RD1: Giftshop Vs Yung Wiz

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  1. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    WELCOME to Round1 of the Where Do You Stand text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules :

    CHECK INS ARE mandatory,

    VERSES are due Friday, June 29th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-24 lines.
    - EXTENSIONS will only be granted upon request.
    - Battlers may up thread twice.
    - No feeding, biting, or recycling.
    - No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

    ALL VOTES ARE WELCOME!!!!!

    Official Rules & Regulations can be located here:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1049608

    Have a great battle.
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  2. YuNg WiZ

    YuNg WiZ aka L.O.G.I.C.

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    WIZ checkin in
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    M-O-A Thug New Member

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  4. M-O-A Thug

    M-O-A Thug New Member

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    Yo, Young Wiz, I'm about to take you to school/
    Throw you in pools, and cause Oceans to circulate an Move//
    Yea, You've been fair warned, Hit you with sleet, snow and Hail Storms/
    You must be "Siberian" High, or high as Uniformed, unicorns//
    true to form, I spit that "Santa Ana", Juelz Santana/
    This ain't even a battle, it's a lyrical Bonanza//
    call me the x-man'der, the way I'm freakin' his equalibrium/
    leave you soo fucked up, that he'll prolly smash his own "Pentium"//
    I injured them, and You know a gang of shot's I had to empty them/
    Cuz your shit is wack from here, all the way to the "Iberian Peninsula"//
    constantly just rippin' ya, from here to the "Westerlies"/
    leave you sequestered especially, you'll need "3 legs" to stay in step with me//
    expectedly, watch the way I consume in a monsoon/
    slam you soo hard that I caused the earth to move through cracked grooves//
    My seasonal winds rip, and make all you dudes scram/
    Cuz you ain't even big enough to battle Barbara Streisands-->Mic Stand//
    Iight, man, you better take another 'flight plan'/
    Cuz I got better rhymes than you've had your whole life spand!//
    got damn, I'm sly as Jazmine Guy's, Colt 45/
    strapped on her thigh, blastin' you, as you pass by//
    This here is Doe or Die, and you need some convincing/
    Cuz your chances would be "distant" even if you were my personal assistant//
    for instance, I'mma have to cause you to faint/
    Claimin' you "bang", the only "lead" you pack is for school or bad paint//

    peace : )
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  5. YuNg WiZ

    YuNg WiZ aka L.O.G.I.C.

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    sit back and watch me the school this adolscent kid
    as he oh and ahs at my verse like herbal essences
    listen to the message and see Wiz demolish a trick
    this cat can't set up shop, if he can't move a brick
    what's hip hop? I know it ain't no gift shop
    it's survival of the illest if you don't wanna get shot
    I saw ya cypher shit, yea i admit the homie ill
    but I leave him frozen like Nas poster boy, Ill Will
    a distant memory simply put no contest
    I digest these lightweight emcees, then leave a bomb set
    tick, tick, hear the time running out? BOOM!
    a true goon on the mic you all hot air like balloons
    leaving so soon? I'm not disappointed by ya early exit
    this party for true emcees not those who still spittin reckless
    I heard you work for NASA, the way you spittin that space shit
    save it for an electric circus, ya rhymes is all worthless
    hop in a spaceship with Mr. West that'd be best
    stop tryin to 'whiten' the game your name ain't crest
    Mic Check 1,2.... 1,2,1,2 IT'S HIP HOP
    THAT SHIT THAT YOU CAN'T BUY AT NO FUCKIN GIFT SHOP
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  6. YuNg WiZ

    YuNg WiZ aka L.O.G.I.C.

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  7. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    Gift you got till 12 tonight to post links...

    you could still vote on battles that i said are over 2
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  8. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    shit...
    not one vote wat tha fuck....

    i gotta give this to giftshop,
    had more content in his verse.
    seemed more structured and packed more punch.

    Vote - Giftshop
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  9. M-O-A Thug

    M-O-A Thug New Member

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  10. YuNg WiZ

    YuNg WiZ aka L.O.G.I.C.

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    1-0 giftshop....
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  11. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    uppin for votes
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  12. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    constantly just rippin' ya, from here to the "Westerlies"/
    leave you sequestered especially, you'll need "3 legs" to stay in step with me//
    My seasonal winds rip, and make all you dudes scram/
    Cuz you ain't even big enough to battle Barbara Streisands-->Mic Stand//
    Iight, man, you better take another 'flight plan'/
    Cuz I got better rhymes than you've had your whole life spand!//

    vs.

    listen to the message and see Wiz demolish a trick
    this cat can't set up shop, if he can't move a brick
    what's hip hop? I know it ain't no gift shop
    it's survival of the illest if you don't wanna get shot
    I saw ya cypher shit, yea i admit the homie ill
    but I leave him frozen like Nas poster boy, Ill Will
    Mic Check 1,2.... 1,2,1,2 IT'S HIP HOP
    THAT SHIT THAT YOU CAN'T BUY AT NO FUCKIN GIFT SHOP

    vote= YW

    i liked wiz's verse overall, more consistant and had more personals.
    hhgs's verse wasn't bad it just dodn't pack a punch and seemed just a genreic battle rhyme, not aimed directly at anyone.
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  13. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    yung wiz advances
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  14. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    ^I've seen harder shyte from you whiz, great word play and good concepts here but not enough to beat this guy HIP...But it was a close battle at least to me...Peace.


    MAn this battle was on point and full of attacks and action lyrics it's a hard vote for me but I will have to go with hiphopgiftshop he had vo-cab that flowed with sence not to mention the Multi's Hip had came with...Nice battle very nice
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  15. Logical Thought

    Logical Thought The Twisted Story Teller

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    I didn't know this stuff was based on structure and flow I thought it was a battle, up personal, grimey, and full on attack
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  16. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    i just relized that its was tied .. giftshop won my fault
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