rd 1 Dockz vs risk.

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  1. Esko

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  2. risk.

    risk. BDot

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  3. Dockz

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    http://www.soundclick.com/pro/view/01/default.cfm?bandid=309132&content=main&songid=0


    lyrics:

    round 1, vs. risk, winter GRBlizzard

    (first 4 bars off the dome, right after the intro)

    diss cuss if you can spit your own writtens
    i slapped your entire squad while spittin, don't risk it....
    too much risky bizness,
    like nasdaq n martha steward, 'tradin inside' 'flippin biscuits'.
    oh shid-ditt, no he didn't,
    flow all rhythmic, exposin the risk kid n
    rip him n maybe i should slow this fast rappin all down
    for the players catchin less half of the crowd...
    so i'ma be actin a clown packin over half of an ounce
    faggots i'll pound to death.
    smokin hemp, yet this bastard's pronounced dead
    left ya 6 feet after-the-ground,
    right next to the brain texture's attatched to the ground
    that just flew 7 feet behind your head where the magnum-was-found
    macintosh proud
    like buggin out comp, then troubleshoot ya ass up til ya crashes are found
    but you play it safe n that's kinda tight
    tellin everyone ahead of time we gotta risk behind the mic...
    speakin of which, jeff, start peepin your shit,
    get geeksquad to hit up ya firewall, you leaked inna risk.
    but check, what's neat is,
    once i'm defeatin the planet, i also beat risk
    you heard of the game it's ancient
    won't bend my back over some break beat, i'll just break it
    trainin chaos with
    hanus strange scripts arraged n famous saved to disks.
    n if your brain lives
    it's agent smith in fake skin to break in you're matrix spaceship
    aching for breath but ain't shit after the stainless
    dockz done with you, like a quack changin patiences
    oh, the game? ..shit..i couldn't even name it...
    8 blocks back i lost track how many times i played risk.
    probably bout twenty or thirty lines after all of this time
    walkin with knives naked, stalkin this guy
    making a deal with calls on your life
    you offer your spirit, rejected cuz the shit's already mine
    but this pussy's 9 lived up, n trust i got 9 times of,
    bullets in my lightbright son,
    if he survive's or even tries to revive life once.
    n i never thought of you naughty, truly.
    but risk collects jizz rags, "i think risk is cool"
    i mean, this is hell
    you know the surgeon general warns 'smoking risk's', your health.
    it's all off truly, your jaw's goofy,
    you needa taxi sign in your mouth blinking, "off duty"
    i'ma be takin your manhood too,
    loosen those boots, duke. shoe size thirty two.
    i'ma make it a point to target this kid
    n even if karma exsists i'ma still push hardest at risk.
    get harnessed-n-whipped for all-that-you-spit
    you talkin all big, then take a risk...honestly quit.
    homonyms, just not in your chip,
    sub out your dick, this is something you probably should grip
    .....but don't give it thought or mistake it, i'm playin,
    furious over the loss, but it's over risk, period.
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  5. Dockz

    Dockz (- -)

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    tragic stalks me ever since i embarrassed him in a track
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  6. TraGiC

    TraGiC Recognize Real

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    r u dockz spits?????

    cuz i remember i battled that guy like 2 years ago and destroyed him

    and he left the site

    r u the same guy?

    ha
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  7. comPleXNY

    comPleXNY Illest Alive

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    risk- word up nice beat choice kindy clubish!!!...but still pretty dope! nice flow on this i like how u approach this beat.. came out nice... very polished!! i like it... the teacher line was nice... the 1.5 line was nice... hahahaha when u said he is a bitch just listen that shyt is funny the arsonist watch line was nice too alot of personals and punches i liked it alot nice shyt man!


    dockz- word up ughhh tell u the truth im really loving the beat choice! shyt is sick! lmfao funny intro! wow u have the most weirdest flow ive ever heard... but honestly son i really like it... some ok lines here in there the martha stewart line is pretty good.... but nothing really caught me... i mean shyt is dope it sounds more like a track to me... not a battle.. no offense but u got skill...

    but overall i think risk got it.... both came nice.. in there own style.. i like it nice battle yall no hard feelings all for hip hop!! nah mean.. ite

    vote- risk

    if u dont mind can u peep my battle and like place some honest votes thanks yall http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13017691#post13017691
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  8. risk.

    risk. BDot

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    voteeeeeeeeeeee
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  9. Dockz

    Dockz (- -)

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    wow.



    nobody real, will step up. not one person.....


    maybe nobody's real on this board....

    yea, great track risk. ouch, pulled my card.
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  10. risk.

    risk. BDot

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    even if someone "real steps up" theyre not guna be able to understand a word your saying cause your garbage

    i sensed sarcasm in what u said.. just lettin you know why no ones voting for ya
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  11. VerbHertz

    VerbHertz Lexicon

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    Risk - Sick beat... he sounds like deltron lol... (dockz does)... coked out tone loc... bones broke... you put that castle of greyskull clip in tho, and i fucking love that track... so i dont know haha. shots of soco... your style and flow and shit was most def on point but lyrically it seemed like a lot of filler, iono... nothing to pique my interest really...

    Dockz - lmao at the image, risk on asscheeks... risky business... flippin biscuits... heh, flow is sounding more dockz then normal... 6 feet in the ground - magnum shit was pretty original... we got a risk behind the mic... beain lives - shace ship, lmao this is weird as fuck... lost track how many times you've played risk... smoking risks your health...

    both of you had some weird battle vibe... dockz was almost more of a regular track, but it was definately a diss... and had more standout lines to me... and i love the style, so i'mma have to give it to Dockz... close shit though
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  12. Dockz

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    who helped you out on sensin that sarcasm!??

    so now you're tryin to diss me, out of the music? why if you're winning? and you know you've won? haha..... well cool, let's have fun

    come on mayne, let's be real, you ain't no MC...... i'm going to minnasotta soon to open for kanye west infront of 25,000 people with buonarotti......you'll be going downstairs opening christmas presents. "oh look honey, a brand new dildo from daddy."

    - it might not be even close to polished, but, you beat me? bitch please. lol

    - you can't understand what i'm sayin in about 5 words? so you think you gotta reason to win? shit go peep the NESSeccesary track vs. Warbux, i studied about 4 different lines tryin to figure out what he said, guess who won tho, and you ain't no warbux.

    - verbhertz (a nice MC) just quoted about 9 punchlines, i only wrote about 9 for your weak comp. (punches on your name, that is)

    - i spit your murder in 2 takes, with one punch-in, in less then 8 minutes, while being rushed, plus i switched up my entire style.

    - you got my music quoted on about 1/5th of your verse...............meaning you downloaded my shit...i said "ACTING like a punk bitch" and you didn't even cut out the word you dumb bastardddddd. lmao

    - the other votes didn't have an explanation. plus everyone that voted is wackkkkk, those votes hold absolutely nothing to anyone, except for the wonder of "did they vote risk. just so they don't see me next round?"

    - "and had more standout lines to me... and i love the style, so i'mma HAVE to give it to Dockz... " - verb

    - it's called "style" player. yea, it's DIFFERENT, that's called good, "LEMME HEAR SOMETHING NEW! PLEASE!!!" - hip hop

    yea, i'm unorthodox behind a mic, guess what, so was biggie smalls.

    lol@your mc weekly track, everyday rappers, weak clones behind a mic, the flows like DZK's yet simpler, i dunno, that's what Buo says atleast...

    the point is, i couldn't give a what who's flow or style it is you use, it was never originally yours, only the gay voice. you coulda used nesslee's flow n you still woulda been out matched by 20 decibals in 20 different ways.

    straight pussies "please don't tell anyone i wanna do what you do but can't"

    i could go on forever about how you're weak, and your track's only tight in your head n your mom's opinion doesn't count.....but i ain't gonna waste time even thinkin about the disgrace of this site and it's tourneys any longer then 8 minutes....


    check, get some flavor, then come back, and i'll actually look up who you are this time, maybe even peep your music, and possibly battle n beat you again.


    oh n if you needa reply to this, don't mention the voting again, that's just as dumb as every line in your track

    "you remind me of a rodent from the sewer"

    lol wtf? your jokin right?

    - you voted for yourself.

    - figure out the rest.
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  13. Dockz

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    hahahaha ^ i had a fantastic night before i wrote that, spittin on this open mic in some hippy club with raw hip hop shit, they didn't know what to do, gotta 9.5 from the judge for some verse i did from the IMA cd (if anyone knows what that is)....shit was chilly

    verbhertz, your threads closed, but your verse was hot homie, you gotta nice steez, too bad on blues, woulda been a closin lol

    ayo sorry about not being around, but been crazy busy, got work now, I JUST WENT TO SLEEP! lol....anyways, i'll vote on all the battles tonight when i get home......
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  14. Scribe

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    LOL

    what the fuck?
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  15. Dockz

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    jeff, come on homie, all these unexplained votes? can't do shit about that? damn, fuckin pussies, wish i could jump through this LCD n strangle your punk asses with the fiber optics i grab on the way, shit would be beautiful, with just one click.....
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  16. Dockz

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    *scribe brain-farts then shits his pants*

    blah, i gotta work...keep voting risk.
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  17. itdontmatter2me

    itdontmatter2me New Member

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    I'm not even gonna vote It's obvious risk won and Dockz never rap again you suck and you had the sickest beat
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  18. risk.

    risk. BDot

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    haha posts the lyrics cause no one can understand what he says..
    for having probably the worst track of the whole first round you really hype yourself alot
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  19. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    Risk - Not feeling your beat at all. But your flow and delivery are very polished. Your lyrics are not amazing, but some alright lyrics here and there. Your Delivery makes them enjoyable. Pretty nice 1st round

    Dockz - I actually like ya style alot, But your quality hurts your flow and delivery on this , if your beat was turned up more it might have been better. Not many strong lyrics either. Your voice is sick. I like you better on songs. Overall Your dope.. but didn't have a strong battle verse...

    Vote - Risk

    Keep rocking mics peeps

    peep my battle if you got a chance and drop a honest vote , thanks

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=948003
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  20. Dockz

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    word denku ^ i feel you


    BUO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i told you


    but wtf @ it sounds like a song, i'm pretty sure all audio's sound like songs, just different types.....i mean listen to Ether from Nas, or any Invasion track from Shady....you'll see that's a retarded statement....

    so risk.'s didn't sound like a song?? lol that prolly means you thought it sucked. lol




    oh n you other no name cats i even gonna read your posts like plow
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