RD1: Cereal killer vs merkage

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  1. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    WELCOME to Round1 of the Where Do You Stand text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules :

    CHECK INS ARE mandatory,

    VERSES are due Friday, June 29th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-24 lines.
    - EXTENSIONS will only be granted upon request.
    - Battlers may up thread twice.
    - No feeding, biting, or recycling.
    - No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

    ALL VOTES ARE WELCOME!!!!!

    Official Rules & Regulations can be located here:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1049608

    Have a great battle.
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  2. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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  3. merkage

    merkage New Member

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    wutever....**checks in**
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  4. merkage

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    blah.............................................



    i peeped his profile,i can tell he doesnt know what battle flowin is
    with a name like cereal killer,didnt expect him to write me sum poetry
    cuz whoever believes your tight's joking...difference between us?
    ur an open mic rapper..and me,well...i just leave the mic opened
    so stop suckin the penis.cereal killer?sumone get him a shrink
    ur not a killer,ur writting is softer than feathers with ink
    and ur metaphores stink.still,im predicted to lose
    pfft..maybe its true..but ur a poet
    so sure the ''master peace'' is favouring you
    still,merk's a problem. and ill out rhyme ur drops
    shits obvious,cant expect cereal to think outside the box
    u novice bitch,your abstract imagery aint gonna top it
    this is a landslide..somebody please...give em a topic!!
    or just tell him to stop it.cuz im wreckin his wack flows
    how is this a tourny battle?
    when he makes it look like a texting collabo?
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  5. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    Demonic responses when I’m high off of chronic
    Paralysed wit surprise as you glide off my bonnet
    Free tummy tuck from it shit you can’t change this
    Bitch I’ll leave you twisted like Jessie Marie Davis
    Kid – Ima give you n inkling as the ink hits the paper,
    Son no one’ll save yah, ur missing poster stuck to yah face huh
    My prints on the stapler ur wishing for closure your gut n my razor
    You’re struck by the savior sent to extinguished street rats of their flavor
    The demolition man with a demonstration in sanity distortion
    Properly portioning your abortion of diction wit extortion
    Up close n personal I’ll rip the foundation your simple lifes built’on
    Wit ease when this milli is squeezed you’ll be realised like miss Hilton
    Cock back the hammer, sickle and all
    Make you sick of it all
    Im speed balling through rhymes
    a sign of the times
    Creatively bound - I’ll throw another brick in your wall
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  6. J*Rock

    J*Rock New Member

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    my vote to the Cereal killer...

    merkage had some bars that just...didn't quite flow...I mean if you tried hard enough you may make it work but there was nothing standing out...it wouldn't have taken too much to take Cereal verses out but merk couldn't even do that...no hard punches at all...

    vote: Cereal
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  7. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    Merk for the win... Good battle fellaz

    1111111111122222222222233333333333333


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  8. Linxz

    Linxz What!

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    Yea I vote-Merkage



    Only reason why though, cause i was gonna say Cereal Killer. But After reading it again, Merkage kept it real. He had some clever lines and checked the bull G, I still think Merkage didn't come all that hard, It seem like he didn't even attempt to drop anything to over the top. Like he knew the clever shyt would give him the W.



    Aight battle, but I think it still could go either way
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  9. Londo

    Londo Fuck You

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    vote - merkage


    More punches and even tho his verse was choppy at times, he still got the point across....Cereal, lacked any real hitting punches but was on his shit with the vocab..lol....but this is a battle and punches take a battle in any circumstance..soo

    again vote - markage

    NIce battle, second round lookin kinda tough..haha
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  10. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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  11. N. Cognito

    N. Cognito As Himself

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    peeped his profile,i can tell he doesnt know what battle flowin is
    with a name like cereal killer,didnt expect him to write me sum poetry that line was aight..sounded prewritten.. like its a come back when he didnt post his verse yet

    and ur metaphores stink.still,im predicted to lose
    pfft..maybe its true..but ur a poet
    so sure the ''master peace'' is favouring you

    still,merk's a problem. and ill out rhyme ur drops
    shits obvious,cant expect cereal to think outside the box pretty good
    u novice bitch,your abstract imagery aint gonna top it
    this is a landslide..somebody please...give em a topic!!

    or just tell him to stop it.cuz im wreckin his wack flows
    how is this a tourny battle?
    when he makes it look like a texting collabo?


    C.K.

    Free tummy tuck from it shit you can’t change this
    Bitch I’ll leave you twisted like Jessie Marie Davis who? i still count it as a punch tho

    The demolition man with a demonstration in sanity distortion
    Properly portioning your abortion of diction wit extortion good multis
    Up close n personal I’ll rip the foundation your simple lifes built’on
    Wit ease when this milli is squeezed you’ll be realised like miss Hilton



    merkage, i think this is tha weakest verse ive seen u drop...u were consistent with your disses tho..CerealKiller yo verse had a better usage of rhymes, and it flowed a little better, but as a battle verse i felt u could of attacked your opponent harder...

    vote----> merkage
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  12. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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  13. Dark-Vybe

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    cereal had the davis line, it was ok, up with the daily topics an all atleast
    but honestly thats all i seen
    text flow was choppy an i even read it 4-5 differant ways
    wasnt feelin your verse much, sorry homie

    murkage, got personal, attackd his openmic/battle differances
    cereal box line was funny
    "give him a topic" line gotta giggle outta me

    with that said
    structure, punches, personals an intensity went to merk


    vote merk
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  14. Bonnie Bathory

    Bonnie Bathory New Member

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    merk
    i peeped his profile,i can tell he doesnt know what battle flowin is
    with a name like cereal killer,didnt expect him to write me sum poetry
    ^ weak opener that didnt even rhyme... holmie what are u thinkin w/ this as an opener? no =[

    cuz whoever believes your tight's joking...difference between us?
    ur an open mic rapper..and me,well...i just leave the mic opened
    ^ no =[

    so stop suckin the penis.cereal killer?sumone get him a shrink
    ur not a killer,ur writting is softer than feathers with ink
    ^ unique punchline but im not really feelin it

    and ur metaphores stink.still,im predicted to lose
    pfft..maybe its true..but ur a poet
    so sure the ''master peace'' is favouring you
    ^ that was a good concept but not a hard hitting insult

    still,merk's a problem. and ill out rhyme ur drops
    shits obvious,cant expect cereal to think outside the box
    ^ theres the fire! knew itd show up at some time

    u novice bitch,your abstract imagery aint gonna top it
    this is a landslide..somebody please...give em a topic!!
    ^ahaha yay battle lines =]

    or just tell him to stop it.cuz im wreckin his wack flows
    how is this a tourny battle?
    when he makes it look like a texting collabo?
    ^Decent closer... matched the skill as the other battle lines you came with... alright but nothin too hilarious or crazy

    cereal
    Demonic responses when I’m high off of chronic
    Paralysed wit surprise as you glide off my bonnet
    ^wha kinda opener is that? no =[

    Free tummy tuck from it shit you can’t change this
    Bitch I’ll leave you twisted like Jessie Marie Davis
    ^ haha cold

    Kid – Ima give you n inkling as the ink hits the paper,
    Son no one’ll save yah, ur missing poster stuck to yah face huh
    My prints on the stapler ur wishing for closure your gut n my razor
    You’re struck by the savior sent to extinguished street rats of their flavor
    ^ haha man i thought that was hot... ur missing poster stuck to ya face my prints on the stapler... haha... nice concept =]

    The demolition man with a demonstration in sanity distortion
    Properly portioning your abortion of diction wit extortion
    ^ hmm... =\

    Up close n personal I’ll rip the foundation your simple lifes built’on
    Wit ease when this milli is squeezed you’ll be realised like miss Hilton
    ^that was real nice i was like ooooo

    Cock back the hammer, sickle and all
    Make you sick of it all
    Im speed balling through rhymes
    a sign of the times
    Creatively bound - I’ll throw another brick in your wall
    ^ keepin it true to your creativity... no one can tell ya you lack it... coulda made it harder hitting... but they were hits none the less

    Ima have to give it to merk... cereal killer was more creative with his punchlines but there were few of them... both had flow on point... both opening lines were lame... merk had a lil bit more of a harder hitting closer... itda been nearly dead even if cereal had one more decent punchline in his verse... i counted 3 in merks and 2 in cereals... good battle tho... i like both ur styles =]
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  15. Halloween Jack

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    still,merk's a problem. and ill out rhyme ur drops
    shits obvious,cant expect cereal to think outside the box
    u novice bitch,your abstract imagery aint gonna top it
    this is a landslide..somebody please...give em a topic!!
    or just tell him to stop it.cuz im wreckin his wack flows
    how is this a tourny battle?
    when he makes it look like a texting collabo?

    vs.

    Kid – Ima give you n inkling as the ink hits the paper,
    Son no one’ll save yah, ur missing poster stuck to yah face huh
    Up close n personal I’ll rip the foundation your simple lifes built’on
    Wit ease when this milli is squeezed you’ll be realised like miss Hilton
    Cock back the hammer, sickle and all
    Make you sick of it all
    Im speed balling through rhymes
    a sign of the times
    Creatively bound - I’ll throw another brick in your wall

    over all i think cereal had the imagry and creativity but merk just had the punches.
    altho at first merk i was like wtf?! the shit ain't rhyme and iono man, shit really started off weak. finished strong tho.

    v- merk.

    but props to CK cuz homie held it down tight.



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  16. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    6-2 merk .... 6ft voted CK

    Merk get them links up by tomorrow
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  17. merkage

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  18. A.T Tha Don

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    6-1 j rock vote dont count
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  19. YuNg WiZ

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    I have to give Merk the W. He jus seemed more personal with it. C. Killer was nice with the vocab, but he was lackin any punches so Merk you got my vote.

    Favorite line.....
    still,merk's a problem. and ill out rhyme ur drops
    shits obvious,cant expect cereal to think outside the box

    that's what did it for me.... had me laughin for awhile
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  20. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    7-1 Merk advances
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