Recent Photography... I'm an Artiste~

Discussion in 'Audio Emcee Hook Ups' started by Noodles, Dec 1, 2013.

  1. Noodles

    Noodles The People's Champion

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  2. Joel VeNoM

    Joel VeNoM The All Mighty...

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    some good photo's, would like to see more tho
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  3. JOEXXX

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    Noodles..

    Get a haircut and get a real job.
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  4. Sir Bustalot

    Sir Bustalot I am Jesus

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    youre close... but you missed the mark...

    something sucks about your use of depth of field.

    not bad though, keep trying.
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  5. Scr1be

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    Flow was off at times, vocals could have been a bit louder, but the metaphors are on point 8/10.

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  6. Scr1be

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    Lucy in the sky with diamonds though?

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  7. trilliam cakespeare

    trilliam cakespeare Awful Poster, Ok Tag Mak...Awww, Fuck

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    No, you're not.

    You're just some wigga posting pics on a msg board.
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  8. x calibur

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    word. these are pretty good, but he has plenty of room to improve. they're not quite professional quality.
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  9. Noodles

    Noodles The People's Champion

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    @x calibur @Sir Bustalot

    Other than the one of my dog (pretty obvious DOF issue there)... what other depth of field issues are you seeing?
    the one of my dog its obvious on the bridge of his nose which should not be out of focus...

    but the mushrooms are pretty exactoknife sharp.
    the silver head is as intended...
    the lsd pic is intentionally fadey, it's a tumblr-style picture.
    the nighttime shot isn't a sharp photo due to lighting/ISO*, but everything is identical DOF-wise... isn't it?

    looking to improve, thanks for help.
    thorough sharpness does not = professional DOF though
    its a matter of intention. not all pictures want a thoroughly sharp image. the one of my dog should have been. taking it off my
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  10. double ML

    double ML plekz = wannabe thought police

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    high resolution does not a good photo make.

    these were pure shit tbh.
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  11. Porkchop

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    Huh? Slow down Double Trouble....Think a lil before you type..Ya know? HA HA
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  12. Twamp

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    dope pics, word up.
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  13. double ML

    double ML plekz = wannabe thought police

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    go drink some bleach yayo

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  14. Sneez

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  15. Sir Bustalot

    Sir Bustalot I am Jesus

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    my critique

    well the focal point on the dog pic doesnt work well, aswell as its focal length, you could have played with that better from a different angle so we get some real depth. Its not bad, i just think with some more tweakin you could have made it better.

    The silver thing. Again, it doesnt feel deep enough, to have been more effective it kinda needs more blur in the background, basically an even more shallow DOF than you have there, it makes it feel like the focus region scale is to big, even though its not because you do have good focus on your point of interest.

    acid tabs, nice, but looks like any highschool chicks pic with her instagram filter.

    I like your lighting on the mushrooms one

    and i like the last photo the best, i think it could have been taken from a lower angle.

    You obviously have knowledge of photography principles. Just bustin your balls
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  16. x calibur

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    yea, shallower depth of field on silver. it also feels slightly unbalanced? idk.

    there should be a sharper focus on the acid tabs.

    dog is pretty good, but I think there are better angles.

    last pic, I think there's too much negative space at top, although you did partially balance it with the shadow at bottom.

    you know what you're doing, but you can always fine-tune a craft.
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  17. Noodles

    Noodles The People's Champion

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    I appreciate you nitpicky fuckers, I honestly do. LOL. Thanks for taking the time out to criticize the pictures. Will apply.

    The LSD pic looks EXACTLY like you both described, which was exactly the point. It's up to 20 reblogs on tumblr all from complete strangers, that's just the style they like on there. Tryna balance taking the art seriously and marketing my photography blogroll at the same time. Good feedback everywhere else. Appreciated
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  18. Nu'maaN

    Nu'maaN Anu'naki, Nuqqa.

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    this, i fucking love it.

    don't know about the text and the font of the captions, but really nice photos nonetheless.

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  19. dlbiininja

    dlbiininja The Hip Hop Poet.

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    What are you shooting with Noodles. I can send you some stuff that would help out. Unless, Vikto or Spits gets it to you first.
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  20. Dely

    Dely In The Trap

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    pics need work

    that silver thing not even in focus.
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