[RD1] 11. J. Keeper vs 12. kalamaty

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Jun 11, 2012.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008


    VERSUS DUE: Every Friday @ 11:59 PM PST
    LINE LIMIT: Minimum of 16 lines, Maximum of 64
    •Recycling is the equivalent to that of a no-show and will be treated as such, thus resulting in a loss in favor of the participant whom chose to recycle and a win in favor of his/her opponent
    •Extensions may only be granted if a moderator has given consent prior to a verse being posted in the match OR your opponent gives his consent. Failure to acknowledge an extension request results in it being granted.
    •If granted, the extension will override deadline for both participants extending it for no more than 24 hours
    •CHECK-INS are encouraged, but not required
    •Verses MUST incorporate AT LEAST 1 of the provided topics or pictures
    •A failure to show will result in a loss and a sign out by default. A no show in the tourney will result in elimination.
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  2. J Keeper

    J Keeper Super Jesus

    Jun 3, 2010
    Plastic Surgery

    ...Hello, love,
    We've got a beach full of sand and a yellow sun,
    And I know you feel love for a fellow shmuck,
    So reach for my hand, and help me up...
    ...I tell you what,
    You finish this surgery, I'll sell the drugs,
    Because your sloth is a felon's crutch,
    I can grin through your compliments, I felt the touch...
    ...They were too damn sweet,
    A couple unlike any other you might meet,
    In love with each other, and the new night's dream,
    And they would dream till the sun shined too brightly, those two eyes gleam,
    She was pretty, she had to be, to him,
    Half of each her lips and hips were practically a gift,
    He never stopped working, scalpel and stitch,
    Enough to make a man doubt the fallacies within,
    Like beauty, is inside every human,
    He knew it, but he never felt attached to the movement,
    He was always aesthetic, with a poetry fetish,
    Loved the flow of the words and the motions embedded,
    He tried paint poet's words on the face known to her,
    With a blade, slowly curved to the fate shown to her,
    Yea it's her, she was his greatest creation,
    He went to school for these things, and he payed with his patience,
    He loved plastic, loved how it melted and changed,
    It could bend, it could move, it developed in rain,
    But he never found a woman that could handle the sonnet,
    So he started writing poetry with animatronics...
    ....He felt human beings made the choices he hated,
    And he loved when she'd speak in the voice he created,
    Plastic arms, plastic legs,
    A mastered voice,
    A spinal mold, he can cast her poise,
    He made himself a lover with the plastic that he knew,
    Shaping with a scalpel and the facets of his mood...
  3. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

    Aug 19, 2000
    J Keeper wins via No Show

    Verse long enough for critique

    Earn your critique by voting

    thank you
  4. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

    Oct 25, 2002
    I liked this dude, im watching nip tuck from season 1 - 6 with the misses, in fact shes in the bedroom watching it as i type. Good read your rhyme structure is hot but you know that and when it comes down to the crunch with your style you will be a fierce writer to go against.. Good luck dude, nice drop
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