fat bitches on spring break/
    My text brings fate leave you split and twisted like a Philly twirled/
    Winning this battle? Snap out your fantasy this isn't Disney World/
    This emcee's not visible 10 lines no quotes just filling holes like 50's girl/
    Gin and Heni hurled are the only shots this kid will let loose/
    You gave it your best dude vets choose to call it/
    This cat stays attached to ass like used wallets/
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  5. | Renaíssançe |

    | Renaíssançe | Ar†is†iç Revivä|

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    Ha Ha...ok. Uppin' for votes, what's good??
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  6. Kapital

    Kapital RIP epiC

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    up for votes ...
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  7. Jay ReEz

    Jay ReEz Ridin' fo' da WestSide VV

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    Ren came wit a few nice lines, couple were eh but a coo verse...better in begining, fell off towards end...
    URa killed it with the fat girls on spring break line...opener was nicer, rest of the verse was ok...more consistant than rens..


    Vote/Ura
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  8. Kapital

    Kapital RIP epiC

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    1-0 uppin ...
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  9. CrYsTaL ShAdOw

    CrYsTaL ShAdOw ♪♀♥♣•‼!!

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    ren u had a good flow but that was bout itmu had like maybe 2 punches and they werent
    good

    ura u had a good flow some ok punches

    vote-ura IV ,both need to elevate....
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  10. Kapital

    Kapital RIP epiC

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    appreciate the votes ... uppin 2-0
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  11. Kapital

    Kapital RIP epiC

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  12. Menso

    Menso Go Lakers!

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    Ren

    It ain't nothin' for me to end some bullshit quick/
    'Cause I'm guessin' you spent less time on your flow and more on your sig/

    played.. but meh..

    To you it might seem that rhymes are dreams/
    My bars are autobiographical, you just mimic what you see on BET/

    blah..

    This is based on a consensual agreement/
    These cats know my mental is vehement, yours is fabricated and based on dreamin'/

    meh..

    10 bars penned with haste, but the 'cause ain't urgent/
    I know UR A doomed coward with nowhere to go like Iraqi insurgents/

    ehh. alright..

    Fuck it, my morals force me to quit this verse/
    Dude gives oral and makes it clap faster that a southern church...

    blah..


    URA IV

    This guys a schizophrenic thinking he's someone he aint/
    Renaissance is a fake repping an era 6 centuries to late/

    heh..

    Hot? That verse was so flamin I cant think straight/
    Ima be forced to expose my weight like fat bitches on spring break/

    lol..

    My text brings fate leave you split and twisted like a Philly twirled/
    Winning this battle? Snap out your fantasy this isn't Disney World/

    meh..

    This emcee's not visible 10 lines no quotes just filling holes like 50's girl/
    Gin and Heni hurled are the only shots this kid will let loose/

    umm.. ok.

    You gave it your best dude vets choose to call it/
    This cat stays attached to ass like used wallets/

    blah. gay jokes are gay.


    Vote.. URAIV.. some better lines, a couple decent punches. Not bad at all if this is your first battle ever. Return the favor when Mystic Pharrow drops, but i think hes gonna no show, so atleast drop a crit.
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  13. Part II

    Part II The next best thing

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    Ehhh...

    v-UA

    These wasn't much to enjoy but it' had its moments, Renai, you need to work on your flow aka Rythm & ryhme Scheme a bit kiko. some lines flowed well & others I had to re read just to understand IE:

    "To you it might seem that rhymes are dreams/
    My bars are autobiographical, you just mimic what you see on BET/"

    ^^Thats was choppy

    Dunno.. like C.Shadow said elevate.

    Keep bangin'
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  14. Kapital

    Kapital RIP epiC

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    4-0 ... good battle 1
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