Rd. 2 TooFly vs Jack McCrack

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  1. Plekz

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    GRB - Grand Royal Audio Battle 2008 Rules - First Round

    - 2nd Round Audios are DUE Thursday Night Jan 8th at 11.59 pm cst.
    - Theme: up to 2-3+ Minutes must be about your opponent(s)
    - You must mention their BOARD name(s). Must be atleast 2 minutes.
    - If audio is not two minutes, you must contest it if you want a DQ.
    - One mp3 File Must Be posted Thursday Night Jan 8th at 11.59 pm cst.- We will not store any audio files.
    - YOU MUST post using your board name that is registered to the match. Others will be DQ'ed.
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  2. Jack McCrack

    Jack McCrack Somethin I gotta deal wit

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    First off I wanna say this is the second time in this tournament I've received no info on my opponent, despite me supplying all of my information to them via PM. I'm only saying this because I mention it in my verse. I PMd this dude and said "don't pull any bitch shit, reply to this message" and dude replies a week later in a PM just quoting me with no other text :screwy: the only information I was able to find on the board was his website www.toofly.net. *****EDIT***** He just PM'd me today (tuesday) telling me he sent his myspace link but Somehow it didn't come through in the PM [dunno] . I'd also like to apologize for not citing the soundclick link he posted in his round 1 battle, but obviously a page with only instrumentals (plus a round 1 track) really didn't help much. In the "post your music links" thread however he only posted the toofly.net link, which is what I was citing before. Now that I got his myspace I wish I could add to my verse but sadly I'm not getting back to my house until the weekend. So without further delay here is my round 2 track.

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    SoundClick artist: Jack Raps Good - page with MP3 music downloads


    Too Fly homie too fly for what?/
    You gonna need to step it up round one was a bust/
    First you had to face the whackest guy in the tourny/
    Now to try "jack" McCrack you goin home in a gourny/

    I aint a nerdy ass "Zero"* you better switch ya blueprint/*
    And Exclude autotune when your spittin to me stupid**/
    I'll render you useless you just hate on cats/
    So I'm quick to pop fly without a baseball bat/

    Toofly was too high and fell off and crashed/
    The only way he'd ever make an impact in rap/

    TooFly.net check it people it's nonsense/
    If "2008s your year" how come you got no content?/
    When right around the corners 2009/
    In fact thats the due date so I'mabid you good bye!/

    TooFly, Three Fly, Two Fly, One/
    TooFlys true life this guys done/
    As far as I can say his scenarios gay/
    So I be swattin at a fly worse than mario paint/

    I really aint sorry because this faggot is done with/
    Round one sucka tried to step with a club hit/
    I'll hit you with a front kick you gettin ya but kicked/
    Are you english or russian man quit all the frontin/

    You aint a joe budden I'd be willin to fight you/
    I'd hide my songs too if I sounded just like you
    I'm lacin the piff you can't make flavor like this/
    Is he white or is he black? On some MJ shit/

    But you aint worth shit stay hiding your info/
    You pictures and tracks bro this dudes a fcuking asshole/

    Conceil all your facts never posting a track/
    Not a picture on the net how do I diss that?/
    You shouldve just been cum stain on a nut rag/
    Instead you try and cheat on the status of scum bag/

    Dumb fag in a freestyle ya done boy/
    Cuz you stumped on the head like some horns on hell boy/
    I kick it well boy ya bitch was beggin for my cream/
    I covered her in semen like a CSI Scene/

    So fuck you, fuck your mother and who your cool with/
    You used that autotune and to me you looked foolish/

    Slipped past round one it was practically a no show/
    And now you talkin tough like you gonna go pro?/
    I don't think so - You skinny bastard i laugh/
    Because you lack the format to beat McCrack on the warpath.

    So keep making beats, and still keep it on the down low/
    Even the free tracks were not worth the download/
    And i'll give you free advice before I'm spreadin gore/
    Stop smokin cigarettes before you record/

    Oh wait ya british i forgot the slang/
    Cuz you don't smoke cigarettes instead you "blow fags"/

    So go ahead and fuck with an inhaler or something/
    Cuz your raspy ass voice hardly somethin I would fuck wit/
    This dudes got "Relationship Problems" like Chuck and Larry/***
    Your logo is pink which is quite fitting you fuckin fairy/

    So i keep it real raw beef I handle with steak sauce/
    i don't boot leg travolta flicks ill still rip ya face off/
    When you don't play fair I'ma leave you to fester/
    And you'll get what's comin to you like a victim on Dexter/
    *Battled Zero-D Last Round
    **Used autotune in his verse last round
    ***Has a beat on his soundclick named "Relationship Problems"
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  3. TooFly

    TooFly New Member

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    Id rather not have to type but to address what Jack said in his post.

    This is round 2. So he should know enough about me from the the round 1 thread.

    There WAS a link to SOUNDCLICK in RD 1. It's not rocket science to find it.

    He say's I posted the link to www.toofly.net in the post your links thread. This isn't true, i've never posted in this thread at all. I didnt even know about this thread. The only reason he knows about this site is because i uploaded my RD 1 track to that site incase soundclick went down.

    As far as myspace. He asked me for a link via PM and i thought id sent the link to him. However for some reason, the PM screwed up. He didn't reply to query this, so i didn't even know this was the case until he posted in this thread on Tuesday. Immediately when i saw it, i went to my sent messages to check, when i saw it was screwed i sent my myspace immediately and said he could add to his verse (At this point I hadnt even started writing, so there was no reason why he couldn't add imo). You can ask my opponent from the last round I have no intention of hiding links.

    [youtube]<object width="425" height="344"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/2CuIb4dueZQ&hl=en&fs=1"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param><embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/2CuIb4dueZQ&hl=en&fs=1" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowscriptaccess="always" allowfullscreen="true" width="425" height="344"></embed></object>[/youtube]

    The Video - YouTube - vs jack mccrack 2

    SoundClick artist: TooFly Music - page with MP3 music downloads

    Good Luck.

    Homie your ugly as fuck, but i aint hating/
    Your face got more spots on it than dalmations/

    You aint getting a deal/
    Ugly face, whack flow, whack voice and a name like a mcdonalds meal/

    My right hand's blazing/
    So imma knock your ass out until you see more stars than a spacestation/

    Youve never been amazing/
    Wanna see round 3, you better cop fight night on the playstation/

    I left it late and kept you've been waiting/
    So im gonna take kid to school like i raised him/

    You need to take your name, rethink and rebadge/
    Think crack the shit must need some time in rehab/

    My careers on the up and you wanna come with me/
    I'll put jacks on ice like tenesse whiskey/

    you aint close to amazin/ Better than me?/
    Yea right, like george bush aint a racist/

    i've seen your pics homie i aint really feeling them/
    you either trying to act black or act like eminem/

    your sounding feminine/
    your voice is so high pitched, it's high risk on the ears just to listen in/

    Its clear who you wanna be/
    You using photoshop to make Jack, Black like Tenacious D/

    I hope your sister is impressed when she hears this/
    Because i wanna 'fill her', get it, like you verses/

    Your lines simple fillers know what i mean/
    While my rhymes stay complex like the magazine/

    Didnt get it when i said you needed swagger jack/
    I didnt mean to take Noodles style and just run with that/

    I saw you on the forums callin me a mercenary/
    You couldn't beat me if you knew my ass personally/

    So shut the fuck up/ your whole style weak/
    Got more chance of beating bin laden in hide and go seek/

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  4. enef

    enef voting against DZK in every round.

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  5. jayoo

    jayoo new york representative

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    no idea yet ill be back
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  6. Willy

    Willy DZK's Biggest Fan

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    dude them girls where hott. ?
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  7. Katastrofik

    Katastrofik THE SOUND OF L.I

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    I'm Not Sure Yet, I'll Be Back Later..
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  8. Zero-D

    Zero-D Brilliance Unparalleled

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    I heard both of these verses already-and McCrack got this. No hate Toofly-McCrack just edged you out ont is one-BIIIIIIIG improvement since your battle agsinst me last round.

    Good drops from both, but i gotta go w/ mcCrack-

    Vote--Jack McCrack
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  9. Emo The Damaja

    Emo The Damaja I survived Rapture 2011 b

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    Imma peep tonight, and vote tomorrow.
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  10. T-Hype

    T-Hype New Member

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    Jack easily took this battle.

    Vote = JackMcCrack
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  11. Jack McCrack

    Jack McCrack Somethin I gotta deal wit

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    You forgot to vote!

    Or are you not in the tournament, Hype?
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  12. TooFly

    TooFly New Member

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    I'm always sceptical about these posters in GRB threads who:

    A) Have very few posts
    B) Arn't in the tourney

    Don't get me wrong, everyone is allowed an opinion, but the question is should people who aint in the tourney be allowed to influence the voters?

    I'm sure there are lots of people making alias' just to influence the votes because of this.
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  13. CheddaCheese

    CheddaCheese The Cheese

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    Both had some decent personals, but Jack McCrack took this one with more conistent punches, rhymeschemes and an overall better sounding verse.
    Vote - Jack McCrack
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  14. Dizeazed

    Dizeazed -Stay crazy!-

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    Jack McCrack: Damn, heh, straight into the verse without missing a beat! I like that approach, though I have yet to use it myself. Beat is dope. Perfect energy, I vibed with the bounce of your flow, presentation was legit and punches were good. Not too much to complain about, but your punch-ins were pretty obvious while I was listening. It's ok to take a breath, boss. I know you wanna win, but you don't needa cram so many lyrics into your shit so that you run outta breath every other bar. Heh.

    TooFly: Not too fond of the chipmunk introduction. Wicked beat though, perfect energy for a battle track... Damn, though your presentation was legit, I wasn't feeling your energy at all. Why you whispering over such a mean beat!? I wish you woulda got more aggressive with this shit. I was really vibing with your flow, but I wanted more material from you. Bummer too, I was all grooving with your shit then I was like ".... WTF.... Done already?".

    Overall: I gotta give my vote to Jack. Dude sounds hungry and spit with that attention grabbing energy which made me catch almost all of his punches on the first listen. TooFly brought a good game, but slacked in the material department. Just 2-4 more stanza's from TooFly and I probably woulda voted for'em. Either way, this battle is dope, and I hope it doesn't get slept on. Good luck in round 3 to whoever advances.
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  15. DRUG.

    DRUG. Registered Felon

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    Jack - flow is kinda bouncy......baseball line wasnt too bad......o I be swattin at a fly worse than mario paint ha, travolta line.....

    pretty cool.



    toofly - haha @ more spots on it than dalmations, wow at tennesee whiskey


    ight....toofly had way more lines and punches, but he needs mad work on his delivery....they aint hittin hard when u aint puttin no energy in them...

    jack needs to work on his punches, alot of them were played and alot of filler

    this is a really close battle because of that....but ima vote toofly
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  16. Jack McCrack

    Jack McCrack Somethin I gotta deal wit

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    He has an AIM screen name I don't think it was an alias.

    but i see what your saying
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  17. Katastrofik

    Katastrofik THE SOUND OF L.I

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    Jack McCrack - Ill Beat, Delivery Is Nice, Flow Is Good, Some Nice Disses, lol @ mario paint, lol @ hide songs, lol @ mj shit, lol @ rag line, hellboy, LMAO @ csi scene, lol @ blow fags, Nice Audio Homie..

    TooFly - lol @ ya intro, Dalmations line was nice, flow is nice, space station, fight night, Delivery is ok, lol @ Tenacious D, Nice Audio Fam..

    This Was A Nice Battle To LIsten To. I'ma Give My Vote To Jack McCrack, For Edging This Battle With Punches, And Having The Better Delivery Of The 2. Both FLows Were Good.

    Vote - Jack McCrack

    Good Battle From Both Emcees And Good Luck To Both..
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  18. The_K3

    The_K3 ^Secksi^

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    really close ass battle i just think jackmcracks presense was alot better thats what took it for me.. toofly ur verse was ill as fuck nice lfips everything u just didnt hit hard with the delivery imo
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  19. BULLY

    BULLY LOL

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    i think this was a close battle. too fly had some pretty good lyrics, but i just think jack went harder lyrically and with the overall delivery. THat sleepy style dont go over well in a battle when lyrically your opponent is so close. I think McCrack edged it, but good battle from both.
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  20. Noodles

    Noodles The People's Champion

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    Had to listen to this battle twice to make my decision.. Good stuff from both of you.

    Jack - work on your BREATH CONTROL. When you choose to roll with an amped style, it has its consequences. Breath control is one of those things your gonna need to work on to keep improving this style. It took me a while to get "think about breathing" into my head because its something you don't think to do, you know?

    TooFly - People complaining about your "sleepy style"... my suggestion is to mix your vocals better. From my view point, I was playing the track loud and I thought your delivery was dope. If you mix your vocals up higher - and possibly DONT post a video (that lowers the quality of your audio) i think more people wouldve shared my sentiments. Other than that... try DOUBLE-TRACKING your punchlines for effect, so its not one big run-on sentence like they are saying.

    You both flowed on point but I think the TooFly was overall more polished because Jack was punching in ALL THE TIME. I mean it sounded aight, but to me it was just too obvious jack. And liek I said I understand why your amped - but you gotta work on writing lyrics to the flow that arent too long that you gotta punch em in. I thought lyrically ya'll were on the same level and I enjoyed some lines.

    So I'm giving this one to TooFly.

    Good luck to whomever passes through, and thank both of you for checking out my 2nd round :)
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