rd 1 _RhYmEs_ vs † $ta$h †

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  1. Stash

    Stash R.I.P Point Game

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    no i know quota the beat was horrible.. im talkin punchlines

    That's not hating it's the truth, I surpass your class
    To leave this god-son-ned and I ain't talkin Nasty Nas


    In this rap game kid, you'll need a starter cap
    Last time I heard _Rhymes_ Deadly 2pac was in cardiac


    You'll get gassed, think you pull the crowds in like jayhova
    When yah on stage your fans are PHEW[few] cause their glad that it's over


    You beating me..impossible with your whack songs..
    How'll/Howl? you win..
    I guess it's time to get your WOLVERINE act on


    I'll knock'em out just watch me hardly slap'em
    Mustache(Must-Stash) make him famous like Charley Chaplin


    on and on...
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  2. For-Mula

    For-Mula New Member

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    ^^^ Dawg u off beat and your voice overs are killing you.

    a hot line isn't a hot line unless you spit it right.

    Im just being real. No diss to you. Good luck.
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  3. ssssslawk

    ssssslawk A wah di bloodclat dis

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    that's so right i don't even know where to begin

    i know a lot of people that believe they are very good simply because of lyrics
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  4. Stash

    Stash R.I.P Point Game

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    man shut up im not sayin cuz of ma lyrics im just sayin ma lyrics are better... dj casper gave me a free beat.. ama re-record just 2 merk this kid properly... dont be givin me hiphop lectures plz,
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  5. [ Yung Truth ]

    [ Yung Truth ] fuck u, pay me

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    wtf...no competition here
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  6. LaWlEssMc

    LaWlEssMc ......

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    are you serious???lmao

    kid your lines are textcee lines..rhymes lyrical style is much better..your not suited to audio because your a fat textcee, shut up and accept you got destroyed in every area possible
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  7. Stash

    Stash R.I.P Point Game

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    im not fat im a sexy healthy white man...thx

    i guess everyone has their opinion, the opinions i took i destroyed him, too bad i used a wrong beat.. anyways im done in this thread...

    uno
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  8. comPleXNY

    comPleXNY Illest Alive

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    stash- word up lol not really feeling the beat sorry man.. lol umm good lyricism some pretty dope punchlines... couple hard hitting ones that caught me... ummm the mustache line was nice... i like the wolverine one lol < kinda funny.. umm it was ok ... not bad nice work man

    rhymes- definatley a dope beat.. im likeing it alot... i think thats how u catch people in battles with dope beats... woo0o0o delivery is there.. flow is crazy sick.... got that real ny style i love.... punchlines is nice this is lyricism at its finest.... good battle u got this son.. nice shyt

    vote- rhymes

    good battle yall.. may the best win... but yea no hard feelings.. you know... anyway good shyt yall...

    if u dont mind can u peep my battle and like place some honest votes thanks yall http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13017691#post13017691
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  9. _RhYmEs_

    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

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    Yo why you closed ya soundclick down son,,

    you had some decent lines, but the delivery was well Not good,,
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  10. TAB

    TAB Model

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    Stash, don't worry about something as trivial as this, just keep recording and developing your style. I suggest you concentrate on improving your flow at this point, because that's the listener's first impression of you. Lyrics were solid. Beat was gay. Rhymes, flow was raunchy and attention-grabbing. Lyrics were solid as well. My vote goes to Rhymes. Keep at it ya'll. Peace.
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  11. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    Stash - intro was kinda played.. , Hmmmm Not really feeling your beat i think if you would have had more of a battle oriented beat you would be able to delivery a harder connection with your punchlines. Cause some of your lines are overlooked because the impact of them is not there. You got skill though , your flow is on point, and delivery is alright but as far as the battle goes you just don't have many impacting lines. Coo ish though

    Rhymes - Delivery is very strong, And flow is on point.. you definately set up more of a impact with your punchlines. Nice ish, Overall, You got this battle pretty easy , It was mostly because of his delivery of lines and the beat he chose to deliver them on..

    Vote - Rhymes

    Peep and drop a honest vote on my battle if you havn't...

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=948003

    thanks
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  12. Kanyne

    Kanyne 6x RBL Participant...lol

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    stash-coo mic presence, flow drops on some parts, lyrics got down played by ya delivery...u kinda rushed thorugh it, & why u shakin a can of spray paint?

    Rhymes- nice mic presence, better flow, lyrics were easier to follow, decent delivery
    resort to violence line was nice

    v/Rhymes
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  13. Pistol Petee

    Pistol Petee Pussy Eater

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    lol..ha ha stash....ha ha you suck
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  14. StubbilyMug

    StubbilyMug DayorDollar Records

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    what's wrong with dude's beat
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  15. Syn 6

    Syn 6 back off hiatus

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    rhymes.... chris farley with braids lol .. hotels in iraq was hot .. delivery nice.... flow on point good shit man .. u came pretty nice, short tho ..

    stash....flow is off at times .. bcuz of that sometimes its kinda hard to understand what ur shit cuz ur rushin some syllables .. beat is blah .. not a good choice .. some of these punches sound decent tho man .. but u need to just polish up .. probably would've sounded a LOT better with a dif beat. .

    vote - rhymes .. just came nicer all around ...

    yo hit up my battle.and drop an honest vote .. its gettin slept on http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=948004 thnx .. good luck ..
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  16. _RhYmEs_

    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

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    when does the voting end,,

    no hard feelings stash

    ^No homo


    ~1~
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  17. Funboy

    Funboy lol whore

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    u should make sure to shoot djcasper, cause that shit was fuckin garbo
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  18. Funboy

    Funboy lol whore

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    lol @ stashs only vote is for himself


    geeez
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  19. Continuum

    Continuum Hip Hop's Jim Morrison

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    Rhymes got this.

    Stash could have been alot worse...elevate.
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  20. _RhYmEs_

    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

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    How big of a difference does this have to go before it closes up,, hahaha
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