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  1. JuuKnow

    JuuKnow New Member

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  2. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    delivery is good...sumthin bout the flow is odd to me but its workin for the track...lyrics was good..."lifes a bitch n shes so hard to manage"..nice line...i'm likin this...props..i can relate to this alot...illness..i'll even download..lol..lyrics was on point...i was feelin this...flow was kinda slow towards the end..but this was hot....props fam

    returnd the view..`1
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  3. Battlefields

    Battlefields Swaggin' On You

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  4. Battlefields

    Battlefields Swaggin' On You

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    return the favor
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  6. JuuKnow

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  7. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    I don't see a song called realness on ya page, what song are you looking to get feedback on?
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  8. Infinite Skillz

    Infinite Skillz R.E.A.L. Emcee

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    the writer's block lines were tight. the beat flipping backwards was crazy sick.
    job corps line was real talk.

    it kind of seemed like the last 30 seconds you were dragging on a bit. kind of felt like you had made your point and was going to say something about what you're going to do about it but it never came.
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  9. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    word lol ... I listened to the one at the top .... "Reflections"
    beats tight ... flow wasnt bad ... pretty dope ...
    hit up mine

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=913630
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  10. Bad News™

    Bad News™ Bred.

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    voice is strait, rhyme scheme is dragged, t..ur flow is nice tho and delivery is good too just polish up..lyrics is nice...good topics, i could relate homie
    u got some nice lines in here..u got talent homie, keep it up
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  11. JuuKnow

    JuuKnow New Member

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    yea...its the one call Reflections
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  12. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    haha this one is original doggy, you got yourself a nice flow to go with this track and everythign goes together like all smooth, that's dope man keep it up

    peace easy
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  13. JuuKnow

    JuuKnow New Member

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    appreciate the feed
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  14. KO Beats

    KO Beats I'm Killin Em

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    ok, no intro or nuthin....lol......feelin the beat, lyrics is hot.......delivery is boarderline........it kinda sounds like your reading....And you sound really monotone, try a lil more emotion....

    other than that, you got a hot, real ass track.....

    btw, we the beat started reversing, it got annoying.....lol.....shouldnt have done that


    good drop
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  15. 6th_plague

    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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    man thats my nas beat right der lmaooo


    quality is pretty good..you need some emotion in ya flow...it sounds kinda boring no offense na'mean...ya flow reminds me of nas..2nd part of the verse with the other part of the breakdown beat was nice..you sound a lil bit more hype

    7/10

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  16. Blackanese

    Blackanese BlackaneseCantRap.com

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    this was coo...flow and shit wont bad....but ur emotion shoulda been a little more...but this wasnt bad....stay up fammm
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