[RD1] 12. Allen Knight vs 13. Storyteller

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Friday @ 11:59pm PST.
    [02] – There are NO EXTENSIONS during the tourney.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 9:59pm PST.

    VOTING
    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.

    VERSES
    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.
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  2. Storyteller

    Storyteller .:Your Fav. Mc's Idol:.

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    I'm here


    Thanks @tackyjones
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  3. Allen Knight

    Allen Knight sending terror

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    10 n sorry for ur bad luck son
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  4. Storyteller

    Storyteller .:Your Fav. Mc's Idol:.

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    ^^ who the fuck this bitch @Tacky Jones @Brown Jesus


    Anyways fuck this cold case


    This dude done, to think he a threat you gotta be kiddin' me,
    But if he dickrides I'll take him seriously since he a knight rider literally,
    Run with the heat- scorchin' but this mohican being served for dinner,
    after I severe your liver with a pair of scissors..
    ...N hand him to God for revival to beat him again cuz I'm N Indian giver
    Ive peeped game and honestly I am really disturbed at this ho,
    Cause if I told knight to keep it real...
    ... he'd rip off his shirt ,marker some hair and do his favorite hasselhoff pose.
    Fed to the shark so I get why he always stallin' to brawl,
    Cause when it comes to standing tall when natures calls he just ends up pissin' his balls.
    Yeah I write poetry and tellin stories through rhymes is my muse,
    No spit game doesn't accrue cause my forte' just proves I'm better at words than you.
    Cant seem to stay on track and all his wit game is wack
    We acknowledge you Allen as Knight cause you the blackest of black.
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  5. Allen Knight

    Allen Knight sending terror

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    key sumthing quick

    u dont get pussy an paper, its all lies an funny hip shit
    your only a storyteller...cuz u say fictional ones about money n bitches
    u run from conflicts, i pulled out the gat to put a stop to ya bum
    my cannons like a opera n ur the fat bitch screaming at the top of ya lungs
    u deal wit loose hoes, only nasty sluts been wit him
    its no suprise u like ur women like the ocean....being able to swim in them
    ur whip is beat to shit, annoying noises coming from the rear vent an rim
    the squeaky wheel gets the oil n im cutting ur brake lines to never hear it again
    ur history shows ur up n down wack, wat i send this cunts dying
    u have sucha turbulent past, they took ur passport n id to prevent u from flying
    u should be named writers block, ur always tryna come up wit ya wack shit
    u can think hard for a verse n wen ur brain waves create 1 i'll drown u in that bitch
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  6. Storyteller

    Storyteller .:Your Fav. Mc's Idol:.

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    Props @Allen Knight thanks for showing. Illing verse my dude
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  7. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    Storyteller

    Allen Knight

    Overall, a pretty weak battle. Storyteller was a little more personal but he really struggled to put punches together. Allen Knight was somewhat sloppy and used some played concepts, but his punches rhymed better and his last few lines were enough to give him some type of edge in the battle.

    Vote: Allen Knight
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  8. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    Wasn't really feeling anything or thought of any highlighted punches to take away from this battle. I sort of get the just of the 'cutting the break lines' line... like, maybe insinuating his opponent crashing (?). Deciding factor comes down to the opener and closer... AK's hit harder

    vote - AK
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  9. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    vote is below...
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  10. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    Nothing

    vs.

    u dont get pussy an paper, its all lies an funny hip shit
    your only a storyteller...cuz u say fictional ones about money n bitches

    There was a lot of filler/punches I didn't like between both of U. Storyteller, I see the potential there, but U need to dig deeper and word ya shit better. That knight rider line could've been good with better wording, and the hasselholf line would've been more effective if it was. Those two could've won the battle for U, but I'm not feeling them as they stand. Allen had the storyteller line. That was a cool nameplay. I didn't like the rest of his verse. Again, the concepts were there, but the wording wasn't. It could've been a nice verse with the right wording.

    Vote: Allen Knight
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  11. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    Best Bars:

    Storyteller
    Fed to the shark so I get why he always stallin' to brawl,
    Cause when it comes to standing tall when natures calls he just ends up pissin' his balls.
    ..best worded punch you have

    Allen Knight
    history shows ur up n down wack, wat i send this cunts dying
    u have sucha turbulent past, they took ur passport n id to prevent u from flying
    ..new concept to me

    Storyteller your verse got a little wordy to me and wording on your punches impacted the final effect, but hey I need to work on that too. Allen Knight not a great verse but it was ok. Better executed imo

    V/Allen Knight
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  12. BarZ.

    BarZ. Over Everything

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    Ive peeped game and honestly I am really disturbed at this ho,
    Cause if I told knight to keep it real...
    ... he'd rip off his shirt ,marker some hair and do his favorite hasselhoff pose.



    vs


    ak

    u dont get pussy an paper, its all lies an funny hip shit
    your only a storyteller...cuz u say fictional ones about money n bitches

    the rr history shows ur up n down wack, wat i send this cunts dying
    u have sucha turbulent past, they took ur passport n id to prevent u from flying


    vote - ak
    better verse in general... had the lotb w/ the passport .... st hasslehoff line was decent and i chuckled a littled bit.... other than ak had better punches
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  13. eggo

    eggo gg

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    This in quotables was Ak opener and his opera line. Didn't really see anything special from storyteller in this one. Only those two punches stood out to me tbh. Good battle

    V/AK
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  14. A.S.B

    A.S.B I Don't Like You

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    Kind of a subpar battle in my opinion, neither verse really stood out in my opinion. But I think Allen Knight edged it on wordplay. I think the turbulent past, take your passport line was decent and if phrased better if would have been really good.

    Vote=Allen Knight
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  15. Storyteller

    Storyteller .:Your Fav. Mc's Idol:.

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    Thanks for all the critique I am new to this so I'm trying to elevate

    Thanks


    Will vote on m battles once I get home
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  16. Synthesis

    Synthesis applied

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    vote- allen knight..

    mainly because he had a couple punches, and man storyteller had like none, aside from maybe the indian giver line and man, a lot of ur lines were blah.. blackest of black? do u even know that? knight rider?

    knight was ok. lot of bland stuff, only really decent punch was the opera one.. and that was enough to win..

    blah
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  17. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Allen Knight wins
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