[RD1] 2. Eggo vs 23. T R A P

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Friday @ 11:59pm PST.
    [02] – There are NO EXTENSIONS during the tourney.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 9:59pm PST.

    VOTING
    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.

    VERSES
    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.
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  2. eggo

    eggo gg

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  3. T R A P

    T R A P Senior Citizen.

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    Cool. Will match.
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  4. T R A P

    T R A P Senior Citizen.

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    it's trap mafucka, i'm known to stay on my job
    you're the type to get bullied and drink bleach like amanda todd
    eggo straight bitch, hella soft with all his "tough talk"
    tried to ghost-ride the whip and got uppercutted the fuck off
    seriously though, can't even fathom it dude
    how can you eat emcees if you're named after a breakfast food
    i'm bout that life, you'll never live it 'cuz ur raps aren't vivid
    a Sinister villain, known to kill within a snapshot image
    i bet in a fight, you come out swinging - with open hand slaps
    and there's earrings, sandals & purses scattered from the aftermath
    listen man, you really can't say or do shit to me
    but if this battle was based on "gayest 4-char rap name", you'd get a flawless victory
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  5. eggo

    eggo gg

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    Might need ext. but I'll try n post soon from my iPhone.
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  6. eggo

    eggo gg

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    Trap.

    Ya Body'll be declared ruptured N you suck it's not fair buster
    Dog Ill put trap on the ground faster than any fuckin bear hunter
    TRAP's perfectly shit. A knee injury ain't enough man I'm hurting this bitch
    AP act tough as a Viking.. Just to get a injury that can't be surgically fixed
    Ask if I'm the hottest n this faggot knows it'll get bad when I'm honest
    He was gay in the past.. N even r Kelly knows he was trapped in the closet
    Homo acts like he knows lyrics. He's fronting like he's the best in his class
    N homie I seen ya fucking lip sync.. But only from a dudes neck to his lap
    I reach pinnacles n even if you could train to ya best your peaks minimal
    There's strength in numbers n u'll always be the SAME pathetic weak individual
    There's force behind it. My punches destroy ya poor designing
    Son my fists'll cave ya chest in deep enuff fuckin spelunkers'll explore inside it



    Gl. Sorry been busy had to post while on road from my phone.
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  7. Lizmangsta

    Lizmangsta Well-Known Member

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    Cool Battle
    Like The Breakfast Food Reference From Trap
    Eggo Seemed To Have Much More Intricate Lines Though
    The "Strength In Numbers/Individual" And "R Kelly" Line Was Nice

    Eggo Got It For Me
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  8. BarZ.

    BarZ. Over Everything

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    i'm bout that life, you'll never live it 'cuz ur raps aren't vivid
    a Sinister villain, known to kill within a snapshot image
    i like this
    i bet in a fight, you come out swinging - with open hand slaps
    and there's earrings, sandals & purses scattered from the aftermath
    lol.. now this is a good bar
    listen man, you really can't say or do shit to me
    but if this battle was based on "gayest 4-char rap name", you'd get a flawless victory
    coulda worded this to make it fresh



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    Ya Body'll be declared ruptured N you suck it's not fair buster
    Dog Ill put trap on the ground faster than any fuckin bear hunter
    decent
    TRAP's perfectly shit. A knee injury ain't enough man I'm hurting this bitch
    AP act tough as a Viking.. Just to get a injury that can't be surgically fixed
    injury in both lines didn't ride right.. it's decent
    Ask if I'm the hottest n this faggot knows it'll get bad when I'm honest
    He was gay in the past.. N even r Kelly knows he was trapped in the closet
    wording coulda made it fresher.. pretty straight tho
    Homo acts like he knows lyrics. He's fronting like he's the best in his class
    N homie I seen ya fucking lip sync.. But only from a dudes neck to his lap
    lol... i chuckled
    I reach pinnacles n even if you could train to ya best your peaks minimal
    There's strength in numbers n u'll always be the SAME pathetic weak individual
    cool
    There's force behind it. My punches destroy ya poor designing
    Son my fists'll cave ya chest in deep enuff fuckin spelunkers'll explore inside it
    another good bar



    trap.. verse was ok.. started real slow and picked up the end... the open hand slaps bar was pretty fresh.. i like the wording on that....
    eggo decent verse... way more consistent anad some pretty good lines too...


    v- eggo
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  9. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    seriously though, can't even fathom it dude
    how can you eat emcees if you're named after a breakfast food
    i'm bout that life, you'll never live it 'cuz ur raps aren't vivid
    a Sinister villain, known to kill within a snapshot image
    i bet in a fight, you come out swinging - with open hand slaps
    and there's earrings, sandals & purses scattered from the aftermath

    vs.

    Ya Body'll be declared ruptured N you suck it's not fair buster
    Dog Ill put trap on the ground faster than any fuckin bear hunter

    Homo acts like he knows lyrics. He's fronting like he's the best in his class
    N homie I seen ya fucking lip sync.. But only from a dudes neck to his lap

    Vote: Trap

    He had a few more lines I liked. Eggo was pretty weak this round. I did like the two I posted above, but the rest was ehhhh. Did U seriously post a 'cave' in ya chest line? lol
    Trap started off slow, but ended solid.
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  10. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    Best Bar:

    T R A P

    i'm bout that life, you'll never live it 'cuz ur raps aren't vivid
    a Sinister villain, known to kill within a snapshot image

    Eggo

    Ya Body'll be declared ruptured N you suck it's not fair buster
    Dog Ill put trap on the ground faster than any fuckin bear hunter

    Trap's first too bars wasnt too hard hitting.. and Tacky's Amanda Todd line was executed better. The next three bars tho was solid especially the sinister line and the sandal, etc. line. i like the execution on those. Ending was just a little off to me idk..

    Eggo's first two bars was nameplays but i only liked the first one only.. AP nameplay was a little too forced. trapped in the closet line, lip sync line, and cave in your chest line was played. strength in numbers was ok.

    v/ TRAP.. i liked more lines from him and had LOTB with sinister line. Eggo seemed more complex but most concepts have been done. Good battle guys.
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  11. Split Eight

    Split Eight evilest of 9's

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    TRAP:
    a Sinister villain, known to kill within a snapshot image
    i bet in a fight, you come out swinging - with open hand slaps

    Eggo:
    Homo acts like he knows lyrics. He's fronting like he's the best in his class
    N homie I seen ya fucking lip sync.. But only from a dudes neck to his lap
    I reach pinnacles n even if you could train to ya best your peaks minimal
    There's strength in numbers n u'll always be the SAME pathetic weak individual

    lolol that first bar had me dying.

    i think eggo's nameplays were off, but Trap was a little low in complexity. idk, i was really feeling eggo's lines. just a matter of personal preference.

    V/ Eggo
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  12. Allen Knight

    Allen Knight sending terror

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    bet in a fight, you come out swinging - with open hand slaps
    and there's earrings, sandals & purses scattered from the aftermath
    listen man, you really can't say or do shit to me
    but if this battle was based on "gayest 4-char rap name", you'd get a flawless victory




    vs



    Ya Body'll be declared ruptured N you suck it's not fair buster
    Dog Ill put trap on the ground faster than any fuckin bear hunter
    TRAP's perfectly shit. A knee injury ain't enough man I'm hurting this bitch
    AP act tough as a Viking.. Just to get a injury that can't be surgically fixed
    Ask if I'm the hottest n this faggot knows it'll get bad when I'm honest
    He was gay in the past.. N even r Kelly knows he was trapped in the closet
    Homo acts like he knows lyrics. He's fronting like he's the best in his class
    N homie I seen ya fucking lip sync.. But only from a dudes neck to his lap

    V/eggo, cool battle but i felt eggo verse was more consistent over all wit some nice
    lines tbh, trap scattered line was cool but eggo took it.
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  13. SiegeSupreme

    SiegeSupreme Well-Known Member

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    Both game below par but Eggo did enough to win. His opener was LOTB and he had a few more quotables.

    Trap came ok but didnt deliver his concepts hard enough. The breakfast food scheme couldve been done/worded a LOT better and hit harder. Bottom line you showed a lil promise but need to execute better.
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  14. A.S.B

    A.S.B I Don't Like You

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    Decent verse from trap. Thought the open hand slap, earrings sandals purses aftermath punch was really good. But overall I thought eggo had the edge on structure, flow and punches. Really liked the trap bear hunter punch.

    Vote=Eggo
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  15. Synthesis

    Synthesis applied

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    gotta say going in i xpected trap to win, but. im going with eggo

    eggo had the bear trap line, the AP line. honestly tho equally bad lines with the trapped in the closet, lip sync..

    trap man u just didt have any punches that hit for me..the aftermath of the fight line was OK, and thats really all i liked..

    vote - eggo
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  16. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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