RBL Wk6 Championship: Volkab 5-0 vs. Imperial 5-3

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  1. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    hmm lets see here

    I’d berate ya crew, but even they ain’t got faith in you.
    I mean Jook don’t even KNOW me, and he stated I’d rape you, duke.
    ehh
    From UL you’ll get dropped in a minute…I’d say ya got the roster offended
    …but them n!ggas all forgot you was in it.
    okayyyy
    You got no quotables, ya construction is all sloppy.
    The only eye-opener’s whoever the fuck’s conductin’ ya autopsy.
    nah
    Ya lifeless husk’ll remain/ when my knife plunges correct,
    You'll watch the blade run through ya neck like a jugular vein.
    no
    Mayne, I shimmer & shine/…it’s a whirlwind of rage.
    & n!gga the world is a stage…where none remember ya lines.
    ehh
    Only the good die young…that riles me since
    That means next week I won’t be around for my title defense.
    ehh.. i get it and shit, but u need to be hittin ur opponent
    But on the other hand, when I’m housed in sod…
    Your piece-of-shit-garbage fuckin ass will probably outlive GOD.
    same concept as line before, poorly executed 2 bars.
    You old as fuck, & ya punches remind me of smoked up joints:
    They’re gone now, but they must’ve been dope, at some point.
    that was kinda okay
    In conclusion, ya dumb ass got merked, text geek.
    And these are throwaways, lines I’ve rejected for my verse NEXT week.
    no
    So even though you ain’t worth my finest material,
    Gimme your AIM…I want your opinion on some lines for Ethareal.
    no


    Im direct wit my disses.. you cant match me
    You got punches comin in all directions.. except at me
    haha
    Ya net stats are improvin.. ya now gettin thanks
    Man youll definitely go further… down in the ranks
    ehh
    Every time I read ya shit, its weak dude
    But you aint come THAT wack since the last time I beat you
    iv used this before.. funnny tho
    Ya times up.. im still comin wit more fresh stuff
    Youre in mint condition, like the nicorette gum
    nah
    Ill have ya shook for days.. look your game is a waste
    Aint no Schick Quatros when I put 4 blades to ya face
    ehh
    Ya style’s K Swiss.. ya need some new lines now
    Dont think youre a champ just cuz AOD signed out
    simple
    You had easy wins.. youre a wack disgrace
    Against good people..
    ..youd win-rar, like kids that D/L songs at this place
    old
    I write great bars, and hang out wit my crew
    Man you write gay bars.. and hang out in em too
    olderrr
    Ill smack ya out this world for tryin me
    So you aint gotta watch Mighty Ducks to see a flyin V
    okay
    You werent ready, ya shook like hell now
    Damn, ya verse had a breakthrough..
    ..must be where the good lines fell out
    okay

    vote imp..

    more consistent, more witty
    test
  2. Allah.

    Allah. nice with the hands

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    Vol

    I’d berate ya crew, but even they ain’t got faith in you.
    I mean Jook don’t even KNOW me, and he stated I’d rape you, duke.
    ehh, you've had 5 matches already, if this was ya first match it'd be different, but na

    From UL you’ll get dropped in a minute…I’d say ya got the roster offended
    …but them n!ggas all forgot you was in it.
    naaaa

    You got no quotables, ya construction is all sloppy.
    The only eye-opener’s whoever the fuck’s conductin’ ya autopsy.
    this was ok.. seen similiar ish before though, but i like how you worded it

    Ya lifeless husk’ll remain/ when my knife plunges correct,
    You'll watch the blade run through ya neck like a jugular vein.
    naaa

    Mayne, I shimmer & shine/…it’s a whirlwind of rage.
    & n!gga the world is a stage…where none remember ya lines.
    hell no

    Only the good die young…that riles me since
    That means next week I won’t be around for my title defense.
    ehhhh

    But on the other hand, when I’m housed in sod…
    Your piece-of-shit-garbage fuckin ass will probably outlive GOD.
    no

    You old as fuck, & ya punches remind me of smoked up joints:
    They’re gone now, but they must’ve been dope, at some point.
    not feeling this either

    In conclusion, ya dumb ass got merked, text geek.
    And these are throwaways, lines I’ve rejected for my verse NEXT week.
    na people do this all the time, blaaa

    So even though you ain’t worth my finest material,
    Gimme your AIM…I want your opinion on some lines for Ethareal.
    na



    Imp

    Im direct wit my disses.. you cant match me
    You got punches comin in all directions.. except at me
    cool

    Ya net stats are improvin.. ya now gettin thanks
    Man youll definitely go further… down in the ranks
    naaa man, this is too easy and been done

    Every time I read ya shit, its weak dude
    But you aint come THAT wack since the last time I beat you
    not feeling it

    Ya times up.. im still comin wit more fresh stuff
    Youre in mint condition, like the nicorette gum
    naaa

    Ill have ya shook for days.. look your game is a waste
    Aint no Schick Quatros when I put 4 blades to ya face
    naaa

    Ya style’s K Swiss.. ya need some new lines now
    Dont think youre a champ just cuz AOD signed out
    ehhh expected this and wasnt done well

    You had easy wins.. youre a wack disgrace
    Against good people..
    ..youd win-rar, like kids that D/L songs at this place
    played as hell

    I write great bars, and hang out wit my crew
    Man you write gay bars.. and hang out in em too
    naaa played too

    Ill smack ya out this world for tryin me
    So you aint gotta watch Mighty Ducks to see a flyin V
    decent

    You werent ready, ya shook like hell now
    Damn, ya verse had a breakthrough..
    ..must be where the good lines fell out
    decent

    overall: both dropped pretty weak, but volkab was way weaker, he was on some newbie shit.. something I'd expect someone who just registered today to post, ehhh. nothing I felt in his verse at all, nothing stood out..no quotables, autopsy wasnt too bad, but that was all he had.. then imp had alot of played shit, but he had more lines that hit, and more decent shit.. vol lost this badly though, this shit was one sided, it was a weak battle but Imp is the clear winner.

    vote - Imperial

    how the fuck is the other guy getting any votes at all???

    sad shit.
    test
  3. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    I’d berate ya crew, but even they ain’t got faith in you.
    I mean Jook don’t even KNOW me, and he stated I’d rape you, duke.
    From UL you’ll get dropped in a minute…I’d say ya got the roster offended
    …but them n!ggas all forgot you was in it.
    You got no quotables, ya construction is all sloppy.
    The only eye-opener’s whoever the fuck’s conductin’ ya autopsy.
    Ya lifeless husk’ll remain/ when my knife plunges correct,
    You'll watch the blade run through ya neck like a jugular vein.
    Mayne, I shimmer & shine/…it’s a whirlwind of rage.
    & n!gga the world is a stage…where none remember ya lines.
    Only the good die young…that riles me since
    That means next week I won’t be around for my title defense.
    But on the other hand, when I’m housed in sod…
    Your piece-of-shit-garbage fuckin ass will probably outlive GOD.
    You old as fuck, & ya punches remind me of smoked up joints:
    They’re gone now, but they must’ve been dope, at some point.
    In conclusion, ya dumb ass got merked, text geek.
    And these are throwaways, lines I’ve rejected for my verse NEXT week.
    So even though you ain’t worth my finest material,
    Gimme your AIM…I want your opinion on some lines for Ethareal.

    horrible. damn that shit was fucking garbage. what were u thinking u newb?


    Im direct wit my disses.. you cant match me
    You got punches comin in all directions.. except at me
    Ya net stats are improvin.. ya now gettin thanks
    Man youll definitely go further… down in the ranks
    Every time I read ya shit, its weak dude
    But you aint come THAT wack since the last time I beat you
    Ya times up.. im still comin wit more fresh stuff
    Youre in mint condition, like the nicorette gum
    Ill have ya shook for days.. look your game is a waste
    Aint no Schick Quatros when I put 4 blades to ya face
    Ya style’s K Swiss.. ya need some new lines now
    Dont think youre a champ just cuz AOD signed out

    dope, nice verse.

    v-imp.
    blow out in my opinion, volkabs verse was total trash. no creativeness, no nothing. imp came nice with it and he took it.
    test
  4. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    10-4 Imperial wins the title 6-3
    Volkab loses 5-1
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