reflexx - Dead End Street

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  1. Reflexx

    Reflexx [insert cool thing here]

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  2. Noodles

    Noodles The People's Champion

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    latest post in months

    and the last for months..



    flow is pretty nice..

    but you wrecked yourself with the fat stuff... Lol

    LOL

    silly

    keep going, im bout to go to NYC

    so i made it brief

    adios!
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  3. 2-tone

    2-tone New Member

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  4. Hibernation

    Hibernation Well-Known Member

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    Lmao, The Fucking Dead Line Was Dope

    U Have Nice Lyrics An A Pretty Good Flow, Once U Polish Ur Shit Up, Ull Be Mad Nice
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  5. Reflexx

    Reflexx [insert cool thing here]

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    upping for more feedback i guess.

    i'll get at you 2-tone.
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  6. TOOBxSOCKS

    TOOBxSOCKS Code of the Samurai

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    aight this beats tight as shit...aint heard it in a long time...shit used to be played, but i aint heard it in so long, dont seem played no more....nice lines in this shit..lyrics are pretty good...ya flows prety smooth, seems kinda forced at times though...delivery aight....
    overall shits straight...

    hit me back dogg: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=936319
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  7. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    Lol woah this is nice..

    You should enter the next RMC battle competition..

    Punchlines galore in this one..

    Flow was dopeness, lyrics heavy, delivery nice..

    I see you killing it in the battles son.

    Overall niceness
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  8. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    lol why you so violent....but yea man you got nice presence on the track, your flow was off at certain points, and that's really the only thing you need to work on. I think once you get your flow to really work for you, you'll get noticed quick.

    You're still young though man so you have alot of time to really develop your skills. I say that cause, it's heads on this board that's alot older then you and can't even rhyme like you can lol...but yea man just keep practicing, and you'll get it...

    Check out this collab with me and my peoples
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=936318
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  9. Ben Official

    Ben Official Active Member

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    fllow is off but sometimes its on, its getting better

    voice will get better with age

    hopefully


    word

    keep elevatin home town niggy duke
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  10. Surelawk

    Surelawk Homie

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    yeah. flow needs work. but you got so much better since last time I ehard you. lyrics on point like always. good stuff boss
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  11. tRaVeStY14

    tRaVeStY14 Unstopable Records

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    sickkk man i was really feelin the lyrics like every1 else said flow was a lil off but ur deff gettin better man i like ur style always have just work on the constant flow and ur gunan be so sick ur gunna be up top man sick
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  12. Nucklz

    Nucklz Loud Enuff Productions

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  13. Verbatim

    Verbatim Mr Write

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    my bad it took me a minute...my last day off was like a week ago and I played NBA 2K6 with my roommate the whole night...lol

    aiight..to the track...I love this beat..starts off prety good..lol damn I used that fuckin dead line a few years ago in a battle with my mans Phene....great minds think alike....you got some good lines....some are ones I've heard before...flows pretty good..presence could be better though.....sounds like your reading..but your young that shit will come in time....this wasnt bead though..keep it up
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  14. V.I.K

    V.I.K The Feedback Returner

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    Hmm... short but i get where u were going... Got some good ideas throughout this verse...Definitely work on tightening up your doubles. They're on point for the most part, but u have a few which are noticeably off. Its a similar issue with your flow...Its on point for the most part, but uve got a few rough patches. Try and kink these out in the future. For example, i noticed in some places, it seems like u rhyme a bar prematurely, like a few more words could've gone before the word u rhymed with the previous bar. Presence was on point though... I like how u took on a s a r c a s t i c/winded tone mid way through the verse, and then changed back up to how u were spitting in the beginning. It was a nice fluctuation. Not bad, things to work on, but not bad...Keep writin. Ez

    Check me out...
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=936720
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  15. Reflexx

    Reflexx [insert cool thing here]

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    ^ thanks for the feed

    i'll hit your links up tomorrow when i get outta school
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  16. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    lol warbux murdered this beat


    anyways, high pitch voice as u said b4 lol but u 15, ur shit gona get harder in time, and u just gota learn to use it, ur emotion is pretty good already


    ur content is pretty solid, not bad at all, a lot of punch lines, not bad, but i dont usually feel tracks with so many punch lines


    but this was pretty good, just try to focus more on just tieing a bunch of punches together


    solid drop friend


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=938365

    peep my new shit sometime

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  17. Revalation2k4

    Revalation2k4 The Difference

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    Sup bro, sorry I'm getting back to this so late. I normally hit shit faster when I was here before but I wasn't expecting replies cause I never get any on here so I ain't bother to check. Glad you liked my joint though and appreciate the feed.

    Now on to your track, flow is not bad, it's different, got that freestyle feel to it. Delivery is nice, good energy and confidence. Lyrics were str8, some decent punches in there, and some so so ones. Production was str8 overall, and voice sounded good with this beat. Overall this was not bad, feelin it. Keep doing it bro, Peace!
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