Real Nigga 4 Lyfe

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by Predator INC, Feb 6, 2011.

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  1. Predator INC

    Predator INC New Member

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    im tryna wade through the bullshit with a blunt of that erkel
    only time my minds calm is when im baked off the purple
    cuz humanity's a disease caused by evil pathogens
    they currency controlled they playin devils advocate
    my conditions inadequete so money i be after it
    but i cant ever get enough to fill where my sadness is
    im a high school graduate but i got my phd in the ghetto
    seein drugs distrubted and bitches stomped with stillettos
    yall seein green meadows... im seein roaches on my wall
    so big they walk on they hind legs they dont gotta crawl
    looked on as my friends smoked crack n said fuck it all
    i remember facin a quarter i hated makin that call
    damn if ya really knew who i was itd prolly make you cry
    only thing i wanted as a kid for christmas was to die
    cuz moms was hearin voices while i wasnt hearin my pops
    ive only been on the bottom only place left is the top
    but when that album finally drop and its all said in done
    ima only say this mothafucka i won
    even through calamity im screamin fuck this tragedy
    my skin is made of stone so i welcome death happily
    people live their lives with an external locust of control
    animals dont have a spirit so they scared to bear they soul
    But i put it all out there wear my heart on my sleeve
    failed to many times now im going to suceed

    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1261921-i-beleive-make-beleive.html

    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1261989-lyricaly-proficiant.html
    test
  2. Predator INC

    Predator INC New Member

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    stop sleepin where my real niggas at
    test
  3. Trayday

    Trayday New Member

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    Thats hot

    I got some perfect beats for that

    Holla at me at traydaybeatz.us

    maybe we can collab
    test
  4. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    Yooo this verse was actually pretty nice, no fireworks and fancy text just straight lyrics and flow, there were some parts where I think you had extra words where it would have been cleaner if you were just more concise (think Ghostface killah lol) but thru and thru it was real emotional, and a cool verse thats jus missing the right beat.

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    people live their lives with an external locust of control
    animals dont have a spirit so they scared to bear they soul

    i thought these were dope cuz of the play onwords throughout, from the locus-locust, animals with no spirit (which is the internal locus), and bare-bear. nice!
    test
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