RBL Wk9: 21. 19. Pharaohe Def 2-1 vs. 20. Yung Impression 1-0

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  1. kaLeeF

    kaLeeF me and weed go waaay back

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  2. Pharaohe Def

    Pharaohe Def Take a Swing

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  3. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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  4. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    my punches'll stick u easy. & u aint even high in the ranks.
    cuz u didn't have the RIGHT GUARD...
    ...and its the only reason y all ya verses fuckin stanks.
    imma beast son. and if you gotta problem, u know wat sup.
    plus u don't got shit to GAIN...cuz u are always washed up.
    you neva held a gun before. so don't be actin hard, prick.
    cuz u don't look right wita MAGNUM...
    ...so thats why ya girl is always chasing after my dick.
    ur punches are nothin. keep talkin shit, u'll meet my fist.
    u always have AIM to me...
    ...but it still doesn't mean i'll put you on my buddy list.
    Allah said i didnt have a chance. im tough, im know 4 rapin.
    cuz i be carryin that real wood...
    ...& the only real wood u have is a #2 was for test takin.


    do 10 lines instead.
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  5. Pharaohe Def

    Pharaohe Def Take a Swing

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    Take a look at ur sig, it’s obvious something wasn’t done right
    How are you too dope to have a sig, but couldn’t keep a belt at 411 hype?
    We’re a team in the Rap Verse tag tourney, but I should’ve been smarter.
    I need to get ran over by the site’s initials for choosing u as my partner. : (
    I got with ya girl in bed, u don’t give what ur whore needs
    She could play for the red sox cuz she doesn’t foreplay Ortiz
    I’ve been nice, rarely lose… I’m buryin’ homes
    He’s got a track record as clean as fuckin’ Marion Jones
    Battle’s over, I’ll get lots of votes… meanwhile staying fly
    How u gonna win?
    Not even Jadakiss would get caught saying Y

    blah.
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  6. Who? ClayFac3

    Who? ClayFac3 PLUMERZ CRAK

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    my punches'll stick u easy. & u aint even high in the ranks.
    cuz u didn't have the RIGHT GUARD...
    ...and its the only reason y all ya verses fuckin stanks.
    cool concept bra'.... but flow stretched... 1.5 decent opener...

    imma beast son. and if you gotta problem, u know wat sup.
    plus u don't got shit to GAIN...cuz u are always washed up.
    lol... coo... 2

    you neva held a gun before. so don't be actin hard, prick.
    cuz u don't look right wita MAGNUM...
    ...so thats why ya girl is always chasing after my dick.
    bit stretched... aight... 1.5

    ur punches are nothin. keep talkin shit, u'll meet my fist.
    u always have AIM to me...
    ...but it still doesn't mean i'll put you on my buddy list.
    decent ish... 1.5

    Allah said i didnt have a chance. im tough, im know 4 rapin.
    cuz i be carryin that real wood...
    ...& the only real wood u have is a #2 was for test takin.
    lol... stretched again dawggitty... aight tho... 1.5

    8/15

    overall a few nice concepts... but everything was stretched... least how i see it... nothin on a personal level.. nor any real hard hitters...

    Take a look at ur sig, it’s obvious something wasn’t done right
    How are you too dope to have a sig, but couldn’t keep a belt at 411 hype?
    heh... aight opener... 1.5

    We’re a team in the Rap Verse tag tourney, but I should’ve been smarter.
    I need to get ran over by the site’s initials for choosing u as my partner. : (
    lol... wtf? lol... aight aight... 1.5 LOL maybe i just dont get it? rm? vroom vroom? ?

    I got with ya girl in bed, u don’t give what ur whore needs
    She could play for the red sox cuz she doesn’t foreplay Ortiz
    ive seen that somewhere... i know i have... cool tho.. 2... but ive seen that somewhere

    I’ve been nice, rarely lose… I’m buryin’ homes
    He’s got a track record as clean as fuckin’ Marion Jones
    lol... 1.5

    Battle’s over, I’ll get lots of votes… meanwhile staying fly
    How u gonna win?
    Not even Jadakiss would get caught saying

    ... lol... that was tricky how you didnt put "WHY" at the end... cool shit... 3.. best of battle

    9.5/15

    overall some aight... simple stuff.... nice flow... finisher was nice n wut got this no doubt....

    def takin this one
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  7. Alamo IV

    Alamo IV God Has A Name!

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    YI:

    imma beast son. and if you gotta problem, u know wat sup.
    plus u don't got shit to GAIN...cuz u are always washed up.
    you neva held a gun before. so don't be actin hard, prick.
    cuz u don't look right wita MAGNUM...
    ...so thats why ya girl is always chasing after my dick.

    vs.

    P. Def:

    Take a look at ur sig, it’s obvious something wasn’t done right
    How are you too dope to have a sig, but couldn’t keep a belt at 411 hype?
    We’re a team in the Rap Verse tag tourney, but I should’ve been smarter.
    I need to get ran over by the site’s initials for choosing u as my partner.

    Vote Y
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  8. Pharaohe Def

    Pharaohe Def Take a Swing

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    Rap Verse = RV.

    I should be hit by an RV. haha.
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  9. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    ^^lol...good verse yo.
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  10. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  11. ToTwoToo

    ToTwoToo -DopeNess-

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    imma beast son. and if you gotta problem, u know wat sup.
    plus u don't got shit to GAIN...cuz u are always washed up.

    vs.

    I got with ya girl in bed, u don’t give what ur whore needs
    She could play for the red sox cuz she doesn’t foreplay Ortiz
    Battle’s over, I’ll get lots of votes… meanwhile staying fly
    How u gonna win?
    Not even Jadakiss would get caught saying Y

    v/Pharaohe Def
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  12. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    yung

    my punches'll stick u easy. & u aint even high in the ranks.
    cuz u didn't have the RIGHT GUARD...
    ...and its the only reason y all ya verses fuckin stanks.
    good
    imma beast son. and if you gotta problem, u know wat sup.
    plus u don't got shit to GAIN...cuz u are always washed up.
    ok, kinda played
    you neva held a gun before. so don't be actin hard, prick.
    cuz u don't look right wita MAGNUM...
    ...so thats why ya girl is always chasing after my dick.
    good
    ur punches are nothin. keep talkin shit, u'll meet my fist.
    u always have AIM to me...
    ...but it still doesn't mean i'll put you on my buddy list.
    decent
    Allah said i didnt have a chance. im tough, im know 4 rapin.
    cuz i be carryin that real wood...
    ...& the only real wood u have is a #2 was for test takin.
    decent

    pharoahe

    Take a look at ur sig, it’s obvious something wasn’t done right
    How are you too dope to have a sig, but couldn’t keep a belt at 411 hype?
    ok
    We’re a team in the Rap Verse tag tourney, but I should’ve been smarter.
    I need to get ran over by the site’s initials for choosing u as my partner. : (
    lol good
    I got with ya girl in bed, u don’t give what ur whore needs
    She could play for the red sox cuz she doesn’t foreplay Ortiz
    ok
    I’ve been nice, rarely lose… I’m buryin’ homes
    He’s got a track record as clean as fuckin’ Marion Jones
    decent
    Battle’s over, I’ll get lots of votes… meanwhile staying fly
    How u gonna win?
    Not even Jadakiss would get caught saying Y
    good

    vote- pharoahe
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  13. wreck'n'eyez

    wreck'n'eyez Custom Title User

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    vote- PD

    he cleary outshinned yung wit harder punches and wittier lines...nice flow n personal..solid verse

    yung lacked some smoothness overall...n whut did it for me is the played out to the max lines...especially ur opener
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  14. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    ^^??. wateva fam.
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  15. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    my punches'll stick u easy. & u aint even high in the ranks.
    cuz u didn't have the RIGHT GUARD...
    ...and its the only reason y all ya verses fuckin stanks.
    nah,
    imma beast son. and if you gotta problem, u know wat sup.
    plus u don't got shit to GAIN...cuz u are always washed up.
    nah
    you neva held a gun before. so don't be actin hard, prick.
    cuz u don't look right wita MAGNUM...
    ...so thats why ya girl is always chasing after my dick.
    ur punches are nothin. keep talkin shit, u'll meet my fist.
    u always have AIM to me...
    ...but it still doesn't mean i'll put you on my buddy list.
    Allah said i didnt have a chance. im tough, im know 4 rapin.
    cuz i be carryin that real wood...
    ...& the only real wood u have is a #2 was for test takin.
    alotta concepts iv heard and stuff... nothn really stoodout


    Take a look at ur sig, it’s obvious something wasn’t done right
    How are you too dope to have a sig, but couldn’t keep a belt at 411 hype?
    ok
    We’re a team in the Rap Verse tag tourney, but I should’ve been smarter.
    I need to get ran over by the site’s initials for choosing u as my partner. : (
    sorta funny
    I got with ya girl in bed, u don’t give what ur whore needs
    She could play for the red sox cuz she doesn’t foreplay Ortiz
    ok
    I’ve been nice, rarely lose… I’m buryin’ homes
    He’s got a track record as clean as fuckin’ Marion Jones
    Battle’s over, I’ll get lots of votes… meanwhile staying fly
    How u gonna win?
    Not even Jadakiss would get caught saying Y
    some decent stuff in there

    vote pd
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  16. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    "I’ve been nice, rarely lose… I’m buryin’ homes
    He’s got a track record as clean as fuckin’ Marion Jones
    Battle’s over, I’ll get lots of votes… meanwhile staying fly
    How u gonna win?
    Not even Jadakiss would get caught saying Y"
    ouch nasty couplets at the end. sick.

    YP - probably the best verse Ive ever seen from you. You had your metaphores down, pretty good wordplay and setups, and devent punches. You just gotta work on thinkin up more complicated metaphores, and gettin ya flow up. Rhyme schemes would help. Good verse, he just came with a couple more punches that had some heat.

    "my punches'll stick u easy. & u aint even high in the ranks.
    cuz u didn't have the RIGHT GUARD...
    ...and its the only reason y all ya verses fuckin stanks.
    imma beast son. and if you gotta problem, u know wat sup.
    plus u don't got shit to GAIN...cuz u are always washed up."
    your opener was the best part of your verse, just gotta word it better and it would hit harder

    Pharoah nice verse man, wasn't feelin the couple bars after your opener, but the rest was nice. enough to win this.

    Vote - Pharoah Def
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  17. Pharaohe Def

    Pharaohe Def Take a Swing

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  18. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    6-1 Pharaohe Def wins 3-1
    Yung Impression loses 1-1
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