RD1: Master Peace vs Revanon

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  1. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    WELCOME to Round1 of the Where Do You Stand text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules :

    CHECK INS ARE mandatory,

    VERSES are due Friday, June 29th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-24 lines.
    - EXTENSIONS will only be granted upon request.
    - Battlers may up thread twice.
    - No feeding, biting, or recycling.
    - No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

    ALL VOTES ARE WELCOME!!!!!

    Official Rules & Regulations can be located here:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1049608

    Have a great battle.
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  2. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    You bastards would give me Rev first round...Checkin in

    Whatever limit you want Rev

    Good Luck
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  3. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    hahahaha...24 lines ....

    Good luck to you too Peace...

    Good luck....
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  4. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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  5. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    On the prediction thread, Peace didn’t even get considered to win
    This is our first encounter; but watch Revanon rip him again
    Have his ligaments bent, die? Nah this bitch will just ‘bleed-hard’
    Give his mom the type of ‘stroke’ where she won’t have to see the ER
    I'll REST in Peace's ...mom...Tombstone the bitch dry
    til I break of 'little' Peaces of me in that bitch's eye
    This ain't a battle, I feel like I've been given a damn bye
    I'll have this nigga bleedin red like MOST systems on 'stand by'



    Fuck U' son...

    Rev sever legs, they'll have to label this battle a tragedy
    I'm a god, check my sig, they naming WHOLE CREWS AFTER ME
    we live in the present, legend? why don't we fuck history
    they say a way to man's heart is through his stomach...
    but these slugs...disagree
    been dug 6 ft...funeral proceedures make you rest master peace'
    and them slugs? found a shortcut..right through your chest cavity
    that's the best route, so proud of my shells, they left P alone
    they like TODAY'S 'hits'
    cause they "try so hard".....to get to the BONE
    anyone saying MP winnin round one? has been lied to
    your mag was dope..but I got a mag you can't SUBSCRIBE to
    them shells will bake ya flesh, ya face melt beyond reasonin'
    you'd swear you were on top chef...all ya need is a lil seasonin'
    it's funny...your demise will be similiar to that wrestler
    Cause Rev will strangle ya....with nothing but 'dope' lines and VERSES next ta ya
    lucky we selected judges so they could come police this kid
    I'm far from perfect
    But watch me drop this 'master peace' of shit
    Rev beyond skill...gather round...watch me rip this queef
    I'll be good for the bush administration when I bring 'peace' to the MIDDLE EAST
    wit...
    pieces of his leg and feet...torn from his shin and knees
    give his arms to ARMS DEALERS they like 'man' are you kiddin me?
    this bitch wanna know my inner secrets, you ain't got the right to ask
    I'll shit on peace....and wouldn't have the decency to wipe my ass
    you's a slut, who I wouldn't ask how much to FUCK you up
    ...I'd probably slap the smile off ya face wit ya lips
    attached...just to shut you up
    like bad breaks..you got me screaming at Jesus yelling...'why lord'
    Peace just got put through a RHYME CLINIC wit IV's placed through his mic cord

    Get outta here...
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  6. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    Please explain ... u gotta read tha rules

    #9 - Absolutely NO editing your post after putting up a verse. This is to ensure nobody cheats, changing verses, deletes verses, or anything that just pretty much kills a battle. Fix your punctuation, grammar, and anything else needed BEFORE your battle. If you edit your post, you'll be disqualified and will automatically lose. No if's, and's, or but's.
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  7. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    I didn't think that would be in there...I edited my verse because I needed to fix grammer...I think I had to edit it atleast 3 times because of it...I apologize...but if you want to disqualify...I understand...I was the first to drop so I thought it was safe..but I did not read the rules...sorry again.
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  8. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    The short rules on this very post say not to edit after opponent puts their verse up...that's why I edited mine...Peace was no where to be found...
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  9. Mike Sullivan

    Mike Sullivan New Member

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    the reason why Rev edited his verse is understandable, so i dont think he should get D'Qed.


    but the person that needs to be D'Qed is "2Xtreme a.k.a Mad Static", the guy that im batteling.

    he said "im gonna drop soon" like 3 days ago, and also he keeps on lurking around these forums for HOURS, and doesnt post shit.

    lol.
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  10. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    He shouldn't be DQ'ued if he was just fixing his structure...I hadn't even posted yet.
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  11. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    Creating an upset…Rev groping at my dick like a cup check
    He’ll prolly spin some horrid nameplays like non has been spun yet
    Since you brushed the dust of ya knuckles you think your keys will displease Peace
    Peeped ya catalog since 99 ya flow read like it’s on repeat
    Tryna read through the slew of those punchless connections
    Grew tedious like your “Legendary” filler gunplay references
    Rev your technique is non-existent and that “Legend” shit is a gimmick
    To try and conceal the fact that your title should read “Vintage”
    You don’t think you can win against me and that’s an obvious observation
    I could tell from how you requested 24 bars for explanation
    You not a threat to me, I key this verse wit ease…I spit fire friend
    Smokey Bones musta canceled them checks…For you to come outta retirement
    As far as you being on RM and your “Vet Status”…son don’t start me
    You bout as welcome as The Bush family at a Democrat party
    You rhyme nice?...hardly…I was wrong...your skills are so-so
    It's been a while for you...go peep my post in the Lyrical Dojo
    Your disses might leave a flesh wound, but my verses’ll leave you scarred
    Rev's flow strength is about as hard as Shawshank’s Prison Bars
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  12. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    Now THAT'S what's up!!! Hot shit...wow...really impressed!

    Let the voting begin!!!
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  13. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    Shiiiiittt..
    Were Gonna Havta Up Our Game After Peepin' This...

    Rev ya whole verse was sick,
    not sure but looks like ure a lil rusty though?
    but the lines were just crazy,
    if you get through....whoever draws you is gonna havta do some serious work.



    Shit...
    yo if MP didnt read revs verse before he posted...
    then hes killed it with the
    "Grew tedious like your legendary filler ginplay references"


    this was close...
    but i think revs verse had more content,
    and was fire throughtout...

    MP worked hard at his verse you can tell n with good reason.

    good battle

    Vote = Rev
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  14. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    i think this battle is kool but im gonna have to vote for rev for bein more consistant although master peace came off pretty tight ,this was very hard to judge but my final vote goes to rev/good verse yall 2/
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  15. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    http://board.rapmusic.com.showthreadi think this battle is kool but im gonna have to vote for rev for bein more consistant although master peace came off pretty tight,this was very hard to judge but my final vote goes to rev/good verse yall 2/
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  16. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    MAn this battle was nice both had flow for days and punch lines that chewed at each other like Mike Tyson and Holyfield..... Rev cam hard and like a true vet he did his do..with strong content and vocab w/nice word play..But I have to go with MAster P.... MAn this was a good battle..Very good...

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  17. Linxz

    Linxz What!

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    IDK....


    Rev verse was COol, with a lot of played shyt. I mean its not hard to point the shyt out. Being though he practicing and all, I guess its cool. Some lines of his was harsh though.


    MP

    Stepped his game up on this for real, and it showe through out his verse. He also put Rev in his place about, living up to the gimmick shyt he on...HA! But its COol cause Rev been here for a while I guess, so that might not shock everybody. But Mp had more unplayed lines that can be quoted to me, even though Rev dropped more bars.


    I say MP got this joint, just off the strength that he Up his game and didn't let up after doing so.

    Good Battle, it was a truly a HighLight Battle....
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  18. Dark-Vybe

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    Have his ligaments bent, die? Nah this bitch will just ‘bleed-hard’
    Give his mom the type of ‘stroke’ where she won’t have to see the ER
    ehhh-ish

    Rev sever legs, they'll have to label this battle a tragedy
    I'm a god, check my sig, they naming WHOLE CREWS AFTER ME
    coolio

    BONE line sucked ass, you was reachin

    anyone saying MP winnin round one? has been lied to
    your mag was dope..but I got a mag you can't SUBSCRIBE to
    ok enuff of the gun lines already

    lucky we selected judges so they could come police this kid
    I'm far from perfect
    But watch me drop this 'master peace' of shit
    coolio

    watch me rip this queef
    i dont think i wanna do that :/

    middle east/ARMS DEALERS/kiddin me was cool

    this bitch wanna know my inner secrets, you ain't got the right to ask
    I'll shit on peace....and wouldn't have the decency to wipe my ass
    heh

    rev opennin threw it off at 1st
    cameback strong, gun lines was ehhh, had alot of 99-02 type lines
    wasnt feelin the 3 line bars, made it feel stretched, i feel the 3 line stuff is more open mic type ish unless used right
    didnt feel it, ya still alil rusty bud, but fuck it who isnt after a 2-3 year layoff

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    Tryna read through the slew of those punchless connections
    Grew tedious like your “Legendary” filler gunplay references
    heh true

    Rev your technique is non-existent and that “Legend” shit is a gimmick
    To try and conceal the fact that your title should read “Vintage”
    cool

    You not a threat to me, I key this verse wit ease…I spit fire friend
    Smokey Bones musta canceled them checks…For you to come outta retirement
    nice

    As far as you being on RM and your “Vet Status”…son don’t start me
    You bout as welcome as The Bush family at a Democrat party
    cool

    aight finish, verse was solid, didnt waste much -not alot of filler
    stayed consistant
    used the "oldman lines" personal, cool


    wow
    honestly, this was "kinda" close in my eyes
    but imma say MP was more consist, more in your face, i felt his aggression
    rev was more so like a laidback smoothtalkin lowtoned pimp... an used the oldskool style of text which wasnt very attractive
    both got creative but imma say vote = MP
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  19. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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  20. A.T Tha Don

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    LINKS FELLAS
    i more 4 u MP
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