Redrum&Darknass-Catch It Unexpected ~pittsburgh mcs~

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  1. Redrum9689

    Redrum9689 New Member

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    Redrum&Darknass-Catch It Unexpected ~DROP LINKS~

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=307671

    -REDRUM-(me)

    check me out right quick im the boss of the city
    i get the hottest dime broads and hop in they kitty
    i got flame in my game so duck when i spit it
    and if i pull the trigga bullets gettin stuck in ya fitted
    and i think i can see a fuckin busta when i see em
    so when i see a busta ima bust em when i see em
    i got 12s in my motherfcukin trunk that bump
    and i got 12s in the motheruckin trunk that pump
    so punk chumps give it up what u thinkin mufucka
    lil rum be in hood like the engine mufucka
    so talk shit and ill trash you fam
    and leave your ass Hung like a Asians last name
    i got your bitch on my balls like hanes
    and my flows burn hot like a bottle of mace
    so hate all u want dawg ill be there in a second
    and yall mufuckas gonna catch it unexpected


    2x yall mufuckas gon catch it unexpected
    my sq fam will go to war in a second
    all i gotta do is say its beef mufcka
    then ride up quick and put u deep mufucka


    -DARKNASS-
    Ever since a young buck
    i been on da come up
    ³³³³³z try to run up
    now the clips getttin dumped
    i dont give a fuck who u be
    fuckin wit da squad family
    ur ass is gonna be R.I.P.
    put u deep in da ground
    from da mothafuckin poundz
    bitches break dey neck when dey hear my mothafuckin soundz
    ³³³³³z run and duck cuz they know its goin down
    DarKNass ³³³³³ im runnin this mothafuckin town
    RedRum he a certified killa
    its like a jungle in da streets
    and we dem hungry gorillaz
    so ³³³³³s call me lysol cuz im sprayin u ³³³³³z
    stayin so fresh while i fuckin aim at u ³³³³³z
    got da fresh T fresh kicks awww shit
    pull up to da club and see a fresh bitch
    see a hatin ³³³³³ and he'll see sum fresh clips
    i walk wit a limp cuz im tootin big shit
    like will smith ³³³³³ im da new fresh prince
    test
  2. Aziaddict

    Aziaddict New Member

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    Sounds coo. first cat got the style, charisma, and delivery. punches was good too. second dudez kinda choppy with delivery wasn't feelin it much but ended it with a line that's pretty coo. it's good it's good.
    test
  3. Redrum9689

    Redrum9689 New Member

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    good look fam
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  4. Dice

    Dice Still One Of A Kind...

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    This beat feels evil, I like it.

    You got some skills dawg. I like this track.

    2nd guy needs some work. sounds generic, It's usually not a good idea to start out a verse with someone else's rhymes... "Ever since a young buck I been on the come up...(Known to dish the raw ditch the law when they come up) " I dont remember who spit it, but I've heard it.

    anyways...

    I think you should cut your homie's verse and drop another verse yourself. he hurts this track more than he helps it. no hate, just my 2 cents


    Return the listen

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=915997

    PEACE

    Dice One
    208 Underground Northwest
    test
  5. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    listenin Im not feelin the beat ...
    first Mc wasnt bad at all needed a lil more creativity but was tight reminded me of Lil Flip ...
    second MC I wasnt really feelin too much But wasnt bad either ...
    hook was cool lacked somethin though ...
    pretty dope Pz
    test
  6. Redrum9689

    Redrum9689 New Member

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    good look yall
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