RBL Wk8: 13. ~!O!~ 3-1 vs. 14. MetaSin 2-0

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  2. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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  3. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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  4. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    hey maybe you should try some loot/money pucnhes and some more medicine, and sin lines!!!! just some advice

    you're the broke pathetic type, to spend cold seasons alone
    so Ima spark the match, like u do, when you need heat in ya home
    when i step on the scene, i floss like a dentist's routine
    but you're so poor that envy's the only thing gettin you green/
    i keystyle, even though i know this guy may write,
    since the loser's got nothin else to do on a friday night
    but i understand, i should stop provokin this brawl
    ur a trooper, cuz if i were you, i dont know if Ida posted at all... /
    and if so, I wouldn't have posted it ALL, just the dope flows,
    but dont take my advice, unless u really want to no show
    so when i call u a pussy, i guess Im disgusting, and a pig
    but i was merely tying to follow the instructions in ya sig/
    i recognize bitch when i see one, i dont need a pic
    i'm the winner already, you don't even need to spit
    just save the voters the trouble of havin to read somethin
    cuz your verse and your name are the same since they dont mean nothin/

    have a good night writing fella.
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  5. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    I don't worry 'bout lames. So I ain't fuckin' wit him
    cause heads know...
    ...that every fucking verse of Meta's a sin//
    I'm talking ghastly. monstrous. 'll cause u to spew..
    now that ur girls out the way^..I'll switch subjects 2 u//
    u're weak as fuck sunny. I'm causing you pain.
    when u sport a 2-1...
    ...that'll be a countdown to your falling in rank//
    fresh from the top bitch. I spit steel till it's spent
    and'll put in u in a pine box...
    ...that don't come with a new car scent//
    Meta has no cash. he's a geek non-stop.
    plus he's too fat to sight-see...
    ....so Sin's only known to photoshop//
    nobody likes this fag. Sin's nothing but wack.
    when he was born...
    his mom seen him and started putting him back//
    plus friends call him boogie man.they're afraid of this hoe.
    but you're not scary bitch...
    ...it's only scary you can't stay out ur nose//
    I'm done with u hoe. so at the bottom have fun.
    and I would Loot the Pro....if I could only find one//

    ~wake me when I get competition....~
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  6. DaTrusHurtz.

    DaTrusHurtz. New Member

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    you're the broke pathetic type, to spend cold seasons alone
    so Ima spark the match, like u do, when you need heat in ya home
    match wordplay is played, but this was a nice flip
    when i step on the scene, i floss like a dentist's routine
    but you're so poor that envy's the only thing gettin you green/
    lol, not bad
    i keystyle, even though i know this guy may write,
    since the loser's got nothin else to do on a friday night
    Okay punch, but kinda basic
    but i understand, i should stop provokin this brawl
    ur a trooper, cuz if i were you, i dont know if Ida posted at all... /
    Nah, I didn't like this bar
    and if so, I wouldn't have posted it ALL, just the dope flows,
    but dont take my advice, unless u really want to no show
    Again, I felt this was kinda weak
    so when i call u a pussy, i guess Im disgusting, and a pig
    but i was merely tying to follow the instructions in ya sig/
    Okay, but I feel you coulda done more with his sig
    i recognize bitch when i see one, i dont need a pic
    i'm the winner already, you don't even need to spit
    Blah, basic and not a punch
    just save the voters the trouble of havin to read somethin
    cuz your verse and your name are the same since they dont mean nothin/
    I guess, but not really a harsh punch

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    I don't worry 'bout lames. So I ain't fuckin' wit him
    cause heads know...
    ...that every fucking verse of Meta's a sin//
    Could be better, but an okay nameplay
    I'm talking ghastly. monstrous. 'll cause u to spew..
    now that ur girls out the way^..I'll switch subjects 2 u//
    Concept isn't that great, but you used it well
    u're weak as fuck sunny. I'm causing you pain.
    when u sport a 2-1...
    ...that'll be a countdown to your falling in rank//
    Not bad at all
    fresh from the top bitch. I spit steel till it's spent
    and'll put in u in a pine box...
    ...that don't come with a new car scent//
    witty shit right here
    Meta has no cash. he's a geek non-stop.
    plus he's too fat to sight-see...
    ....so Sin's only known to photoshop//
    cool wordplay, but a bit forced
    nobody likes this fag. Sin's nothing but wack.
    when he was born...
    his mom seen him and started putting him back//
    blah at mom jokes.. you can get away with one if they're fuckin hilarious but this wasn't
    plus friends call him boogie man.they're afraid of this hoe.
    but you're not scary bitch...
    ...it's only scary you can't stay out ur nose//
    lol, i found this funny for some reason
    I'm done with u hoe. so at the bottom have fun.
    and I would Loot the Pro....if I could only find one//
    okay closer

    Meta, you started off decent, but you fizzled badly as your verse went on it got worse and worse. O, you had some cool lines in there and were far more consistent than Meta. I feel like you got this fairly easily for better wordplay and punches.

    Vote - O
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  7. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  8. saran rap

    saran rap New Member

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    you're the broke pathetic type, to spend cold seasons alone
    so Ima spark the match, like u do, when you need heat in ya home

    THAT WAS TIGHT

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    I'm talking ghastly. monstrous. 'll cause u to spew..
    now that ur girls out the way^..I'll switch subjects 2 u//

    FUNNY N CLEVERLY TIGHT

    fresh from the top bitch. I spit steel till it's spent
    and'll put in u in a pine box...
    ...that don't come with a new car scent//

    CRISPITTY CRUNCHITTY BUTTERFINGER

    plus friends call him boogie man.they're afraid of this hoe.
    but you're not scary bitch...
    ...it's only scary you can't stay out ur nose//

    SILLY NIQQA

    VOTE O RING
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  9. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    lmao. um, yea...
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  10. Who? ClayFac3

    Who? ClayFac3 PLUMERZ CRAK

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    you're the broke pathetic type, to spend cold seasons alone
    so Ima spark the match, like u do, when you need heat in ya home
    lolol man your opener was nice

    when i step on the scene, i floss like a dentist's routine
    but you're so poor that envy's the only thing gettin you green/
    personally, im not feeling it

    i keystyle, even though i know this guy may write,
    since the loser's got nothin else to do on a friday night
    lol again im not feelin it dude

    but i understand, i should stop provokin this brawl
    ur a trooper, cuz if i were you, i dont know if Ida posted at all... /
    even who? can do better than that man

    and if so, I wouldn't have posted it ALL, just the dope flows,
    but dont take my advice, unless u really want to no show
    :( sorry meta but again i feel nothing

    so when i call u a pussy, i guess Im disgusting, and a pig
    but i was merely tying to follow the instructions in ya sig/
    ehhhh, so so, nothing clever, just a basic play off his sig

    i recognize bitch when i see one, i dont need a pic
    i'm the winner already, you don't even need to spit
    comon dude

    just save the voters the trouble of havin to read somethin
    cuz your verse and your name are the same since they dont mean nothin/
    no way jose

    metasin, imo, your flow was there, but nothing else was :(

    O

    I don't worry 'bout lames. So I ain't fuckin' wit him
    cause heads know...
    ...that every fucking verse of Meta's a sin//
    lol uh oh, you used a concept meta clearly told you not to :O.. i guess its played accordin to meta, but i liked it

    I'm talking ghastly. monstrous. 'll cause u to spew..
    now that ur girls out the way^..I'll switch subjects 2 u//
    lol cool

    u're weak as fuck sunny. I'm causing you pain.
    when u sport a 2-1...
    ...that'll be a countdown to your falling in rank//
    no way jose

    fresh from the top bitch. I spit steel till it's spent
    and'll put in u in a pine box...
    ...that don't come with a new car scent//
    im not even gonna lie, i think i heard that somewhere.. huh?

    Meta has no cash. he's a geek non-stop.
    plus he's too fat to sight-see...
    ....so Sin's only known to photoshop//
    no real hard hitter there bra

    nobody likes this fag. Sin's nothing but wack.
    when he was born...
    his mom seen him and started putting him back//
    lol^^ im not even gonna lie, i chuckled

    plus friends call him boogie man.they're afraid of this hoe.
    but you're not scary bitch...
    ...it's only scary you can't stay out ur nose//
    im not even gonna lie, i dont know what to say about that one lol

    I'm done with u hoe. so at the bottom have fun.
    and I would Loot the Pro....if I could only find one//
    ehh, closer was pretty weak dude

    overall you had some decent throws... flow was easy...

    hmm honestly i think it comes down to meta's opener, vs the nose picking line, mom line, and subject 2 u line... and really i still think meta's opener could take all three of those had it been directed towards you more personally...

    vote- O

    damn meta, i really did wanna give you the vote had you had an few extra lines to back up ya nice opener.. o had a few more decent punches
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  11. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    when i step on the scene, i floss like a dentist's routine
    but you're so poor that envy's the only thing gettin you green/

    but i understand, i should stop provokin this brawl
    ur a trooper, cuz if i were you, i dont know if Ida posted at all... /
    and if so, I wouldn't have posted it ALL, just the dope flows,
    but dont take my advice, unless u really want to no show
    so when i call u a pussy, i guess Im disgusting, and a pig
    but i was merely tying to follow the instructions in ya sig/

    all pretty good but nothing special...just some cool flow and okay punches..

    ~!O!~

    I'm talking ghastly. monstrous. 'll cause u to spew..
    now that ur girls out the way^..I'll switch subjects 2 u//

    cool but i thought whut u used was also basic.. nothin special stood out...


    both came okay imo....simple basic with okaty concepts and good flow so..

    my vote metasin...had more avearge lines...
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  12. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    ~y u^ always gotta be the oddball bitch? I swear on everything u're an ass.......~
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  13. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    ^^don't be hating on ma.

    MetaSin

    you're the broke pathetic type, to spend cold seasons alone
    so Ima spark the match, like u do, when you need heat in ya home
    cool opener
    when i step on the scene, i floss like a dentist's routine
    but you're so poor that envy's the only thing gettin you green/
    lol, ok
    i keystyle, even though i know this guy may write,
    since the loser's got nothin else to do on a friday night
    too simple
    but i understand, i should stop provokin this brawl
    ur a trooper, cuz if i were you, i dont know if Ida posted at all... /
    nah, fam
    and if so, I wouldn't have posted it ALL, just the dope flows,
    but dont take my advice, unless u really want to no show
    kinda ok
    so when i call u a pussy, i guess Im disgusting, and a pig
    but i was merely tying to follow the instructions in ya sig/
    Sig punches are gay
    i recognize bitch when i see one, i dont need a pic
    i'm the winner already, you don't even need to spit
    again bruh...its too simple
    just save the voters the trouble of havin to read somethin
    cuz your verse and your name are the same since they dont mean nothin/
    decent closer

    vs.

    ~!O!~

    I don't worry 'bout lames. So I ain't fuckin' wit him
    cause heads know...
    ...that every fucking verse of Meta's a sin//
    weak opener
    I'm talking ghastly. monstrous. 'll cause u to spew..
    now that ur girls out the way^..I'll switch subjects 2 u//
    weak
    u're weak as fuck sunny. I'm causing you pain.
    when u sport a 2-1...
    ...that'll be a countdown to your falling in rank//
    good
    fresh from the top bitch. I spit steel till it's spent
    and'll put in u in a pine box...
    ...that don't come with a new car scent//
    ok
    Meta has no cash. he's a geek non-stop.
    plus he's too fat to sight-see...
    ....so Sin's only known to photoshop//
    this is aight
    nobody likes this fag. Sin's nothing but wack.
    when he was born...
    his mom seen him and started putting him back//
    this was really gay
    plus friends call him boogie man.they're afraid of this hoe.
    but you're not scary bitch...
    ...it's only scary you can't stay out ur nose//
    gay
    I'm done with u hoe. so at the bottom have fun.
    and I would Loot the Pro....if I could only find one//
    ehh closer.

    to me this was a weak battle, and MetaSin had the betta verse to me. eventho he had some simple shit in there, it was still betta than O, but O did have a good line tho...but it all came down to the lines i liked and MetaSin beat O, 4 good lines to 3.

    Vote-MetaSin
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  14. EYE-Z

    EYE-Z rote my vrse playing Bout

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    you're the broke pathetic type, to spend cold seasons alone
    so Ima spark the match, like u do, when you need heat in ya home


    but i understand, i should stop provokin this brawl
    ur a trooper, cuz if i were you, i dont know if Ida posted at all... /
    and if so, I wouldn't have posted it ALL, just the dope flows,
    but dont take my advice, unless u really want to no show
    so when i call u a pussy, i guess Im disgusting, and a pig
    but i was merely tying to follow the instructions in ya sig/
    i recognize bitch when i see one, i dont need a pic
    i'm the winner already, you don't even need to spit
    just save the voters the trouble of havin to read somethin
    cuz your verse and your name are the same since they dont mean nothin/
    was all straight cool disses...

    solid ish


    O

    I don't worry 'bout lames. So I ain't fuckin' wit him
    cause heads know...
    ...that every fucking verse of Meta's a sin//
    ?? this is pretty played and bad, not sure if it even makes sense

    I'm talking ghastly. monstrous. 'll cause u to spew..
    now that ur girls out the way^..I'll switch subjects 2 u//
    concept done so many times before


    Meta has no cash. he's a geek non-stop.
    plus he's too fat to sight-see...
    ....so Sin's only known to photoshop//
    ??? dont get it
    nobody likes this fag. Sin's nothing but wack.
    when he was born...
    his mom seen him and started putting him back//
    cool
    plus friends call him boogie man.they're afraid of this hoe.
    but you're not scary bitch...
    ...it's only scary you can't stay out ur nose//
    wtf?

    I'm done with u hoe. so at the bottom have fun.
    and I would Loot the Pro....if I could only find one//
    ya best line


    cool battle, but im sorry O some of ya shit barely made sense, and i'm not sure if you were dissing or not?
    for more consistancy

    vote-meta
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  15. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    ~can we please get some real voters in here....~
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  16. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    Meta

    you're the broke pathetic type, to spend cold seasons alone
    so Ima spark the match, like u do, when you need heat in ya home
    good
    when i step on the scene, i floss like a dentist's routine
    but you're so poor that envy's the only thing gettin you green/
    ok
    i keystyle, even though i know this guy may write,
    since the loser's got nothin else to do on a friday night
    lol
    but i understand, i should stop provokin this brawl
    ur a trooper, cuz if i were you, i dont know if Ida posted at all... /
    nope
    and if so, I wouldn't have posted it ALL, just the dope flows,
    but dont take my advice, unless u really want to no show
    not feelin it
    so when i call u a pussy, i guess Im disgusting, and a pig
    but i was merely tying to follow the instructions in ya sig/
    lol, good
    i recognize bitch when i see one, i dont need a pic
    i'm the winner already, you don't even need to spit
    no
    just save the voters the trouble of havin to read somethin
    cuz your verse and your name are the same since they dont mean nothin/
    good

    !O!
    I don't worry 'bout lames. So I ain't fuckin' wit him
    cause heads know...
    ...that every fucking verse of Meta's a sin//
    ok
    I'm talking ghastly. monstrous. 'll cause u to spew..
    now that ur girls out the way^..I'll switch subjects 2 u//
    creative
    u're weak as fuck sunny. I'm causing you pain.
    when u sport a 2-1...
    ...that'll be a countdown to your falling in rank//
    ok
    fresh from the top bitch. I spit steel till it's spent
    and'll put in u in a pine box...
    ...that don't come with a new car scent//
    lol, good
    Meta has no cash. he's a geek non-stop.
    plus he's too fat to sight-see...
    ....so Sin's only known to photoshop//
    nope
    nobody likes this fag. Sin's nothing but wack.
    when he was born...
    his mom seen him and started putting him back//
    lol ok
    plus friends call him boogie man.they're afraid of this hoe.
    but you're not scary bitch...
    ...it's only scary you can't stay out ur nose//
    what?
    I'm done with u hoe. so at the bottom have fun.
    and I would Loot the Pro....if I could only find one//
    nope

    this is hard to judge punchwise so Ima go wit Metasin cuz he had better flow, not a bad effort by dude though

    vote - Metasin
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  17. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    son don't sway voters n shit
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  18. Fold

    Fold *NEW* DIC - just add gay!

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    v/metasin

    his concepts actually made sense...i dont get some of the lines O was using, like the nose one...meta won this easily and i honestly dont think he needed much..his opener alone could've did in O's entire verse alone
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  19. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    5-3 metasin wins 3-0
    ~!O!~ loses 3-2
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