[RD2] 3. CANDY vs 4. InsaneVillian

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Jun 19, 2012.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008


    VERSUS DUE: Every Friday @ 11:59 PM PST
    LINE LIMIT: Minimum of 16 lines, Maximum of 64
    •Recycling is the equivalent to that of a no-show and will be treated as such, thus resulting in a loss in favor of the participant whom chose to recycle and a win in favor of his/her opponent
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    •If granted, the extension will override deadline for both participants extending it for no more than 24 hours
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    •Verses MUST incorporate AT LEAST 1 of the provided topics or pictures
    •A failure to show will result in a loss and a sign out by default. A no show in the tourney will result in elimination.
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  2. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

    Aug 19, 2000
  3. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

    Oct 25, 2002
  4. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

    Oct 25, 2002
    From the aphids that arise on the wings of a fly
    To a naive chimp on a vine that swings to survive
    There’s a link throughout time which brings us to life
    In a blink of an eye you must rethink our design
    As the pistons do turn before the gods we are praising
    Try to listen and learn and don’t get lost in translation

    The Year 2113
    The dry air rises between the starch skies on the horizon
    With littered streets and a brittle bitter sweet time bomb
    Violence now viral as humans spiral like a moulting python
    Diluted with pollution Earth is now a dark site to survive on
    Insights gone though not by global warming and solar flares
    Through illness and plagues, the pale storming of cold despair
    The greenest pastures have past the point of a scenic glimpse
    As mankind is now the fiend, fed through intravenous drips
    Still they exist through science and math, wired and waiting
    Fighting to grasp the passage of mass and have time dilation
    They found flying near a gravity pull slowed down existence
    So they created a craft to ascend around Mars on a mission
    The sick and the hurt would fill the cabins layer upon layer
    To rebirth on Earth for a cure that will be created years latter
    But don’t be mislead these were the wealthiest of friends
    Whilst the healthiest amend the men too helpless to defend
    As the CIRCLE OF LIFE departs with each person left waving
    They were unprepared for the fatal fate that awaits them
    An asteroid with organic matter hammers and destroys
    Everything moving on Earth whether mammal or android
    The deployed ship reaches its target and starts circling Mars
    Far from the fact their terrain has changed and come apart
    A funny things happens in the barren waters of Earths haunt
    Biological life forms in a jaunt marriage forged for a new dawn
    Set forth in motion beneath our oceans Darwinism is spawned
    From molecules to protocells with large divisions they morph
    Through to bacterial colonies, coral, an invertebrate moves
    Fish and reptile’s boom, then eventually the first primate grew
    Faces change within time and animal instinct gets dropped
    Axes lift as wheels spin on axels synced to rethink our stock
    THE CIRCLE OF LIFE has finished its voyage and enters our clouds
    Drowned in illness they spill in the new waters unannounced
    Compelled at the view an Aztec warrior is carried by a fraud
    As he sits on top of a rock and spots
    A Chariot of Gods
    We look to the sky for answers, unpleased at what we see
    But really there is no easy solution, as we are the disease


    You are an Aztec warrior, and all of a sudden you see a strange ship approaching from the ocean
  5. Ravenous510

    Ravenous510 Well-Known Member

    Feb 27, 2009
    Great verse @ Cereal Killer.........

    This is probably the best verse I have read from the round 2 submissions, (the few that have been posted)...

    Excellent, man...almost makes me think you were sandbagging in round 1....

    It includes some complex rhyming....much greater degree of flow compared to your round 1 submission...the content was a little hard to follow at times, but overall, I really enjoyed this piece...
  6. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

    Apr 11, 2004
    CK wins via no show...keeping open for comments
  7. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008
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