Ready For It freestyle

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by dsp2k5, May 1, 2011.

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  1. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Straight off vacation, now Im right back at it
    Keep swinging this whip back and forth like I already batted
    Automatic stashed under the dash in case I have to grab it
    But Im not violent anymore, Im passive, Im passed it
    But like a bad accent though, homie hold ya tounge
    Because it dont take long to load my gun
    So go sober up or something, just watch the hate
    Jealous cuz Im on top of my game when I rock the stage
    And Ill pop ya face if you dont ease up off my J's
    And knock ya name so bad, you wont wanna go in public
    You know I love it, any beef, my flow will crush it
    If you speak, my peice will explode and hush it
    Does it pay to play games and hate now? No it doesnt
    So you fronters come up to the front
    I dont know whats stuck up your butt
    But, If I was you, Id back the fukk up and punt
    Before I dig a big hole wit a backhoe to cover you up ...
    And then you wit the worms and bugs crunchin your nuts ...



    Lol ... a bit rusty ... this was freestyle but still lol ... dont compare to my old freestyles at all but oh well ...
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  2. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    fantastic flow, great images, real sick with it with alot of swagger.

    welcome back, this was pretty dope.
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  3. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    thanks ... Im bout to drop a dirty south exclusive freestyle ... check it out ... yeah im back ... im bout to check out some of your stuff too ... i see you dropped some
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  4. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    Same thing as I said on your other one....you start off superb but then start rambling as though you are just rhyming to be rhyming...You gotta work on stamina in your lyrics man....

    Good shit:
    "Straight off vacation, now Im right back at it
    Keep swinging this whip back and forth like I already batted
    Automatic stashed under the dash in case I have to grab it
    But Im not violent anymore, Im passive, Im passed it
    But like a bad accent though, homie hold ya tounge
    Because it dont take long to load my gun"

    But right after this you just started rambling again
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  5. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    yeah ... your right on this one too ... this was just a quick freestyle though and you know i been out of the game for a cool minute ...
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