RD1: A.T vs 6ftground

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  1. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    WELCOME to Round1 of the Where Do You Stand text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules :

    CHECK INS ARE mandatory

    VERSES are due Friday, June 29th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-24 lines.
    - EXTENSIONS will only be granted upon request.
    - Battlers may up thread twice.
    - No feeding, biting, or recycling.
    - No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

    ALL VOTES ARE WELCOME!!!!!

    Official Rules & Regulations can be located here:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1049608

    Have a great battle.
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  2. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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  3. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    6 to the muthaphucken FT-
    this G is ready and Grounded..
    Lets Flow..Let's GO!!
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  4. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    SHyt I always go first..I'll wait till thurs..
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  5. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    6ftg v.s A.T muzic

    It’s a 6ftgrounds Intro:
    Lets Go! Lets Flow!
    A.T not a don he’s the PO-PO
    So let me flow and drop it in his police ass
    “So Ring the alarm and not a sound is dying”
    Attention:All true don’s, a snitch is in too deep and he’s in the building...
    So - Answer ya’ll radio's
    “it’s a birdflip$pimpgame” so snitches exit the building
    A.T already know ...

    Cause when you battle me it’s like phuck you, I back hand and slap lames
    it’s a birdflipimps game
    A.T mad cause he didn’t play a good game, you lame
    So I send out a Code 2 for feminine type lames
    Please proceed immediately w/o siren
    to ruff-up and split this A.lpha. T.out shemale
    trying to slang his mark shoddy goods in my realm,
    now who’s the show off getting shelled
    I’ll tell you who - A' -Tout named A.T. tha don bombshell,
    here’s Code 3 -
    Proceed w/ siren and red lights cause after this battle he’ll have no life
    A.T tha don breathing’s slow
    and we all know it’s cause he deepthroats Barney Phife
    Quick clear his throat, Nope!
    leave em lay there, in his back street shirt gasping for life
    cause now it’s A Code 4 -
    No further assistance necessary, fore this ole boi A.T is fairy
    cause this kat style is D.O.A and he’s very
    mislead thinking he can match up with Dr.Scary
    and end my life with ease not likely mad black man with a diary
    Somebody send out a Code 5-
    cause I’m treating him like Damon treated Craig and Daedae
    bytch better have my money on payday
    or ima do something strange to em on Friday
    I’ll issue a Code 6 on this muthphucka -
    so uniformed officers stay away
    I’ll treat A.T like he's in SanAndreas -
    car jack em and beat em tell his soul runz away
    -6ftg had to Logan-up on Tha Don and lyrically claw his ass away
    no need for a code 7-
    cause I killed A.T on the intro,
    so this is just a free wordplay–Yeah you KNOW
    It’s a Code 8 going down next
    cause I need no assistance battling this ladybird Jake in the kilted dress
    A.T you a curd in my shiit,
    I got this nerd type clerk who lurk with the gay- in check
    I bet he smirk “n” now,
    he turn’d yellowbird fowl,
    just know I play chess mate- like I check mate
    I gotz to treat you Jake's like my pawns,
    I got him dying for my lead way, who's next to play
    C-he- B Suspect- on the D.L and wanted by the rainbow collation
    They put a APB out on A.T -say he may be-spreading cheeks
    and spreading crustaceans, nicca scatch ya self..ha
    Now we at Code 9-bring the petroleum jelly- it’s a jail house rape
    A.T took the whole nine in cell block eight-
    I bet that gave em a ache,
    A.T tha don- done got done- by homicide- battery and armed robbery
    I’m slick with it,
    a grunt with it,
    I hunt Lex Luther style, for kats with capes on
    who shunt and stunt like they hard-up; but really got a hard on
    A.T you a buttercup- with tights on
    YOu like it with no lights on ,
    I guess he doesn’t like to see it cumming ooooooooon
    This katz a sock a fella and a jail house sag a fella with rainbow colors
    A.T's Tha dOn of what...The Don of the Down low brothers
    Put it together folks
    6FTG Birdflip and pimp hoes in this game- no stunting
    I guess it was my lewd conduct, malicious mischievous lyrics
    that murdered A.T -- Tha Don of shytpacking lyrics....ha!

    Damn this piece is long..My bad folks...

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=14676083&posted=1#post14676083
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  6. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    Yo that verse is way to long my brotha... so only 24 of them lines are to be counted ..... ... im not matching 24 i went tha min... but i'll allow voters to count up to 24 of them lines ... or just match his wit mines ...


    here we go ....


    I guess i got lucky and pick me a wack clown...
    I told him 'back down'.... he sucking my dick now ...
    See i dont really 'text' but i'll 'press' this rookie....
    Not only would i 'wash' but i'll 'douche' this pussy...
    Round 2 looking great but i dont see you 'there'...
    they predicted that you lose and ya future's 'clear'...
    A' Produce 'records'... spread that around!!....
    cuz my next 'hit' is "6" ft that 'ground'....
    And yea i 'fight' alot so i'll 'wash' this 'prick'...
    you'll think i was a 'crip' how quick i dropped 'six'....
    And im from a hood where you ain't 'keepin' nuttin....
    so fuck 'snatching' six chain.... we take his 'head' from up 'off it'.....
    " Like homie give it up ... or get knockout"
    Not 'you' but ya 'brains' when 'shots bang out'.....


    hope ya'll get my slang
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  7. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    My bad A.T for going over....nice drop..
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  8. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    Cause when you battle me it’s like phuck you, I back hand and slap lames
    it’s a birdflipimps game
    A.T mad cause he didn’t play a good game, you lame
    So I send out a Code 2 for feminine type lames
    Please proceed immediately w/o siren
    to ruff-up and split this A.lpha. T.out shemale
    trying to slang his mark shoddy goods in my realm,
    now who’s the show off getting shelled
    I’ll tell you who - A' -Tout named A.T. tha don bombshell,
    here’s Code 3 -
    Proceed w/ siren and red lights cause after this battle he’ll have no life
    A.T tha don breathing’s slow
    and we all know it’s cause he deepthroats Barney Phife
    Quick clear his throat, Nope!
    leave em lay there, in his back street shirt gasping for life
    cause now it’s A Code 4 -
    No further assistance necessary, fore this ole boi A.T is fairy
    cause this kat style is D.O.A and he’s very
    mislead thinking he can match up with Dr.Scary
    and end my life with ease not likely mad black man with a diary
    Somebody send out a Code 5-
    cause I’m treating him like Damon treated Craig and Daedae
    bytch better have my money on payday
    or ima do something strange to em on Friday
    I’ll issue a Code 6 on this muthphucka -
    so uniformed officers stay away
    I’ll treat A.T like he's in SanAndreas -
    car jack em and beat em tell his soul runz away
    -6ftg had to Logan-up on Tha Don and lyrically claw his ass away
    no need for a code 7-
    cause I killed A.T on the intro,
    so this is just a free wordplay–Yeah you KNOW
    It’s a Code 8 going down next
    cause I need no assistance battling this ladybird Jake in the kilted dress
    A.T you a curd in my shiit,
    I got this nerd type clerk who lurk with the gay- in check
    I bet he smirk “n” now,
    he turn’d yellowbird fowl,
    just know I play chess mate- like I check mate
    I gotz to treat you Jake's like my pawns,
    I got him dying for my lead way, who's next to play
    C-he- B Suspect- on the D.L and wanted by the rainbow collation
    They put a APB out on A.T -say he may be-spreading cheeks
    and spreading crustaceans, nicca scatch ya self..ha
    Now we at Code 9-bring the petroleum jelly- it’s a jail house rape
    A.T took the whole nine in cell block eight-
    I bet that gave em a ache,
    A.T tha don- done got done- by homicide- battery and armed robbery
    I’m slick with it,
    a grunt with it,
    I hunt Lex Luther style, for kats with capes on
    who shunt and stunt like they hard-up; but really got a hard on
    A.T you a buttercup- with tights on
    YOu like it with no lights on ,
    I guess he doesn’t like to see it cumming ooooooooon
    This katz a sock a fella and a jail house sag a fella with rainbow colors
    A.T's Tha dOn of what...The Don of the Down low brothers
    Put it together folks
    6FTG Birdflip and pimp hoes in this game- no stunting
    I guess it was my lewd conduct, malicious mischievous lyrics
    that murdered A.T -- Tha Don of shytpacking lyrics....ha!

    Proceed w/ siren and red lights cause after this battle he’ll have no life
    A.T tha don breathing’s slow
    and we all know it’s cause he deepthroats Barney Phife
    Quick clear his throat, Nope!
    leave em lay there, in his back street shirt gasping for life


    My Fav Lines from your verse ^^^

    No Disrespect bro,
    but i didnt catch the flow...i found it really hard to follow,
    had to keep goin' back n readin' certain lines 2 or 3 times to get em.
    if you get through maybe work on your style n presentation a lil just to make your delivery clearer...




    here we go ....


    I guess i got lucky and pick me a wack clown...
    I told him 'back down'.... he sucking my dick now ...
    See i dont really 'text' but i'll 'press' this rookie....
    Not only would i 'wash' but i'll 'douche' this pussy...
    Round 2 looking great but i dont see you 'there'...
    they predicted that you lose and ya future's 'clear'...
    A' Produce 'records'... spread that around!!....
    cuz my next 'hit' is "6" ft that 'ground'....
    And yea i 'fight' alot so i'll 'wash' this 'prick'...
    you'll think i was a 'crip' how quick i dropped 'six'....
    And im from a hood where you ain't 'keepin' nuttin....
    so fuck 'snatching' six chain.... we take his 'head' from up 'off it'.....
    " Like homie give it up ... or get knockout"
    Not 'you' but ya 'brains' when 'shots bang out'.....

    I guess i got lucky and pick me a wack clown...
    I told him 'back down'.... he sucking my dick now ...

    And yea i 'fight' alot so i'll 'wash' this 'prick'...
    you'll think i was a 'crip' how quick i dropped 'six'....


    My 2 Fav lines from the verse...your style aint too disimilar form my own,
    short lines with high impact n continuous wordplay...
    tip for the next round if you get through would be to work on flow.



    Vote = A.T
    clearer verse,
    harder visible punches.

    no disrespect to either emcee,
    like i said im fulla cold so done my best to give helpful feed.
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  9. Linxz

    Linxz What!

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    This shyt was aight



    A.T had some good good shyt, 6Ft had a good concept and put great effort to get the W, BUT!


    MY VOTE=A.T


    I wanted 6ft to get it though, probably next tourney.
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  10. Londo

    Londo Fuck You

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    Gotta go with A.T

    as Shay said, more visible punches and just a cleaner verse.....6ft, Decent concepts but the wording and punchlines need some work homie...no disrespect, just letting you know my opinion....A.T, I see how some of those lines convert to audio when said....shit was good so....

    A.t - Vote
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  11. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    6ft:
    it didnt seem as long as it was. more of a free then a writen where you'vve put full effort. still n alright verse.


    I got this nerd type clerk who lurk with the gay- in check
    I bet he smirk “n” now,
    he turn’d yellowbird fowl

    who shunt and stunt like they hard-up; but really got a hard on

    AT:
    A more polished verse, pretty tight flow would have came out nice in audio.

    Not only would i 'wash' but i'll 'douche' this pussy...

    And im from a hood where you ain't 'keepin' nuttin....
    so fuck 'snatching' six chain.... we take his 'head' from up 'off it'.....


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    both had the same amount of good lines so ima have to go with the ine i felt had better structure.

    vote = at
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  12. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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  13. 2Xtreme

    2Xtreme a.k.a. Mad Static 4:14

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    Well, I had to look at both verses very carefully....and these are my comments...

    A.T.- Throughout the verse you started a bit sluggish and then consistenly you picked it up, I'd say 'round the "Not only will I wash, I'll douche this pussy" line. It's not something jaw-dropping or eye-popping, but ya punchlines was around satisfactory. The advice I give to you, next round, better bring EVERYTHING you got. Favorite line...

    "so fuck 'snatching' six chain.... we take his 'head' from up 'off it"

    6ftground- This is hard for me to say because you one of my favorite MCs on here, and the fact that I decided to go with the first 24 bars up, despite that even if it wasn't very long, I still don't think you had a chance. Like the feel of it was like you was goin at him, but you wasn't going at him. As if the verse had been around the guidelines of a concept which in a battle, isn't really necessary. If you're gonna advance, you definitely gon' have to work on ya shit...

    So to pick a winner for this round...sorry 6, but I gotta go wit A.T.

    Winner = A.T. The Don
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  14. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    Clean sweep huh...
    It's all good
    it's all fun for me.. and as a learner in this battle shyt,
    battling with kats that have more focused skill and are on point
    is something to value... Catch em next Tourney...
    Tight Job A.T The Don
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  15. Mike Sullivan

    Mike Sullivan New Member

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    yea i couldnt really catch the flow too well 6ftground, and the disses werent hard hitting enough.

    good effort though by 6ftground

    so my vote is based on who had the cleaner punches and more polished verse.

    vote - A.T.
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  16. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    6-0 A.T

    6ft links plz
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  17. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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  18. merkage

    merkage New Member

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    vote - A.T

    why? cuz his was just easier to read and had better delivery...the punches were decent...they would prolly have more effect if u converted them audio ...i think everyone who voted agreed on that.

    6ft...nice effort dawg...but u need just a bit more experience.u had nice concepts but it seems like u didnt quite know what to do with them

    best of luck in round 2 guys
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  19. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    7-0 A.T Advances
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