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  1. Bloody Red

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  2. YuNG WaLT

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    that was a pretty nice beat playboy...


    im likin ya delivery too...the way you impliment ur mulits...flow kinda stumbles at times..but i think when you use as many multis as u did..its harder not to stumble...the hook was ok...but could be re-worded a lil differnetly to help the cohesivness of it all...just aint really meshin good right now...


    other then that..nuthin else wrong with this track I.M.O....real shit.

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  3. Bloody Red

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    fusho I just got you back .. yea I through this together sloppy cuz Im still on that bootleg mic Im gettin my pre amp next week for this raw ass multi patter co3 I just baught so be on the look out man .. one
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  4. Earitated Mindz

    Earitated Mindz Noxious & Tramatized

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    this joint aint that bad at all it does seem a lil rshed.......mostly on the hook....verses for the mos was on point.....flow was real good.....emotion was good beat was really nice as well.....all in all not a bad track at all...............feelin it...

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  5. Bloody Red

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    fusho , Im bout ta hit up
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  6. comPleXNY

    comPleXNY Illest Alive

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    thanks for peeping my thread.. but yea.. mos def beat is ill like it.. ya flow is pretty dope as well... delivery is really up there i think thats your main like focus point is ya delivery just all around though not bad.. keep up the good work homie..

    peace

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  7. Keh Mak

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    it just keeps buffering dude it wont work....ill check it later tho for sure
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  8. Bloody Red

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    are you playin the hi-fi ? its workin for me
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  9. Keh Mak

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    nice its workin....1st verse is ill u got lotta ill multies, quality sounds alright, u flow real nice, chorus is aight does seem rushed but i think the quickness adds somethin to it...tamborine, battling parts ill....haha this is straight man, some of ur voice overs are off but its all good, i like how u fade out at the end....this is tight
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  10. Tr3_Face

    Tr3_Face Denver's Finest

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    nice track man im lovin the beat...i agree about the hook tho you could reword it to make it flow better....you flowed so well in the verses it was like i was waitin for the hook to be over....this is a nice track overall tho for a rough draft, finished should be sick....keep droppin

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  11. Bloody Red

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    good lookin I'll hit you up soon
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    up another level
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    quality isnt that good, not really feeling ya voice type annoying, didnt expect that after seeing ure pictureo da page.the first part of the chorus is cool, 2nd part kind of annoying, 2nd verse is good, this is cool but the quality fucked it up, an the beat is eh

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  15. TWO M.C.S

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    damn i wish this was on soundclick, this myspace player shit is the worst on the net

    this aint bad, seemed maybe a LIL less than fully polished, a few rough edges in the flow, not too bad - just require a little extra time makin sure you got the delivery down before you record it - still pretty solid anyhow

    not a bad drop right here


    keep it slap

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  17. Bloody Red

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    good lookin on feed Im hittin everybody back tonight last up



    I feel what everyone sayin too so good looks .. bad quality mainly is my next fix

    delivery I got down pack'd though just wit this wack ass mic I try ta spit low as possible so I dont get too much pops an shit like that feel me ? good lookin on the feed ...
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