Rd. 1 Messiah vs bugzareli

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  1. Plekz

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    GRB - Grand Royal Audio Battle 2008 Rules - First Round

    - 1st Round Audios are DUE Monday Night December 15 at 11.59 pm cst.
    - Theme: up to 2-3+ Minutes must be about your opponent(s)
    - You must mention their BOARD name(s). Must be atleast 2 minutes.
    - If audio is not two minutes, you must contest it if you want a DQ.
    - One mp3 File Must Be posted Monday Night December 15 at 11.59 pm cst.- We will not store any audio files.
    - YOU MUST post using your board name that is registered to the match. Others will be DQ'ed.
    - Voting links will be posted and votes will be shown.
    - No Comments allowed on battle post until voting links are posted.
    - Can post videos

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  2. Messiah

    Messiah Guest

    I ain't got time to rerecord anything man, so here's what I previously had. Nice new track though. All in fun my dude


    [youtube]OR9F__GXh7s[/youtube]
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  3. bugzareli

    bugzareli Culture VI

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    Round 1

    new verse. found that brooklyn we go hard instrumental and got open. have fun.

    I’m from Brooklyn, so I go hard – my lyrics go yard
    That means they go deep, that means my flow’s steep
    Straight to the ground, from my crown, I’m the only around
    To win the thou after I only won a round
    Slow down

    Cus y’all won’t wanna face me – save the embarrassment
    Repping the Culture VI – let me establish them
    Three albums – Eleven thousand sold
    Four hundred and eighty nine thou more til we go gold
    Oh no – you say never it’ll happen
    Well, back when I was your age – I did a little rapping
    Too, ooh yea laugh– that was just last year
    I own rapmusic, don’t trespass here
    I interview dudes that you listen to, fool
    Don’t front, I’m the one that you listen to, too
    My soundclick got seven number 1 one songs
    Your soundclick never even had a song on
    You making all them stupid fucking photoshop pictures
    That’s the only way we’d ever see you with bitches
    I’m allergic to wack – when I see you, it itches
    Stop battling with hip-hop artists – find what your niche is
    It’s not music, this a boring competition
    Go find another site, join a drawing competition
    Please – cus this is just a waste of my talent
    You’d have a better chance of winning if you stayed silent
    And let me battle myself – I know my secrets
    So maybe I could find some shit to rattle myself
    It’s like I battled my health – and gave myself the flu
    And you the sniffles – cus I’m sicker than you
    # That’s right, I’m sicker
    Subscribe to my youtube, soundclick and flickr
    Yea, I’m a little thicker than most
    Couple hundred plus pounds – give or take a few
    It’s the end of round 1, it’s time I take a U
    Double that – that’s a W – technically
    If this was text, I would just double up the letter V
    And Vow Victory, this here’s history
    I’m battling a ghost – what he sounds like’s a mystery
    You can’t upload pics on soundclick
    I’d have to ghostwrite and ghostspit for you to sound sick
    I can’t hit a man with glasses
    And a little ass frame that’s thinner than the hair on his mustache is
    You should’ve bought a sandwich, gain some weight, get some power
    Cus Messiah got beat by a flower
    I’m a rose...
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  4. Plekz

    Plekz Guest

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  5. /Da MaIn AvEnT\

    /Da MaIn AvEnT\ Active Member

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    Voting Bugz like I did before.
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  6. Banksy

    Banksy ...HipHop

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    Explained Earlier.
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  7. bugzareli

    bugzareli Culture VI

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    I voted for myself, so now I'm winning :)
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  8. BULLY

    BULLY LOL

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    i typed up a l breakdown right before the site went down and jeff deleted it, i had to go to a christmas lunch at the job and i actually think its still up at work in the browser window ill post again tomorrow when im back at work
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  9. MagicFX

    MagicFX Idle

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    lol dude.. you shouldn't vote for yourself... that's gay.


    I wasn't really into bugz verse.. that first shit he spit.. then repeated, made me think that he really didn't understand what he was suposed to be doing here..

    like the first ten bars was about what? absolutely nothing..

    your bars were pretty basic dude.. hardly even got at messiah at all.


    messiah on the other hand.. came at bugz pretty good..

    I'm going with messiah on this battle..


    vote - messiah
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  10. enef

    enef voting against DZK in every round.

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    messiah actually had punchlines what the fuck
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  11. MARXIST

    MARXIST New Member

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    gotta go w/ Bugz. i know u voted for me messiah, but i expect people not to be fagswhen it comes to my battle so i gotta keep it 100. i liked bugz
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  12. Messiah

    Messiah Guest

    thats wassup


    i voted for u cuz u came better, i expect u to vote for the one u think came better as well.


    thats goes for everyone, don't be on no "i'ma vote for u cuz u voted for me" kinda steez.


    be real. if i make it to round 2, i'ma step it up though.


    holla
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  13. MARXIST

    MARXIST New Member

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    ^^^real nigga shit
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  14. Cire

    Cire The Peoples Champion

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    Bugz aint do much for me in the lyric department, although style is polished, Messiah you'd be better suited to just rock a slow downtempo style, some of your lyrics were funny just ya style aint compliment em much,use a more modern beat also. good stuff guys.
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  15. SiFu

    SiFu Burning Down Babylon!

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    Sounds like Bugz is whispering or something.....his punches were a little harder than the other dudes, he was better overall


    PEACE
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  16. Messiah

    Messiah Guest

    uppin so Bugz can vote for himself again


    lol
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  17. Venamis

    Venamis Moderator

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    you sound like someone from b-boys
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  18. BULLY

    BULLY LOL

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    i had my explanation typed up yesterday but lost it, but anyway to summarize

    Bugz i felt is an aiight rapper but not a good battle rapper because he is way too introspective. He wasted valueble time kinda giving his background, which he did in both audio's. You gotta go at your opponent in those couple of minutes. I honestly felt that the second audio was not much of an improvement over the first as a battle track. Your delivery is more appealing i think than messiahs.

    Messiah is the Grb throwback lol. For a dude who doesnt rap i think he did a great job of riding the beat ( a problem ive heard from alot of dudes with like 50 songs on their page). I think the fact that bugz didnt attack and messiah did have some funny/clever content and actually spent his time going at bugz made the difference. There is alot of room for improvement.

    If bugz advances, you need to stop being nice, stop worrying about your introduction to the GRB audience, and just go at your opponent.

    If Messiah advances, you just gotta kinda abandon the old school sound, and be a bit more agressive with your tone.

    I think messiah won this because we are judging battles, if this were a song making contest, bugz would probably have my vote.
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  19. bugzareli

    bugzareli Culture VI

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    hey - not sure if i'm allowed to comment in here - but isnt it supposed to be 2 minutes of audio? i mean, he had a minute intro of some comedian, and then like less than a minute of rapping.

    not sure how the rules are, but if he wouldve rapped for 3 minutes like i did (or even the required 2 minutes), i think he wouldve been REALLY exposed. all he did was crack fat jokes. another minute of him rapping and he wouldve came off way lamer than he did.

    my verse mightve been a little more introspective, but i also had a LOT more lines. probably had more lines going at him, just spread out more.

    oh well, just my two cents. i happen to think his track was really not good. o well
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  20. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    Messiah - you got some coo lyrics.. but man delivery is not the strong thing about your battle... Quality is pretty bad too. But you had some good lines. But don't like how it sounds like your just talking them out.... Overall like I said coo lines but none really impacted cause of how they were delivered...

    Bugzareli - you had a way better flow and delivery ... but your lyrics and punches lacked, the way you low and delivery you could have had alot more impact in your lines but you didn't use that to your advantage to me... I mean you tried the personals but no cleverness to your punches here .... and the quality is real bad on both of these WTF ... Anyway good battle ish reguardless

    Vote - Messiah Just cause I agree with Wargasms He had alot more punches just not the good delivery to make them impact but lyric wise Bugz didn't really have any good lines that stood out to me...

    Anyway if you didn't get a chance please drop a honest vote on my battle thanks ..

    http://board.rapmusic.com/grb-08-gr...zes/1131506-rd-1-grawwr-vs-taiyamo-denku.html
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