RD. 1> ShadowWarriorfs / T.a.C. vs. .:Pain:. / D.LOKE

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  1. Sin Skywalker

    Sin Skywalker #184 Gladiator.

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    20 Line limit per team.
    10 Line limit per individual.
    Verses Due Wednesday, 3/17/10 @ 12:00 AM midnight.
    Voting Due Friday, 3/19/10 @ 12:00 AM midnight.
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  2. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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  3. D.LOKE

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  4. Tacky Jones

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    put 10 minutes into this...sorry


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1184051

    I get excited to face good opponents, this is a grave warning
    Er…wait, Its only .:pain:. and Loke, that mus be why I’m writing this Wednesday morning
    Pain, you tried to help me fix my life, times passed and nothings changed
    I got a suggestion how to improve yours, buy a gun and put it to your fuckin face
    Seriously, jus quit rap, honestly he comes up with THE worst shit
    But then again, if he spits the thoughts he’d have, he would always end up verseless
    I fucked you up in the RBL, shit yes left you killed, bleeding
    I showed dude who was the real .:pain:., Jus wanna know if your ass is still stinging
    With these dinks, I can halfass my verse and look like im tryna win
    D.Loke don’t think I forgot about you…but you’re so insignificant I kinda did
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  5. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    Writing has become effortless as a simple fact remains
    D.Loke’s rhymes must be anesthetic because no one feels Pain
    Your concept is boring, I can’t even get up to fight you
    D. overdoses on aphrodisiacs just so his rhymes can excite you
    It’s actually pathetic the way these idiots write lyrics
    Fearing my tight spits as these clowns ghost their spirits
    It probably best you no show in this tactical bout
    My flows clog your throat as punches shatter your spout
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  6. D.LOKE

    D.LOKE New Member

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    alright fellas

    Dont ever do an audio Tac cuz guy'll straight murk ya
    Ya punchlines and concepts are just about older than Chase murda
    Ya Stank worder..but the Shadow newb's probably worse ranked
    His only Hands-on' experience involves himself in backrooms at Sperm Banks
    He need to know what puss feels like and he best hurry
    Girl Feel Warrior's game tho...
    .............but it's the Sluts that's checking for Steff Curry
    Tac pretends his few RBL wins were so tight
    We pretended too...
    ............That those wins weren't because of Quriosity Ghost writes


    I wont say you stole my line Shadow but you were fast to use it
    You bite on rectums and poor Tac got the teeth marks in his ass to prove it
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  7. .:Pain:.

    .:Pain:. Futurely J. Keeper

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    God damn it I completely forgot.

    Mind if I just key somethin' between classes today?
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  8. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    that works for me pain..i don't mind
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  9. Tacky Jones

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    its cool. do it
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  10. Sin Skywalker

    Sin Skywalker #184 Gladiator.

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    go ahead, hurry up & get a verse in asap since everybody is cool with that.
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  11. .:Pain:.

    .:Pain:. Futurely J. Keeper

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    Virgin Tacquiry,
    Known for his own brand of west coast urban faggotry,
    Now has the nerve to battle me,
    More corny name flips? Well now the nerve is rattling,
    Ain't strange, .:pain:. came, raped the virgin out of him,
    And ShadowWarriors, grown-ass man, I'd punch the shit outta this dude,
    For namin' himself after what sounds like a dungeons and dragons crew,
    Who the fuck is Kataro? And anime is still for fags,
    Shit hasn't changed since the day the school quarterback almost killed your ass,
    Still as lame and nerdy as ever, which is why you and tac are matched up today,
    Tac got at em like, "Hey shadow! Let's aim chat,
    For days about how we never get laid!"
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  12. TWAMP$iN

    TWAMP$iN proper weaponry

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    T.a.C

    I get excited to face good opponents, this is a grave warning
    Er…wait, Its only .:pain:. and Loke, that mus be why I’m writing this Wednesday morning

    ^^4/5

    Pain, you tried to help me fix my life, times passed and nothings changed
    I got a suggestion how to improve yours, buy a gun and put it to your fuckin face

    ^^2/5

    Seriously, jus quit rap, honestly he comes up with THE worst shit
    But then again, if he spits the thoughts he’d have, he would always end up verseless

    ^^1/5

    I fucked you up in the RBL, shit yes left you killed, bleeding
    I showed dude who was the real .:pain:., Jus wanna know if your ass is still stinging

    ^^1/5

    With these dinks, I can halfass my verse and look like im tryna win
    D.Loke don’t think I forgot about you…but you’re so insignificant I kinda did

    ^^4/5

    ShadowWarriorfs

    Writing has become effortless as a simple fact remains
    D.Loke’s rhymes must be anesthetic because no one feels Pain

    ^^5/5

    Your concept is boring, I can’t even get up to fight you
    D. overdoses on aphrodisiacs just so his rhymes can excite you

    ^^2/5

    It’s actually pathetic the way these idiots write lyrics
    Fearing my tight spits as these clowns ghost their spirits

    ^^4.5/5

    It probably best you no show in this tactical bout
    My flows clog your throat as punches shatter your spout

    ^^1/5

    -- [[ VS ]] --


    D.LOKE

    Dont ever do an audio Tac cuz guy'll straight murk ya
    Ya punchlines and concepts are just about older than Chase murda

    ^^1.5/5

    Ya Stank worder..but the Shadow newb's probably worse ranked
    His only Hands-on' experience involves himself in backrooms at Sperm Banks

    ^^3.5/5

    He need to know what puss feels like and he best hurry
    Girl Feel Warrior's game tho...
    .............but it's the Sluts that's checking for Steff Curry

    ^^5/5

    Tac pretends his few RBL wins were so tight
    We pretended too...
    ............That those wins weren't because of Quriosity Ghost writes

    ^^3/5

    .:pain:.

    Virgin Tacquiry,
    Known for his own brand of west coast urban faggotry,
    Now has the nerve to battle me,
    More corny name flips? Well now the nerve is rattling

    ^^2.5/5

    Ain't strange, .:pain:. came, raped the virgin out of him,
    And ShadowWarriors, grown-ass man, I'd punch the shit outta this dude,
    For namin' himself after what sounds like a dungeons and dragons crew,

    ^^2/5

    Who the fuck is Kataro? And anime is still for fags,
    Shit hasn't changed since the day the school quarterback almost killed your ass,

    ^^1/5

    Still as lame and nerdy as ever, which is why you and tac are matched up today,
    Tac got at em like, "Hey shadow! Let's aim chat,
    For days about how we never get laid!"

    ^^1/5





    vote -
    respect to both parties. i ain't taking no sides and don't be disgruntled on how i voted, i didn't understand every punchline so i just based it off my own interpretation of what ya'll was saying. i think ShadowWarriorfs/ T.a.C took it. Pain, i don't understand how you counted the bars and D.Loke, i didn't understand some of your lines.



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  13. D.LOKE

    D.LOKE New Member

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    ^ ^

    Forgot to give my closer a number but alright man


    uppin for votes
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  14. FreefaLL

    FreefaLL FreefaLL

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    Tac:
    With these dinks, I can halfass my verse and look like im tryna win
    D.Loke don’t think I forgot about you…but you’re so insignificant I kinda did

    as simple as it is i liked it

    But D Lokes verse completely outshadowed the rest of the battle. More flowable to a beat, all multis, punchlines on every line, sperm bank line and ghostwrite lines were good. Just an overall much better verse than the other teams'.

    Vote: D Loke / Pain



    although to note, D Loke should have kept the trash talking out, that barely looks like a bitten line, dont act like no one has ever said rectum/wrecked-em before.
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  15. Sin Skywalker

    Sin Skywalker #184 Gladiator.

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    votes -

    ShadowWarriorfs / T.a.C. - 1
    D. LOKE / .:pain:. - 1

    up for votes. i'll vote on this tomorrow sometime.
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  16. Tacky Jones

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