Red-Eyed Leviathan Verse

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by RedEyed, Apr 15, 2013.

  1. RedEyed

    RedEyed Leviathan

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    htt ps://soundcloud. com/red-eyed-leviathan/red-eyed-leviathan

    close the spaces (I must be registered for a week to post working links), also this is the first track I'm releasing as I'm new to recording

    I have no problem returning feedback if you would like

    fuck with me - let us build so we can destroy

    EDIT
    volume changed as per the suggestion so it should be easier to catch it all
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  2. HAS Productions

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    its hot for what it is but check it, you have effects on your vocals, you might want to turn the beat down a few notches to hear you better
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  3. RedEyed

    RedEyed Leviathan

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    thank you for feedback

    since I am fairly new I don't think I've developed an ear for what volume level the beat should be

    for instance, even if I'm barely audible I will know what I'm saying but then again I wrote it so of course I'll pick up on it way easier, so good looks

    I see what your saying with the effects

    the reason I used the main effect was to reinforce the particular scheme since I brought it back towards the end but I will try to minimize effects in the future so that it adds to the lyrics and doesn't detract from the song

    again, thanks for feedback - if you ever have anything that needs a listen I'll return the favor
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  4. HAS Productions

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    don't dim the effects homie, just lower the music volume, the effects were fine, I could make out what youre saying if I took a good listen, on your mixing board, eq, whatsever, there should be a level gauge that shouldn't go over a red marker, but easiest way to do it, get a friend to listen to it that doesn't know the words, see if they can understand. you can return the favor, and that would be to please explain why my account is active but I cant post threads.
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  5. RedEyed

    RedEyed Leviathan

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    good shit, thanks for clearing up what you were saying

    you can make threads after 10 posts - BUT, it may take a few hours for the system to register and allow you to post, just try every hour or something
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  6. HAS Productions

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    thanks man, i'll look you out every now and again, good luck, ever have any questions, holler at me, peace.
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  7. RedEyed

    RedEyed Leviathan

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    sounds good man, I plan on dropping a ~2 min verse every Monday as practice so I'll be around the boards
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