RD1: 2shay vs n.cognito

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  1. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    WELCOME to Round1 of the Where Do You Stand text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules :

    CHECK INS ARE mandatory,

    VERSES are due Friday, June 29th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-24 lines.
    - EXTENSIONS will only be granted upon request.
    - Battlers may up thread twice.
    - No feeding, biting, or recycling.
    - No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

    ALL VOTES ARE WELCOME!!!!!

    Official Rules & Regulations can be located here:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1049608

    Have a great battle.
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  2. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    should be cool,
    'Shay checkin' in...
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  3. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    Ite Here It Is...

    My Sick Deliverance Results In Severance Of You Spine,
    I Pack Your Parts Into A BackPack So You'll Always Remain Behind,
    Scatterd Around The Boards WIth Your Identity Hard To Find,
    Face Placed Into A Blender To Show Just How 'Shay Grinds,
    With That Said Your Mutilation Isn't Complete Though...
    I'll Dissolve The Remains In Acid Just To Leave You In-Cognito,
    Hieroglyphic Reader Needed To Decypher Your Face,
    After Taking Four Bars And Carving Out 'Shaypes,
    Battle So One Sided I'll Leave You Screaming Out Rape,
    While The Other Emcees Record It On Tape N Sit N Masturbate,
    Lesson In Multiplication n WordPlay As Shay Schools The Kid,
    N Takes His Bitch, She's Goin' Down Like London Bridge,
    A Hundread Hits Wouldn't Be Enough To Take Me Down,
    Ill Cut Away Your Legs At The Knee,So Your Feet Dont Touch The Ground,
    Battle Over...I've Won Wit The Minimum Seven Bars,
    The Wounds May Heal But You'll Keep The Seven Scars,
    To Top This Shit Your Gonna Havta Brave The Pain,
    But Even With A Hooker On A Crane You Couldn't Up Your Game,
    My Metaphysic Hits Leave Your Teeth All Outta Place,
    Ill Tape A Grenade Inside Your Mouth To Cure The Depression On Your Face...
    Id Use The Full Bar Count n Leave Nothing To Waste,
    But I Gotta Plan The Next Round On The Way To First Place...​
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  4. N. Cognito

    N. Cognito As Himself

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    checkin in...
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  5. N. Cognito

    N. Cognito As Himself

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    [New Text Style]

    look..


    my breath's bad, i influence kids on tha mic when i breathe on it /
    christ sake , youre light weight fuckin w/ Gin N. Cogni-Tonic /
    i peeped ya last battle and found myself covered in green vomit /
    weak stomached,......... i tend to throw up when i see garbage /
    aint Shay a girl's name? ...............he might just be a homo /
    type ta suck off da boss like, "ima get me a pro-mo........tion" /
    tea timing attacker vs a two timing bastard /
    beat down this weak clown N.C.'s bound ta leave spinal fractures /
    flamin fag, this dude is in fumes ..............its usual to em /
    i'll shit on u like baby draws cuz u da Fruit of tha loom /
    i wreck fakes who text great, u best break for da escape /
    Prophets of the Streets yet..wait, they're web based like Netscape/
    i bet fakes dickride ya riddles, i spit rhymes tough n chizzled /
    you so soft, i think ima stuff this bitch in side uv my pillow /
    bout as hard as bras flat chested broad teens r stuffin /
    im not vegetarian, but i'll drop beef on this English muffin /
    Finest of England's fuckin off, 2Shay too-day's ya dooms day /
    serve u like Ruby Tuesday's
    *cough*
    "'excuse may , i smell perfume spray" /
    if u fuckin wit it ........then come n get it hoe its on /
    this fool is fulla shit ....like a un attended porta john /
    u couldnt hang wit me if u was Saddam Hussein for real /
    u fell off, i guess some grown men still need training wheels / ...
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  6. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    My Sick Deliverance Results In Severance Of You Spine,
    I Pack Your Parts Into A BackPack So You'll Always Remain Behind,

    vs

    my breath's bad, i influence kids on tha mic when i breathe on it /
    christ sake , youre light weight fuckin w/ Gin N. Cogni-Tonic /

    cog


    Scatterd Around The Boards WIth Your Identity Hard To Find,
    Face Placed Into A Blender To Show Just How 'Shay Grinds,

    vs

    i peeped ya last battle and found myself covered in green vomit /
    weak stomached,......... i tend to throw up when i see garbage /

    n.cog nice flow and punch



    With That Said Your Mutilation Isn't Complete Though...
    I'll Dissolve The Remains In Acid Just To Leave You In-Cognito,

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    aint Shay a girl's name? ...............he might just be a homo /
    type ta suck off da boss like, "ima get me a pro-mo........tion" /

    SHAY


    Hieroglyphic Reader Needed To Decypher Your Face,
    After Taking Four Bars And Carving Out 'Shaypes

    vs

    tea timing attacker vs a two timing bastard /
    beat down this weak clown N.C.'s bound ta leave spinal fractures /

    both weak here tie


    Battle So One Sided I'll Leave You Screaming Out Rape,
    While The Other Emcees Record It On Tape N Sit N Masturbate

    vs

    flamin fag, this dude is in fumes ..............its usual to em /
    i'll shit on u like baby draws cuz u da Fruit of tha loom /

    shay ... thats a nasty ass line my g.. im not masturbating to no shit like that


    Lesson In Multiplication n WordPlay As Shay Schools The Kid,
    N Takes His Bitch, She's Goin' Down Like London Bridge

    vs

    i wreck fakes who text great, u best break for da escape /
    Prophets of the Streets yet..wait, they're web based like Netscape

    audio shay had a hot line text n.cog line was better
    cog



    A Hundread Hits Wouldn't Be Enough To Take Me Down,
    Ill Cut Away Your Legs At The Knee,So Your Feet Dont Touch The Ground

    vs

    i bet fakes dickride ya riddles, i spit rhymes tough n chizzled /
    you so soft, i think ima stuff this bitch in side uv my pillow /

    cog... weak but stronger


    Battle Over...I've Won Wit The Minimum Seven Bars,
    The Wounds May Heal But You'll Keep The Seven Scars,

    vs

    bout as hard as bras flat chested broad teens r stuffin /
    im not vegetarian, but i'll drop beef on this English muffin /

    shay


    To Top This Shit Your Gonna Havta Brave The Pain,
    But Even With A Hooker On A Crane You Couldn't Up Your Game,

    vs

    Finest of England's fuckin off, 2Shay too-day's ya dooms day /
    serve u like Ruby Tuesday's
    *cough*
    "'excuse may , i smell perfume spray" /


    shay... b/c i dont know if too days perfume or not ... tha line seemed filler to me






    My Metaphysic Hits Leave Your Teeth All Outta Place,
    Ill Tape A Grenade Inside Your Mouth To Cure The Depression On Your Face...
    Id Use The Full Bar Count n Leave Nothing To Waste,
    But I Gotta Plan The Next Round On The Way To First Place...


    vs

    if u fuckin wit it ........then come n get it hoe its on /
    this fool is fulla shit ....like a un attended porta john /
    u couldnt hang wit me if u was Saddam Hussein for real /
    u fell off, i guess some grown men still need training wheels /

    shay depression line was nice ... both had weak closers

    Vote = shay


    good battle fellas very tough choice
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  7. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    @ SHAY For this win..Nice battle sonz...

    shay-


    N.C

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  8. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    Nice battle fellas. Props for not taking your time and getting the tourney started....anyway....


    2shay.

    I like our flow and your opener was nice. You started to fall off a lil bit in the middle and your closer wasn't all that great.

    Fav lines:

    My Sick Deliverance Results In Severance Of You Spine,
    I Pack Your Parts Into A BackPack So You'll Always Remain Behind,

    Lesson In Multiplication n WordPlay As Shay Schools The Kid,
    N Takes His Bitch, She's Goin' Down Like London Bridge,



    Cog

    You started promising but like shay it was like you lost your fire in the middle and towards the end.

    Fav lines:

    i peeped ya last battle and found myself covered in green vomit /
    weak stomached,......... i tend to throw up when i see garbage /

    i wreck fakes who text great, u best break for da escape /
    Prophets of the Streets yet..wait, they're web based like Netscape/


    Not really much to go on after that so I based my vote whose lines were better and Ima roll wit Shay.

    v/2shay
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  9. Bonnie Bathory

    Bonnie Bathory New Member

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    Broke down every bar here... but was a lil bitchy in it so Id rather just leave it at the vote... next post
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  10. Bonnie Bathory

    Bonnie Bathory New Member

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    Vote> N. Cognito
    He stayed consitant with his concepts. Both wrote their verses were written quickly but it showed more in 2Shays verse... he didnt follow any of his setups with punchlines and the highlights of his verse was wordplay, not insults. N. Cog followed through with a couple of his setups into some pretty nice punchlines. Both were mostly on point with their flow, N.Cogs was nicer.

    If I sound a bit abrasive in my breakdown its nothing personal... I am just voting to my preference not trying to rip you apart or tell you you're bad... both verses were nice mid-level battle verses but I think if yall had invested some more time into them they'd have been a lot harder... kind of disappointed because I know your potential to come with those nice concepts but looks like half or most of yalls verses were kinda just fucked off
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  11. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    3-1 shay uppin
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  12. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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  13. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    Vote - Shay...

    I love the vote breakdowns...the whole line for line stuff...but as I was reading both verses I thought Shay was going to get his...but then I read Cog's...and he had the W...but his verse was too inconsisitent....Shay stayed nice throughout his whole verse...it felt good to read.

    Nice battle...great for a round one...you could see both of you wanted it.

    Rev....
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  14. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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  15. Linxz

    Linxz What!

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    what a Upset, I was going to vote for NC but 2Shay came with his book of rhymes.


    Vote-2Shay

    Only because I think N.Cognito allowed the fav of this match get to him. I believe 2Shay prove that no matter how long he away from the boards, he can still hold it down.
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  16. Londo

    Londo Fuck You

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    My Sick Deliverance Results In Severance Of You Spine,
    I Pack Your Parts Into A BackPack So You'll Always Remain Behind,

    cool opener...

    Scatterd Around The Boards WIth Your Identity Hard To Find,
    Face Placed Into A Blender To Show Just How 'Shay Grinds,

    ehhhhh....


    With That Said Your Mutilation Isn't Complete Though...
    I'll Dissolve The Remains In Acid Just To Leave You In-Cognito,

    not bad....


    Hieroglyphic Reader Needed To Decypher Your Face,
    After Taking Four Bars And Carving Out 'Shaypes,

    not bad.....


    Battle So One Sided I'll Leave You Screaming Out Rape,
    While The Other Emcees Record It On Tape N Sit N Masturbate,

    Nah......lol

    Lesson In Multiplication n WordPlay As Shay Schools The Kid,
    N Takes His Bitch, She's Goin' Down Like London Bridge,

    played concept, otherwise it was cool...flip it different...


    A Hundread Hits Wouldn't Be Enough To Take Me Down,
    Ill Cut Away Your Legs At The Knee,So Your Feet Dont Touch The Ground,

    pretty alright....nothin great...


    Battle Over...I've Won Wit The Minimum Seven Bars,
    The Wounds May Heal But You'll Keep The Seven Scars,

    Simple, but effective...I liked this line

    To Top This Shit Your Gonna Havta Brave The Pain,
    But Even With A Hooker On A Crane You Couldn't Up Your Game,

    ehhhh...


    My Metaphysic Hits Leave Your Teeth All Outta Place,
    Ill Tape A Grenade Inside Your Mouth To Cure The Depression On Your Face...

    good..


    Id Use The Full Bar Count n Leave Nothing To Waste,
    But I Gotta Plan The Next Round On The Way To First Place...

    decent closer...

    Your verse wasn't bad, but your punches werent really that hard hitting imo.....flow was good and some of the owrdplay was ok but really nothin to spectacular to mention.....the seven scars line was nice tho, I liked that line because it was simple but witty at the same time.....


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    my breath's bad, i influence kids on tha mic when i breathe on it /
    christ sake , youre light weight fuckin w/ Gin N. Cogni-Tonic /

    .....wordplay is nice, but I must just not understand fully what th epunch was......


    i peeped ya last battle and found myself covered in green vomit /
    weak stomached,......... i tend to throw up when i see garbage /

    hah, ok....


    aint Shay a girl's name? ...............he might just be a homo /
    type ta suck off da boss like, "ima get me a pro-mo........tion" /

    bad, did that ryhme??


    tea timing attacker vs a two timing bastard /
    beat down this weak clown N.C.'s bound ta leave spinal fractures /

    nice flow, where is the punch?


    flamin fag, this dude is in fumes ..............its usual to em /
    i'll shit on u like baby draws cuz u da Fruit of tha loom /

    decent concept, needs better wording to make it hit harder


    i wreck fakes who text great, u best break for da escape /
    Prophets of the Streets yet..wait, they're web based like Netscape/

    hahaha, nice..


    i bet fakes dickride ya riddles, i spit rhymes tough n chizzled /
    you so soft, i think ima stuff this bitch in side uv my pillow /

    ok.....pretty good....


    bout as hard as bras flat chested broad teens r stuffin /
    im not vegetarian, but i'll drop beef on this English muffin /

    i understood where you were going but if you arent vegetarian then what was the point of saying that you would drop beef on him and try to make a connection between the two??....alright concept tho....


    Finest of England's fuckin off, 2Shay too-day's ya dooms day /
    serve u like Ruby Tuesday's
    *cough*
    "'excuse may , i smell perfume spray" /

    nice...liked it


    if u fuckin wit it ........then come n get it hoe its on /
    this fool is fulla shit ....like a un attended porta john /

    dalright, enough to connect


    u couldnt hang wit me if u was Saddam Hussein for real /
    u fell off, i guess some grown men still need training wheels /

    not that great....


    You had a verse mixed with nice, alright, and so so lines....with a few lines that I didn't really understand really......The punches that were nice were not enough to get you the win tho.....better luck next time and work on ya' wording cuz your concepts are pretty good....just my opinion tho...


    Vote - 2 Shay
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  17. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    2shay:
    This was pretty dope, i like how this was writen it read well while listening to 8ball. some nice lines in here to. pz

    Scatterd Around The Boards WIth Your Identity Hard To Find,

    I'll Dissolve The Remains In Acid Just To Leave You In-Cognito,


    N:
    coo, i didnt mind this punches werent too hard though, it would of sounded better on audio. my fav bar.

    u couldnt hang wit me if u was Saddam Hussein for real /
    u fell off, i guess some grown men still need training wheels


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    i had to go with the one with better punches

    vote: 2shay
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  18. N. Cognito

    N. Cognito As Himself

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  19. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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  20. 2Xtreme

    2Xtreme a.k.a. Mad Static 4:14

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    Damn, this was a tough one...Both are yall are equal in punchlines. N. Cognito you stayed consistent through your verse, allowing to build it up, rather than combining lines together, which as Bonnie stated appeared in 2Shay's verse. However, despite his flaw, I felt that 2Shay's punchlines hit harder. So based on what I read, it's a hard decision at that, but my vote is gonna have to go to 2Shay based on the better punchlines.

    Winner= 2Shay
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