RBL Wk6: Don Killuminati 1-0 vs. Known Rapper 1-0

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am Pacific
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Pacific
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-30 lines!
    u must agree on an amount in ya check in
    & match whatever amount u agree on


    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler.
    1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra
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    -General Rules-
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    will result in a 2 vote deduction from your own battle!
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  2. Don Killuminati

    Don Killuminati New Member

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    in'ed..let's go 12
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  3. Who? ClayFac3

    Who? ClayFac3 PLUMERZ CRAK

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  4. Known Rapper

    Known Rapper New Member

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    word.. chea

    good luck
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  5. Known Rapper

    Known Rapper New Member

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    You lost to courtesy

    but they dont really care, your whack ya hear....
    Known but flip RAPPER (~~~ thats your whole rap career
    Fuck your lack of money, rock a rap dawg
    You scream 'black....power'
    but that wont get your lights back on
    it clear a net never got you good at rap,
    dont ever write
    go back to living off blowing sax cuz its clarinet is your life
    Your bitch needs to 'Pop-E', to fuck you, wanna bet?
    but isn't that funny ^^ she calls me that during sex
    We all wanna be the biggest and strongest..
    dont matter the hours
    but if we know what ADONIS then i'll be Screech Powers
    i'm the hottest in the streets. just to rhyme a doubt
    i'll take your girl to the streets
    and 'gutter open' until the ninja turtles can climb out
    Fuck this fat wigga. your accomplishments aint on my level
    ......so your mile-stone is most likely a 2 step-pebble


    blah drop soon ..2-0 for me
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  6. Don Killuminati

    Don Killuminati New Member

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    haha..that's all u got son??

    let's go man..LET'S GO!

    my jump off is...Known across the world & strikes u..
    ur jump off is..u leapin from a bridge cuz no1 likes u..
    no1 bites u...ya fake..reality gots u ashamed kid..
    so now ya makin a livin off dreams..like game did..
    it's the same bid..it's lopsided the way him & me rank..
    so if ya thinkin ya gonna win..i'll rob ya memory bank!..
    ya future's dim, u get shanked..i'm ABOVE ya shit..
    & ya not just fallin for the bottom..ya in love with it..
    now check it..u flip AND bite..ya text is just dumb..
    ya punches pull from people more than excorisms!..
    i'ma known rapper..so i can't help but to scar him..
    he's a known rapper....cuz that's his name on RM..
    that's a BIG difference..we seen u win once, truly..
    but no1 ever Saw 2...like the sequel to the movie!..

    i'm 2-0.
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  7. Who? ClayFac3

    Who? ClayFac3 PLUMERZ CRAK

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    known rapper

    but they dont really care, your whack ya hear....
    Known but flip RAPPER (~~~ thats your whole rap career
    reppar? reppar as in he just reps? lol? i dont get it... 0

    Fuck your lack of money, rock a rap dawg
    You scream 'black....power'
    but that wont get your lights back on
    lol aight 1

    it clear a net never got you good at rap,
    dont ever write
    go back to living off blowing sax cuz its clarinet is your life
    that was nice... its clear the net is your life... nice... 3

    Your bitch needs to 'Pop-E', to fuck you, wanna bet?
    but isn't that funny ^^ she calls me that during sex
    ohhhh another 3

    We all wanna be the biggest and strongest..
    dont matter the hours
    but if we know what ADONIS then i'll be Screech Powers
    wtf? i really dont get it.... 0.....

    i'm the hottest in the streets. just to rhyme a doubt
    i'll take your girl to the streets
    and 'gutter open' until the ninja turtles can climb out
    AAAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHAHAAAAHAHA 3

    Fuck this fat wigga. your accomplishments aint on my level
    ......so your mile-stone is most likely a 2 step-pebble
    ohhhhhhhh damn another 3

    13/21

    overall man your shit was aight-cool..... it was either hot or flop for you... either your shit sucked or it connected nice.... decent verse... flow was aight...

    don killumaniti

    my jump off is...Known across the world & strikes u..
    ur jump off is..u leapin from a bridge cuz no1 likes u..
    aaahaa 3

    no1 bites u...ya fake..reality gots u ashamed kid..
    so now ya makin a livin off dreams..like game did..
    ohh connected niccee 3

    it's the same bid..it's lopsided the way him & me rank..
    so if ya thinkin ya gonna win..i'll rob ya memory bank!..
    ehhhhhh 1

    ya future's dim, u get shanked..i'm ABOVE ya shit..
    & ya not just fallin for the bottom..ya in love with it..
    lol aigh aigh kinda cool... 1

    now check it..u flip AND bite..ya text is just dumb..
    ya punches pull from people more than excorisms!..
    aahaa coo 2

    i'ma known rapper..so i can't help but to scar him..
    he's a known rapper....cuz that's his name on RM..
    ohhhhhh nice connect/diss/personal/play off his name.. 3 no doubt

    that's a BIG difference..we seen u win once, truly..
    but no1 ever Saw 2...like the sequel to the movie!..
    aha... what movie? j/p nice concept n shit... connected nice with him 2.5

    15.5/21

    overall ya shit was consistent as fuck for the most part... couple real nice connectors as well... flow was ez as shit which was cool... structure damn near perfect but fucka structure.... ne wayz u outdid other dude wit consistency... if this was a real life battle i prolly woulda ohhhhhed at him one or two more than you n crowd woulda went nuts... but this is text... and you were more consistent... i jus rambled on....

    vote donny killuminiti
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  8. King Dave

    King Dave New Member

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    NiCe Battle i cant vote but both of you had a nice verse

    Known Rapper work on your flow the punches was ok but they would of been better if ur flow was better. just constructive criticism.
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  9. EYE-Z

    EYE-Z rote my vrse playing Bout

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    known rapper hadn a much better verse here...the black power alone won this imo...good stuff

    clarinet was a bit of a stretch...good verse though

    vote known rapper
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  10. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    ^^ u'll have to explain that vote a little more
    we're gettin alot more strict with voting
    u didn't even mention the other guy

    1-0 don

    dope verses by the way :thumb:
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  11. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    Known rapper - thought the verse was good to start, then it seems like you rushed the shit out of it. The clarinet line was bad, I don't know what it is supposed to mean but sax and clarinet are different instruments anyway. The black power line was funny, and the Pop E line was pretty good, just a real choppy verse very inconsistent.

    DK - much more consistent verse I hate the 'every1' shit to make your verses match up at the end, its not that important,
    "it's the same bid..it's lopsided the way him & me rank..
    so if ya thinkin ya gonna win..i'll rob ya memory bank!..
    ya future's dim, u get shanked..i'm ABOVE ya shit..
    & ya not just fallin for the bottom..ya in love with it..
    now check it..u flip AND bite..ya text is just dumb..
    ya punches pull from people more than excorisms!.."
    this stuff was pretty nice, first two bars match up with his punches, and this was just an overall better verse with flow structure and disses.

    Pretty good battle fellas, seems like you both could have put more time into it and made it much better tho.

    Vote - Don Killuminati
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  12. Known Rapper

    Known Rapper New Member

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    known rapper

    but they dont really care, your whack ya hear....
    Known but flip RAPPER (~~~ thats your whole rap career
    reppar? reppar as in he just reps? lol? i dont get it... 0


    We all wanna be the biggest and strongest..
    dont matter the hours
    but if we know what ADONIS then i'll be Screech Powers
    wtf? i really dont get it.... 0.....


    he reps par...means hes average

    and Adonis ...its the alpha man...come on lol!!!

    lol good battle dawg..


    i'll get my votes up soon
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  13. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    KR:
    Fuck your lack of money, rock a rap dawg
    You scream 'black....power'
    but that wont get your lights back on
    it clear a net never got you good at rap,
    dont ever write
    go back to living off blowing sax cuz its clarinet is your life
    Your bitch needs to 'Pop-E', to fuck you, wanna bet?
    but isn't that funny ^^ she calls me that during sex
    i'm the hottest in the streets. just to rhyme a doubt
    i'll take your girl to the streets
    and 'gutter open' until the ninja turtles can climb out



    DK:
    no1 bites u...ya fake..reality gots u ashamed kid..
    so now ya makin a livin off dreams..like game did..
    ya future's dim, u get shanked..i'm ABOVE ya shit..
    & ya not just fallin for the bottom..ya in love with it..


    i dunno, i seriously thought DK was kinda simple lol, his jump off/memory bank lines were played, and i didnt really like the exorcism ones. the ones up top were hitting though, well worded. your flow was nice too, really good flow. but i thought Known Rapper was more creative, like by quite a bit. black power line and the clarinet lines were nice, rest was ok, you had some shitty lines though lol, i didn't get the opener at all but it's w/e

    vote-Known Rapper kinda easy in my eyes.

    aight battle.
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  14. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    Up over no shows.
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  15. .ClasSick.

    .ClasSick. don't body yaself.

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    it clear a net never got you good at rap,
    dont ever write
    go back to living off blowing sax cuz its clarinet is your life
    Your bitch needs to 'Pop-E', to fuck you, wanna bet?
    but isn't that funny ^^ she calls me that during sex
    i'm the hottest in the streets. just to rhyme a doubt
    i'll take your girl to the streets
    and 'gutter open' until the ninja turtles can climb out

    vs.

    ya future's dim, u get shanked..i'm ABOVE ya shit..
    & ya not just fallin for the bottom..ya in love with it..


    ok battle. pretty cool verse from KR... weak in some parts, but overally pretty good. that pop-e line was tight. DK just came pretty played and simple in most of his verse. not enough to beat KR's verse.

    vote- Known Rapper
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  16. Twisted Flowa

    Twisted Flowa King Has Found His Thrown

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    To me this battle was completelly one side.. Don Killuminati took this hands down, Known Rapper's verse was pretty tired and most of it wast hard to follow.. While Don shit had killer punches and it flowed good...

    Fav Lines

    Known Rapper

    Your bitch needs to 'Pop-E', to fuck you, wanna bet?
    but isn't that funny ^^ she calls me that during sex

    Don Killuminati

    no1 bites u...ya fake..reality gots u ashamed kid..
    so now ya makin a livin off dreams..like game did..

    ya future's dim, u get shanked..i'm ABOVE ya shit..
    & ya not just fallin for the bottom..ya in love with it..

    i'ma known rapper..so i can't help but to scar him..
    he's a known rapper....cuz that's his name on RM..
    that's a BIG difference..we seen u win once, truly..
    but no1 ever Saw 2...like the sequel to the movie!..

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    To get down to it Don just came harder over all and took this battle hands down, Known really didn't keep my attention.

    VOte = Don Killuminati
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  17. Don Killuminati

    Don Killuminati New Member

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  18. Known Rapper

    Known Rapper New Member

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  19. L o n e O n e

    L o n e O n e New Member

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    omg...i hated this battle, just like almost every other one this week

    Known...had some fucked up wordings...wtf was that opener????...clarinet line was forced as FUCK and was stupid anyway..."pop-e" was wack...Adonis line? coulda been executed better..."gutter open" was a good concept that got fucked by a stupid reference...closer was trash. Only decent line was "black power," but even that was sort of forced.

    Don...didn't like your first 6 lines. "Fallin'" line could've been done better...wtf are excorisms??? did you perhaps mean EXCORSISMS? either way, the line was fucked because it didn't really even rhyme with the one before it, and the punch was just poorly executed anyway....last for lines were wack. Just bein honest.

    vote = Known...the lesser of two evils
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  20. Allah.

    Allah. nice with the hands

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    known rapper
    Fuck your lack of money, rock a rap dawg
    You scream 'black....power'
    but that wont get your lights back on
    i'm the hottest in the streets. just to rhyme a doubt
    i'll take your girl to the streets
    and 'gutter open' until the ninja turtles can climb out

    Don Killuminati
    i'ma known rapper..so i can't help but to scar him..
    he's a known rapper....cuz that's his name on RM..
    no1 bites u...ya fake..reality gots u ashamed kid..
    so now ya makin a livin off dreams..like game did..

    Overall: this shit was weird, other than 2 bars from each, everything else was either played or weak or forced.. lol .. especially pop 2 from known and the bottom from don.. damn, it basically came down to which two bars I liked most, and I liked known's two bars more. so yea, nothing much else to say, both had the same amount of good and bad lines, I just liked knowns good lines more.

    vote - Known Rapper
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