RBL Wk8: 9. Os1ris 4-2 vs. 10. John Hensley 3-0

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  2. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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  3. Os1ris

    Os1ris New Member

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    Check, guess I'll go 10-14
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  4. Os1ris

    Os1ris New Member

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    Me against a vet...? It's a joke, the way im rippin this nerd
    Trust me, his skills would grow...only cuz im sonning this herb
    And thats word, can't you see.. Hensley was here from the start
    Guess we'll see what you're made of...when this verse rips you apart
    Time to part ways, just watch me ...I'm ridding you of this fake
    And I'd feed off your verse...but this is already a piece of cake
    I didnt think RBL was gettin wack...but with you here it must be
    Cos the only way you be 'fuckin' dope...is if it had a 'pussy'
    This isnt a contest, more like practice for more perfection
    And my lines go waaay over your head, like ya navel during erections
    I play this game like chess...a king gettin challenged by a pawn
    But this battle is more like a restroom..the way im shittin on john
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  5. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    haha..

    Dunno if u blaze. but check that geeks verse.
    Forget cleanin the resin out ya pipe..
    .. you needa clean the Resin out ya teeth first.
    Biter. you got issues, you can bet he needs help.
    I'ma beat you so Swift.. i'll prolly get an applause from the rest of D-12.
    Just quit. there's no way this clown's contendin.
    I was gonna write you a reality check..
    .. then i realized ya wouldn't know how to spend it.
    You suck dick for a livin.. and don't even try stoppin this.
    Got enough pole through ya head, ya first name should be Ryn, Osiris.
    ^Get it? i know it's clever, and it'll fuckin rip ya rhymes.
    And it's goin wayyy over your head like...oh wait, you already bit that line.
    This guys droppin quick. i'm attackin when i mention you.
    Forget usin a Guard for ya face, you'll need both tackles and the center too.


    -JH.
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  6. DaTrusHurtz.

    DaTrusHurtz. New Member

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    Me against a vet...? It's a joke, the way im rippin this nerd
    Trust me, his skills would grow...only cuz im sonning this herb
    blah at herb jokes... so played
    And thats word, can't you see.. Hensley was here from the start
    Guess we'll see what you're made of...when this verse rips you apart
    Just a statement really
    Time to part ways, just watch me ...I'm ridding you of this fake
    And I'd feed off your verse...but this is already a piece of cake
    Feeding wordplay is also kinda played
    I didnt think RBL was gettin wack...but with you here it must be
    Cos the only way you be 'fuckin' dope...is if it had a 'pussy'
    I almost laughed lol, but not cuz this is good
    This isnt a contest, more like practice for more perfection
    And my lines go waaay over your head, like ya navel during erections
    lol, kinda funny actually
    I play this game like chess...a king gettin challenged by a pawn
    But this battle is more like a restroom..the way im shittin on john
    I haven't seen this used on John, but it's prolly played, I dunno, just haven't seen enough of his stuff. It's a cool concept, but I feel you coulda executed it better

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    Dunno if u blaze. but check that geeks verse.
    Forget cleanin the resin out ya pipe..
    .. you needa clean the Resin out ya teeth first.
    haha, dope
    Biter. you got issues, you can bet he needs help.
    I'ma beat you so Swift.. i'll prolly get an applause from the rest of D-12.
    self-glory, but lol, I liked this
    Just quit. there's no way this clown's contendin.
    I was gonna write you a reality check..
    .. then i realized ya wouldn't know how to spend it.
    I've used reality check wordplay before so blah, but this would be good otherwise
    You suck dick for a livin.. and don't even try stoppin this.
    Got enough pole through ya head, ya first name should be Ryn, Osiris.
    Nice nameplay
    ^Get it? i know it's clever, and it'll fuckin rip ya rhymes.
    And it's goin wayyy over your head like...oh wait, you already bit that line.
    haha, kinda feeding cuz if you dropped first you wouldn't have had this line, but if he bit he deserves it. This shit hit hard
    This guys droppin quick. i'm attackin when i mention you.
    Forget usin a Guard for ya face, you'll need both tackles and the center too.
    lol, nice wordplay

    Yea, Osiris came pretty played for the most part. And then he supposedly bit. Whether he did or not doesn't really matter as Hens got this shit pretty easily with a verse that had lots of wit and some hard personals. Nice verse.

    Vote - Hens
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  7. Pharaohe Def

    Pharaohe Def Take a Swing

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    vote- hensley

    the ryn, osiris line was DOPE... so was the guard line, swift line was hot too... i didn't really feel much in osiris' verse, plus it looks like he bit.
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  8. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    Me against a vet...? It's a joke, the way im rippin this nerd
    Trust me, his skills would grow...only cuz im sonning this herb
    weak opener
    And thats word, can't you see.. Hensley was here from the start
    Guess we'll see what you're made of...when this verse rips you apart
    nah
    Time to part ways, just watch me ...I'm ridding you of this fake
    And I'd feed off your verse...but this is already a piece of cake
    shit is played
    I didnt think RBL was gettin wack...but with you here it must be
    Cos the only way you be 'fuckin' dope...is if it had a 'pussy'
    lol, how u become 4-2
    This isnt a contest, more like practice for more perfection
    And my lines go waaay over your head, like ya navel during erections
    ehh, ok
    I play this game like chess...a king gettin challenged by a pawn
    But this battle is more like a restroom..the way im shittin on john
    good closer

    vs.

    Dunno if u blaze. but check that geeks verse.
    Forget cleanin the resin out ya pipe..
    .. you needa clean the Resin out ya teeth first.
    good opener
    Biter. you got issues, you can bet he needs help.
    I'ma beat you so Swift.. i'll prolly get an applause from the rest of D-12.
    haha, nice
    Just quit. there's no way this clown's contendin.
    I was gonna write you a reality check..
    .. then i realized ya wouldn't know how to spend it.
    damn...haha, this is nice
    You suck dick for a livin.. and don't even try stoppin this.
    Got enough pole through ya head, ya first name should be Ryn, Osiris.
    good wordplay
    ^Get it? i know it's clever, and it'll fuckin rip ya rhymes.
    And it's goin wayyy over your head like...oh wait, you already bit that line.
    haha, nice
    This guys droppin quick. i'm attackin when i mention you.
    Forget usin a Guard for ya face, you'll need both tackles and the center too.
    lol, nice closer

    overall....Os1ris shit was weak as hell, he didn't have anything in his verse that can top John's verse...this was really one-sided.

    Vote-John Hensley
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  9. .ClasSick.

    .ClasSick. don't body yaself.

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    osiris' verse was a collection of played stuff.

    sorry homie, you just didnt come too fresh at all this time around.

    the best line was the one you bit. =/

    i started breakin ya verse down, but every line was 'nah, played' so i erased it.


    Hens verse was solid throughout. the opener was tight, swift line was cool, reality check line was aiiight.. seen alot of these before. the ryn,osiris line was DOPE. bite line was ok, face gaurd line was tight.


    vote- hensley.
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  10. Everybodys_Nig4ya

    Everybodys_Nig4ya New Member

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    Osiris-

    This isnt a contest, more like practice for more perfection
    And my lines go waaay over your head, like ya navel during erections
    nice line here...disregarding if you bit or not


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    Hens

    Dunno if u blaze. but check that geeks verse.
    Forget cleanin the resin out ya pipe..
    .. you needa clean the Resin out ya teeth first

    ^Get it? i know it's clever, and it'll fuckin rip ya rhymes.
    And it's goin wayyy over your head like...oh wait, you already bit that line.



    Hens dominated this with personals and coo punches.......vote = JH
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  11. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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    But this battle is more like a restroom..the way im shittin on john

    vs.
    You suck dick for a livin.. and don't even try stoppin this.
    Got enough pole through ya head, ya first name should be Ryn, Osiris

    ^Get it? i know it's clever, and it'll fuckin rip ya rhymes.
    And it's goin wayyy over your head like...oh wait, you already bit that line.

    Well this battle has to go to John everytime I read it, he had a more consistent verse in punchlines and based on content had more personals aswell, anyways a pleasure to read take care guys.

    vote- John hensley
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  12. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    6-0 John Hensley

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  13. saran rap

    saran rap New Member

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    JOHN HENSLEY WINS THIS ON A BREEZE THRU THE PARK WITH WINDOWS DOWN ON SUNDAYS

    OS1RIS... YOUR PUSSY LINE AND PIECE OF CAKE LINES SUCKED

    I DID LIKE YOUR CLOSER THOUGH

    HENSLEY

    RESIN LINE, REALITY CHECK, AND WAIT YOU "ALRADY BIT THAT LINE" LINES WERE COOL
    AND DEFEATED OSIRIS

    PRETTY MUCH A FLAWLESS VICTORY

    IF I WERE YOU OSIRIS I WOULDA WORDED IT LIKE THIS...

    I play this game like chess...a king gettin challenged by a pawn
    But this battle is more like a restroom..the way im shittin on john

    BRUISED N BATTERED, SKULLS SHATTERED THE WAY O'S ABUSIN ON..
    N SHITTING ALL OVER HENSLEY, AKA RAPMUSIC JON
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  14. LyrikalCasper

    LyrikalCasper UCantC me But U feel Me

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    aight... my thoughts

    J Hensley:good struc., tight flo, nice wordplay

    Fav lines: Just quit. there's no way this clown's contendin.
    I was gonna write you a reality check..
    .. then i realized ya wouldn't know how to spend it.

    This guys droppin quick. i'm attackin when i mention you.
    Forget usin a Guard for ya face, you'll need both tackles and the center too.


    Os1ris: medi. verse , ight punches, decent flo

    Fav lines:
    Me against a vet...? It's a joke, the way im rippin this nerd
    Trust me, his skills would grow...only cuz im sonning this herb

    I play this game like chess...a king gettin challenged by a pawn
    But this battle is more like a restroom..the way im shittin on john{seemed forced, but str8}

    overall decent battle, just 1 stood out more for my thoughts.....

    Vote= J Hensley
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  15. Allah.

    Allah. nice with the hands

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    ROFLHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

    wtf!!!!!

    anyways

    os1ris obviously bit Resin M-I-C.

    vote - John Hensley

    for writing his own shit and being better.
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  16. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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  17. Complete Chaos

    Complete Chaos I'm Drugs.

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    v- hens

    the opener and ryn lines were brutal. Rest was okay, but those two lines alone beat osiris. For some reason, I expected more from Osiris. Guy didn't really have much against John.
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  18. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    good lines osiris had:
    This isnt a contest, more like practice for more perfection
    And my lines go waaay over your head, like ya navel during erections

    John
    Dunno if u blaze. but check that geeks verse.
    Forget cleanin the resin out ya pipe..
    .. you needa clean the Resin out ya teeth first.
    Biter. you got issues, you can bet he needs help.
    I'ma beat you so Swift.. i'll prolly get an applause from the rest of D-12.
    Just quit. there's no way this clown's contendin.
    I was gonna write you a reality check..
    .. then i realized ya wouldn't know how to spend it.
    You suck dick for a livin.. and don't even try stoppin this.
    Got enough pole through ya head, ya first name should be Ryn, Osiris.
    ^Get it? i know it's clever, and it'll fuckin rip ya rhymes.
    And it's goin wayyy over your head like...oh wait, you already bit that line.

    john just had more, better lines

    vote - John
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  19. Don Killuminati

    Don Killuminati New Member

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    v/ hensley

    since he didn't bite..and since he had good lines...os1ris only had one good line, and it was bit..so it's whatever...hensley wins easy..
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  20. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    Vote - John Hensley

    hensley had a sick verse, Osiris verse was played as hell, the shit on John thing was done 50x when we had like 3 Johns in the league, and not much else clever on your side of the battle.
    The fucking dope line was suuuuch a stretched concept, this was the line of the battle.

    "Just quit. there's no way this clown's contendin.
    I was gonna write you a reality check..
    .. then i realized ya wouldn't know how to spend it."
    damn good verse overall.
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