''Red'' (Freestyle) .... concept is from EMINEM- STAN) (ODE)

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    My free's gone cold I'm wondering why I..
    got out of bed at all
    The morning rain clouds up my window..
    and I can't see at all
    And even if I could it'll all be gray,
    but your picture on my wall
    It reminds me, that it's not so bad,
    it's not so bad..


    Dear RM
    i was ur biggest fan
    everyday I post a couple verses man
    get a couple views, no replies
    to real for ur eyes?, peek-a-boo, not suprised?
    i feel im being used , by u guys
    are you doing this SHIT on purpose
    am i nice? am i wack? am i worth it?
    u pulled tha wool over my eyes,
    time to open UP tha curtains.


    My free's gone cold I'm wondering why I..
    got out of bed at all
    The morning rain clouds up my window..
    and I can't see at all
    And even if I could it'll all be gray,
    but your picture on my wall
    It reminds me, that it's not so bad,
    it's not so bad..


    ANOTHER verse,
    still noone seems to acknowldege me
    i know u feel its kinda odd that it bothers me
    i dont really need anyone to follow me
    i dont gotta tweet, but honestly
    A ''good shit bro'' good job'' or ''nice try''
    would be appreciated, even ''wack shit'' i'd just respect tha honesty
    i know i talk about crime but ima nice guy
    its all i seen growin up, my mind is polluted
    gang signs thrown up, crime & pollution
    dont judge me, because ur not above me
    lend a helpin' hand, u aint gotta love me
    but treat me like a man,
    some of u can rap BUT IM NOT A FUCKIN' FAN!!

    My free's gone cold I'm wondering why I..
    got out of bed at all
    The morning rain clouds up my window..
    and I can't see at all
    And even if I could it'll all be gray,
    but your picture on my wall
    It reminds me, that it's not so bad,
    it's not so bad..


    OK.. FUCK YOU BITCHES
    U DONT RECOGNIZE TALENT
    ''I JUST DRUNK A 5TH OF VODKA''
    I'M KINDA OFF BALANCE
    DO YOU UNDERSTAND FREESTYLE IS A CHALLENGE?
    IF IT TOOK ME 3 HOURS, I'D DEVOUR YOU COWARDS
    I'LL CRUMBLE UR DREAMS,
    LEAVE' IT IN A PILE OF DEBRIS LIKE THA TOWERS
    I'M SORRY I DIDNT MEAN IT, I'M KINDA DRUNK
    I'LL TAKE YA DREAMS AND KAREEM IT, SOME KINDA DUNK
    WATCH U CRY, SHED A TEAR WHILE U IN THA TRUNK
    FUCK U, NO VASELINE WHEN I COCK THA PUMP,
    SHOVE THA BARRELL UP UR ASS LIKE SOME KINDA PUNK
    PULL THA TRIGGA' AND GET AROUSED AS UR BODY JUMP
    I HATE WHAT U MADE ME,I'M TIRED OF BEING MR.REDEYEZ,
    SO MUCH,I KEEP VISINE BY MY BED SIDE
    I HOPED THAT I WOULD RISE, AND U SLAYED ME
    I SAID IT DIDNT MATTER BUT I LIED
    WELL, AT FIRST IT DIDNT FAZE ME,
    I WISH I DIDNT REGISTER, RM DROVE ME CRAZY...


    My free's gone cold I'm wondering why I..
    got out of bed at all
    The morning rain clouds up my window..
    and I can't see at all
    And even if I could it'll all be gray,
    but your picture on my wall
    It reminds me, that it's not so bad,
    it's not so bad..


    Red, i noticed how u feel
    i really think that u should chill
    murder? foreal?
    time & beats is what u kill
    and being drunk behind a wheel?
    people peep ur music,
    and im sure they see its real
    res' said that u could elevate
    take his words and meditate
    it doesnt happen over night,
    it takes time to make a great,
    song, then u take flight and levitate
    u should focus on tha basics
    go back when u were born,
    fresh out tha womb and naked
    way before tha storm,
    when u were full of life & patience
    dont fight tha blessin u should take it
    dont hide from tha truth u should face it
    find ur lane and stick to it
    i know that u could do it
    be diverse, and get ur point across
    dont have to curse,point a gun or wear a cross
    i hope someday u find ur callin' man
    life isnt all about ho's & ballin' DAMN
    when u do holla back,i can be ur shoulder
    until then TEN HUT, my little soldier.......


    - THIS IS NOT HOW I REALLY FEEL -

    ITS SUPPOSE TO BE A SPIN OFF OF ''STAN''
    USEING MY SELF AS SOMEONE WHO LIFE WAS RUINED BY NOT BEING NOTICED BY RM...
    test
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