Rd. 1 Past-one vs Poeticks

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  1. Plekz

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  2. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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  3. Poeticks

    Poeticks MY TIME HAS COME

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  5. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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    nice drop lets get these votes in
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  6. BULLY

    BULLY LOL

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    upping since this is an active battle
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  7. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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  8. Dizeazed

    Dizeazed -Stay crazy!-

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    Past-one: Beat is cool, energy is proper, but it was hard to hear you. Your flow needs a little polish, but you definitely came hungry with the punches. Good drop.

    Poeticks: Good beat, good energy. Your backing vocals were off and distracted my "listening experience". Lol. No, but seriously. Make them match up better next time, or scratch them completely. Try to make your verse at least two minutes next time, put some effort into this.

    As far as punchlines and blatant effort is concerned, I think Past-one easily took this.
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  9. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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    yea if i wasnt sick as shit i woulda spent time mixxing better but w/e i posted the lyrics on my myspace also
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  10. Noodles

    Noodles The People's Champion

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    poeticks i just wasnt feeling your drop this time homey... it was suppper short, not loaded with enough material, and you havent seemed to improved your polish since the last time i heard you. i expect more from you cause i want to see you keep growing as a rapper. the accapella drops dont fly anymore these days...

    past-one other than a horrible low mix that made it hard to hear had a pretty solid drop. some good content and everything seemed to fit it,

    vote-pastone
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  11. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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    uping thisss for more votes
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  12. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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    lalalallala
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  13. ProFane

    ProFane dB's Finest

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    Past one- voice sounds decent. flows pretty decent. you beat me the games over? Push you out the whip line was tight. christian bale line was pretty good. it was hard for me to make out alot of your lines till about around that point. i had to rewind your track and throw on the headphones. side note i listened to the back and forth track because it came on automatically and shit was nice man. i was about to turn it off then was like this shit rides. lol

    Poeticks- your lines stuck out right away as being better for me. the past name flips were good. jeff made sure/rough past. the TO line was very good. diego line was good.

    imma go against the current current and vote Poetiks. i think his lines were wittier. past one sounded smoother but Poetiks sounded more creative to me. this was a very even battle in my eyes.
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  14. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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    really w/e thats cool
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  15. I wArFaRe I

    I wArFaRe I Love 2 Hate

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    poeticks, mix wasnt great as been said, had some good lines in this, the to balls line was nice, not a big fan of acapellas in these though, still a solid drop though, i think the mixing is hurting though

    past-one -- flow is nice on this, mix is low but can still make out everything..more aggressive approach, push out the whip line was nice, sounds like you put in a little more effort,

    its close but i gotta give it to past one
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  16. Poeticks

    Poeticks MY TIME HAS COME

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    More effort? thats really the criteria? Thats an honest question
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  17. jayoo

    jayoo new york representative

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    agree with this, at first didnt think anyone felt poeticks but me lmao, but i gotta roll with dude, definitely a close ass battle it's pretty fuckin pathetic how its being slept on though, much respect to ya'll and apologies for all the lames not givin ya battle a chance.
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  18. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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    wrrd thx for the votes and the feed
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  19. Harland

    Harland New Member

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    another battle gettin slept on.. lemme check it out

    Past one - your track volume seems pretty low.. but your doing your thing... flow is pretty nice... delivery is aggressive.... lyrics are pretty cool... your own flip on your name was nice...

    Poeticks - beat is cool... flow is cool... delivery is alright, you're quality kinda hurts you slightly, but i'll look past that. I think when u go to acapella, you shouldn't use punch ins, makes it sound rather messy. 2nd beat is nice.... you're doing pretty well but i would like to hear harder hitting punches...

    overall, it was really close, props to both dudes doing they thing, but in a battle context i think past one edged this with a more direct focused approach lyrically.

    vote - past one

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  20. Past-one

    Past-one ticking time bomb

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    def harlin ill check it out soon..
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