[RD1] 25. T.a.C vs 26. Tacitus

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Jun 11, 2012.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008


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    T.a.C- thedude8125
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  2. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008
  3. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008
    Sitting abandoned and alone
    Stranded in a home
    Implanted in my dome
    When I had a fam of my own
    When the house had sounds
    Now the echo’s scream loud
    Looking in the sky at green clouds
    They refuse to believe how I’m clean now

    I called my daughter last night
    It turned into a fast fight
    She said I’m dead to her
    And basically read my last rights
    I don’t even know what caused it
    But she said that I was equal to dog shit
    But maybe she didn’t hang up
    Maybe the signal was weak and I lost it
    I called this morning, she’s prolly in bed laying, still
    Or maybe she never mentioned her problems paying bills
    That’s prolly it, she wont admit down falls
    It perfectly explains why she ignored my 40 phone calls
    I love her, I don’t know what her problem is
    During her childhood, I was fucked up on a lot of shit
    But she cant remember that, she couldn’t possibly
    Her mother left her at age 10, what I could not believe
    Was that she told me her and her mom reconciled
    Then she had the nerve to call me a pedophile
    I racked my memory trying to figure out shit
    Calling her, asking her, until she told me forget about it
    She makes shit up, she gets that from her mother’s side
    Claiming I used to beat her until her brother tried
    To come over, he hit me and I beat him til that fucker died
    Got off on self defense, to this day I wonder why
    They make these accusations and massive exaggerations
    They have anger issues but they don’t have this patience
    To put up with their bull shit, their lies so deep rooted
    Yet they have the nerve to say MY memories are diluted

    Man, I miss the days before my dad bugged out
    Wish he coulda found a way to put the drugs down
    Dug down, found something deep within
    Before he tried to force me to sleep with him
    Thank God my mom heard and stopped the incident
    Called her brother, and my Dads been in prison ever since
    See, she hit him, enraged he punched her in the face
    He showed up, but was really minutes late
    She wasn’t breathing, right then I started to be afraid
    He confronted him, my Dad started to swing away
    Punch after punch, watching as my fear grows
    Witnessing two family members die at ten years old
    Claiming self defense, his lawyer made him plead insane
    From that day forward, he would never be the same
    I still visited him, though he suffered from some other stress
    He asked me how I felt, If I hated her since my mother left
    I told him I will always love her, that would be the truth
    He cocked his eyes, and looked back at me confused
    He’s in his own world, he thinks of himself as a trooper
    A sad side effect of being in a drug induced stupor
    He thinks he’s still at home, medicated to help him through
    His Straightjacket hugging tight, helping him to hide whats true
    The truth will pop him, like rubbing a balloon wit’ emeries
    So he lives in his padded room, lost in his diluted memories

    Diluted Memories
  4. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

    Aug 19, 2000
    T.a.c. wins via No Show

    Tac, earn a solid critique by voting on battles please
  5. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

    Aug 19, 2000
    uppin for critique
  6. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

    Oct 25, 2002
    Dark as all hell dude, really creepy from the drug addicts point of view.. Structure was tight as usual and the story progressed at a sweet pace.. Enjoyed the read, thanx mate..
  7. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

    Aug 19, 2000
    really enjoyed this read... it flowed well and it kept me entertained...

    not bad for a giants fan

  8. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

    Apr 12, 2000
    good job tacky, story line was great flow wasn't too bad and the topic was intriguing and properly executed.
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