RD1: Londo vs Bonnie

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  1. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    WELCOME to Round1 of the Where Do You Stand text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules :

    CHECK INS ARE mandatory,

    VERSES are due Friday, June 29th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-24 lines.
    - EXTENSIONS will only be granted upon request.
    - Battlers may up thread twice.
    - No feeding, biting, or recycling.
    - No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

    ALL VOTES ARE WELCOME!!!!!

    Official Rules & Regulations can be located here:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1049608

    Have a great battle.
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  2. Bonnie Bathory

    Bonnie Bathory New Member

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    checkin in =]
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  3. Londo

    Londo Fuck You

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  4. Bonnie Bathory

    Bonnie Bathory New Member

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    Ok... I'll post first... howz about 16?

    School this clueless douche on peace and leave his deuces severed
    No truces ever, he aint been welcome since he was our newest member
    I been known to cock some shotguns, Londo known to shotgun cocks
    Suck on this Mack 10 like T-Boz til my hits make ya Left-Eye drop
    Becuz ya got the shittiest spits that Motor City can give to us
    This kid is the epitome of a need for "Bein witty for idiots"
    Howd he move closer to the ocean but be still far from a flow
    I'll beat this retarded ho harder than a Harding far from the gold
    Leave the "Rev-and-who-the-rest-beez" a dirty half-dozen
    When I keep this latino-rabbits feet on a leash like a husband
    This Mexican aint dishin heat hot enough to burn me
    Take this kid out the tourney to chill with more Black Eyes than Fergie
    How come every time I come around
    This Londo Londo bitch is still a clown???
    I guess the only 3-1-3 cats who aint wack is J-Dillas pack (rest in peace)
    Go back to scratch, before ya hearts ripped off beat to match your raps

    =]
    G/L
    <3
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  5. Londo

    Londo Fuck You

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    16 is good....



    Like Wayne Brady..
    Im nice, but im gonna have to slap a bitch
    I spit and she...
    feelin pain even tho she gettin slapped with scripts
    fuck a bitch
    I would flip and use my fists to black ya eyes with
    but shit..
    they got circles the size of polka dots on a 600 pound chick
    fuck ya verse...
    watch Lon snap like Chris benoit and ghost ya vitals
    searched ya battles...'
    congrats on the greatest balled of most lines recycled
    Go out like ya idol?
    if so not only the pump but the gage'll help you through too
    Just one shot...
    will put a hole in you big enough to shoots hoops through
    you hardly winnin'
    if ya mouth wasn't full already, Id say put a dick in it
    you spittin hot?
    yeah, if Jack pulls out ya mouth so I can put some spic in it
    Im leavin you senseless
    you gettin hit with more punches than a sit in
    plus you irrelevant
    You been here since 99 but still not at the status of a veteran
    better than me?
    that straight up stupid like tryna duck this uppercut
    evenly matched?
    you must've been like the guy in ya sig and just fuckin' drunk
    Cuz see.....
    Bonnie had a nice run til' she got her cap pealed in the end
    but unlike her...
    you gettin' shot the fuck down before the second round begins
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  6. N. Cognito

    N. Cognito As Himself

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    [i didnt break down every bar...these r my favorite onez]

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    good verses from the both of you's...i had to think about this one..i saw londo gettin a little personal with his punches and that always makes a battle more interesting to watch..or read whateva..bonnie your verse was strong and you were more creative wit the rhyming and punches were on point..
    u know when u watch people battle and the stuff they spit makes the crowd go "OOOhhhh!"...i felt Londo's verse was more like that..so thats where my vote is goin...vote---->Londo
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  7. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    School this clueless douche on peace and leave his deuces severed
    No truces ever, he aint been welcome since he was our newest member
    Nice opener,flowed well

    I been known to cock some shotguns, Londo known to shotgun cocks
    Suck on this Mack 10 like T-Boz til my hits make ya Left-Eye drop
    This was just sick - line of the battle

    Becuz ya got the shittiest spits that Motor City can give to us
    This kid is the epitome of a need for "Bein witty for idiots"
    not too strong

    Howd he move closer to the ocean but be still far from a flow
    I'll beat this retarded ho harder than a Harding far from the gold
    pretty nice - first line was dope

    Leave the "Rev-and-who-the-rest-beez" a dirty half-dozen
    When I keep this latino-rabbits feet on a leash like a husband

    This Mexican aint dishin heat hot enough to burn me
    Take this kid out the tourney to chill with more Black Eyes than Fergie
    haha nice

    How come every time I come around
    This Londo Londo bitch is still a clown???
    light jab...haha we both used modified london bridge lines bonnie!

    I guess the only 3-1-3 cats who aint wack is J-Dillas pack (rest in peace)
    Go back to scratch, before ya hearts ripped off beat to match your raps
    OUCH...hard punch to finish



    Like Wayne Brady..
    Im nice, but im gonna have to slap a bitch
    I spit and she...
    feelin pain even tho she gettin slapped with scripts - not bad


    fuck a bitch
    I would flip and use my fists to black ya eyes with
    but shit..
    they got circles the size of polka dots on a 600 pound chick
    lmao liked this line alot nice hit

    fuck ya verse...
    watch Lon snap like Chris benoit and ghost ya vitals
    searched ya battles...'
    congrats on the greatest balled of most lines recycled
    Go out like ya idol?
    Ouch!...the flow picked up n just kept hittin this section was sick as hell...and thats the first benoit line ive seen...hot stuff.

    if so not only the pump but the gage'll help you through too
    Just one shot...
    will put a hole in you big enough to shoots hoops through
    light jab

    you hardly winnin'
    if ya mouth wasn't full already, Id say put a dick in it
    you spittin hot?
    yeah, if Jack pulls out ya mouth so I can put some spic in it
    nice nice but cudda ended harder.

    Im leavin you senseless
    you gettin hit with more punches than a sit in
    plus you irrelevant
    You been here since 99 but still not at the status of a veteran
    nice personal

    better than me?
    that straight up stupid like tryna duck this uppercut
    evenly matched?
    you must've been like the guy in ya sig and just fuckin' drunk
    Cuz see.....
    Bonnie had a nice run til' she got her cap pealed in the end
    but unlike her...
    you gettin' shot the fuck down before the second round begins
    nice finish


    this was a tight as hell battle...
    n im findin it hard to pick a vote...

    im pickin' the person i though had more/harder punches,
    better flow...
    and never let up they just kept comin the whole way.

    Vote = Londo

    n it aint a hate vote bonnie coz that aint my way.
    just thought id add that xx
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  8. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    School this clueless douche on peace and leave his deuces severed
    No truces ever, he aint been welcome since he was our newest member
    I been known to cock some shotguns, Londo known to shotgun cocks
    Suck on this Mack 10 like T-Boz til my hits make ya Left-Eye drop

    ^^ bonnie you came out strong ... i'm feelin ya opener ... but lost that impact towards tha end .... nice verse never tha less



    londo

    Like Wayne Brady..
    Im nice, but im gonna have to slap a bitch
    I spit and she...
    feelin pain even tho she gettin slapped with scripts
    fuck a bitch
    I would flip and use my fists to black ya eyes with
    but shit..
    they got circles the size of polka dots on a 600 pound chick
    fuck ya verse...
    watch Lon snap like Chris benoit and ghost ya vitals
    searched ya battles...'
    congrats on the greatest balled of most lines recycled


    ^^^ very nice .. i like tha style and ya puncghes was on point thru out ya whole verse ... didnt see to many weak points ... very suprising


    vote londo
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  9. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    This was a very HOT battle


    Bonnie you always catch my eye with your lyrics but I think you mightof underestimated Londo. You didn't come as hard as you usually do.

    Fav lines:

    School this clueless douche on peace and leave his deuces severed
    No truces ever, he aint been welcome since he was our newest member

    I been known to cock some shotguns, Londo known to shotgun cocks
    Suck on this Mack 10 like T-Boz til my hits make ya Left-Eye drop

    Howd he move closer to the ocean but be still far from a flow
    I'll beat this retarded ho harder than a Harding far from the gold



    Londo you showed ya ass son forreal. You wasn't so much into filler in your verse and I was feeling that and the consistency. I also liked your structure...it made it flow better.

    Fav lines:

    I would flip and use my fists to black ya eyes with
    but shit..
    they got circles the size of polka dots on a 600 pound chick
    fuck ya verse...
    watch Lon snap like Chris benoit and ghost ya vitals
    searched ya battles...'
    congrats on the greatest balled of most lines recycled

    if ya mouth wasn't full already, Id say put a dick in it
    you spittin hot?
    yeah, if Jack pulls out ya mouth so I can put some spic in it
    Im leavin you senseless
    you gettin hit with more punches than a sit in
    plus you irrelevant
    You been here since 99 but still not at the status of a veteran


    Londo you brought ya A game

    Bonnie you dropped a hot verse but Londo took the W

    Vote/Londo
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  10. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    BONNIE
    Bonnie straight with the flow and tight- formed structure with this piece, is on point. All the punchlines had me rolling and thats a plus..i know this piece would have gotten the crowd in it .....nice job..









    LONDO
    L- you drop'd it like a vet on smackdown, nice flow raw and hood punches...you came to play..nice drop..

    LONDO 4 the Win
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  11. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    bonnie:
    This was my fav battle that i've voted om i read this to cmm the reunion it read like butter. alot of good lines/punches n writen very smoothly.

    I been known to cock some shotguns, Londo known to shotgun cocks
    Suck on this Mack 10 like T-Boz til my hits make ya Left-Eye drop

    When I keep this latino-rabbits feet on a leash like a husband

    This Mexican aint dishin heat hot enough to burn me
    Take this kid out the tourney to chill with more Black Eyes than Fergie

    Go back to scratch, before ya hearts ripped off beat to match your raps


    london:
    This was so evenly matched pretty sweet opener and flow was tight through out. nice

    I would flip and use my fists to black ya eyes with
    but shit..
    they got circles the size of polka dots on a 600 pound chick

    watch Lon snap like Chris benoit and ghost ya vitals

    yeah, if Jack pulls out ya mouth so I can put some spic in it

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    so the two hardest lines in it where the spic in it line n the left eye line

    ima have to go with the one who had the most punches i enjoyed - real close though

    vote: bb
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  12. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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  13. Bonnie Bathory

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    omg i got a vote... when is voting over btw... and u said anyone can vote on this? not just tourney members?
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  14. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    100 post limit ... or you gotta be apart of tha tourney...

    votes are over by sat
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  15. Chamberfool

    Chamberfool HAhahAHahaHAhahaHhaha

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    maybe i dont have enough posts to count here.... but I really thought londo's verse was weaker than bonnies. I mean it was dope... but I didnt react much to most of it.


    out the gaaaaaaaatesss with this line

    "School this clueless douche on peace and leave his deuces severed
    No truces ever, he aint been welcome since he was our newest membe"

    I was already laughing out loud


    all of this
    "f ya mouth wasn't full already, Id say put a dick in it
    you spittin hot?
    yeah, if Jack pulls out ya mouth so I can put some spic in it
    Im leavin you senseless
    you gettin hit with more punches than a sit in
    plus you irrelevant
    You been here since 99 but still not at the status of a veteran
    "

    was just slightly moderate to me. like, coo... but I didnt feel it!



    V- B.Bathory
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  16. Bonnie Bathory

    Bonnie Bathory New Member

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    ^ should count that vote lol =]
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  17. Aegean Medusa

    Aegean Medusa New Member

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    well it counts now:




    V- B.Bathory

    I already explained myself haha


    Im chamberfool haHahAHAhaha aaanddd this is my secondname... dont make go reemmeber mypassword for my OLDER name
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  18. Bonnie Bathory

    Bonnie Bathory New Member

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    ^^^ yaaaay... 5-2 haha =D
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    Bonnie Bathory New Member

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    wait... whyd u have a girls name ahaha
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  20. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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