RBL Wk5 Championship: 1. AOD 7-0 vs. 2. Troublesome 5-1

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Pacific
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

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    All verses must be from 10-30 lines!
    u must agree on an amount in ya check in
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  2. Mr. Professor

    Mr. Professor Angel of Death

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    if u plan on showing...im not doing more than 14 lines
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  3. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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    sounds good to me...i'll post after work
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  4. Mr. Professor

    Mr. Professor Angel of Death

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  5. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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    Angel of Death? Hold up... just stop a second
    I got more scraps than him...so i'm about to pop the question
    Squeaked by MFB last week...came close to gettin beaten
    With such a tso-tso verse...the general started gettin heated
    This vet's conceited, older heads are over-rated clowns and wack
    And you're living proof...so i'm about to lay down the facts
    You ugly fuck...pimply-faced bitch, you got the queerest grill
    I'll straight toss you out the window...just so you could clear a sill
    I'm severely ill, this is the week that you depart the crown
    While Dill is gonna get Wall Street with your rank and market down
    AOD a drug dealer? Pffft...you aint sellin man
    I'm writing you off quick...because you couldn't tell a gram
    I'll melt ya plans with personals, watch how fast he pouts...
    But ima let you off the hook...so I won't be casting Doubt
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  6. Mr. Professor

    Mr. Professor Angel of Death

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    hmm ur opener looks awfully familiar...serge in the Tag Tourney:

    here the link: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=916271

    but anyway...

    Angel of Death:

    im respected by everyone, what u supposed to be dawg?
    when nice heads from my time dont even know who u are
    i brought him into this world and now im pullin him out
    i said its time to MEET ur maker...not put in ur mouth
    i write for ur ghostwriter..so really all your rappin is me
    kid ive fed more fuckin lines than the disaster relief
    you got a couple fans, but no rhymes that actually amuse
    yea u have cult following...how many times u gon battle me and lose
    i end careers the second time, u should be nervous as shit
    Jesus battled Death twice... n!ggas aint heard from him since
    theres something bout my skill and ya not comin near it kid
    he just cant put his finger on it...or his hands, or fuckin touch it period
    i'd call u a legend, but thats a WASTE when this boy fails
    plus if i try callin myself, it goes str8 to my voicemail

    try harder....
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  7. Exon

    Exon That brand new shit

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    i end careers the second time, u should be nervous as shit
    Jesus battled Death twice... n!ggas aint heard from him since
    theres something bout my skill and ya not comin near it kid
    he just cant put his finger on it...or his hands, or fuckin touch it period

    Ouch @ the first line.
    AOD won it here.

    Squeaked by MFB last week...came close to gettin beaten
    With such a tso-tso verse...the general started gettin heated
    This vet's conceited, older heads are over-rated clowns and wack
    And you're living proof...so i'm about to lay down the facts

    Dont get me wrong tro, you had some exceptional shit in ur verse.

    You ugly fuck...pimply-faced bitch, you got the queerest grill
    I'll straight toss you out the window...just so you could clear a sill

    But shit like this seemed really forced which took away sum of the power in ur verse.
    Overall a pretty decent battle, but.

    V/ -AOD.
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  8. S-ents

    S-ents S-ents

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    WOW! that battle was fuckin' tight, ill,ill,ill,
    but anyways heres how I judge it, because it was a battle of tight punches ima judge by the best punch that I think Each of you had:
    Troublesome-:
    the one before this was nice too but I Liked this one more

    VS.

    Mr. Professor:
    this punch super ill, I'm not gonna lie my eyebrowls shot up when I read it!

    V-Mr.Prof.
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  9. Insense

    Insense take one...

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    vote= AOD

    troublesome had some nice punches, but I think AOD just ripped into him this week in pretty much all aspects of it...the jesus line was hot, the eyedill and wallstreet line was hot too...good battle but I think AOD slightly has the advantage
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  10. Twisted Flowa

    Twisted Flowa King Has Found His Thrown

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    Pretty descent battle. This is the AOD I was lookin for last week..

    I gotta give this one to AOD his shit flowed a lil better and it didn't seem as forced...

    Fav Lines

    Troublesome

    I'm severely ill, this is the week that you depart the crown
    While Dill is gonna get Wall Street with your rank and market down
    AOD a drug dealer? Pffft...you aint sellin man
    I'm writing you off quick...because you couldn't tell a gram

    AOD

    i said its time to MEET ur maker...not put in ur mouth
    i write for ur ghostwriter..so really all your rappin is me

    i end careers the second time, u should be nervous as shit
    Jesus battled Death twice... n!ggas aint heard from him since
    theres something bout my skill and ya not comin near it kid
    he just cant put his finger on it...or his hands, or fuckin touch it period
    i'd call u a legend, but thats a WASTE when this boy fails
    plus if i try callin myself, it goes str8 to my voicemail

    AOD's verse stayed pretty consistant with flow and punches while trouble's didn't really get interesting until the end...

    VOte = AOD
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  11. Fold

    Fold *NEW* DIC - just add gay!

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    im not really feeling the whole..wait until ppl drop so i can post after routine, but aod did have a more consistent verse than troublesome..i liked trouble's verse though..this was a good battle..i really like that market down line..it was cool..i thought it was dope..aod had that jesus line which was dope as hell..and that voicemail was cool as shit too..had a cocky ass verse but i'm feeling it

    cool battle guys

    v/aod
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  12. Nick Icon

    Nick Icon The Specialist

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    Angel of Death? Hold up... just stop a second
    I got more scraps than him...so i'm about to pop the question
    ha...

    Squeaked by MFB last week...came close to gettin beaten
    With such a tso-tso verse...the general started gettin heated
    lmao... chea...

    This vet's conceited, older heads are over-rated clowns and wack
    And you're living proof...so i'm about to lay down the facts
    haha...

    You ugly fuck...pimply-faced bitch, you got the queerest grill
    I'll straight toss you out the window...just so you could clear a sill
    eh....

    I'm severely ill, this is the week that you depart the crown
    While Dill is gonna get Wall Street with your rank and market down
    haha...

    AOD a drug dealer? Pffft...you aint sellin man
    I'm writing you off quick...because you couldn't tell a gram
    eh...

    I'll melt ya plans with personals, watch how fast he pouts...
    But ima let you off the hook...so I won't be casting Doubt
    lmao... when i first read it i thought of the whole shadow of a doubt" concept... then I read it again cuz my vision is blurry... [/b]

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    im respected by everyone, what u supposed to be dawg?
    when nice heads from my time dont even know who u are
    lool

    i brought him into this world and now im pullin him out
    i said its time to MEET ur maker...not put in ur mouth
    lmfao...

    i write for ur ghostwriter..so really all your rappin is me
    kid ive fed more fuckin lines than the disaster relief
    LMFAO...

    you got a couple fans, but no rhymes that actually amuse
    yea u have cult following...how many times u gon battle me and lose
    ok

    i end careers the second time, u should be nervous as shit
    Jesus battled Death twice... n!ggas aint heard from him since
    LMFAO... murder

    theres something bout my skill and ya not comin near it kid
    he just cant put his finger on it...or his hands, or fuckin touch it period
    lmao...

    i'd call u a legend, but thats a WASTE when this boy fails
    plus if i try callin myself, it goes str8 to my voicemail
    LMAO...



    I read this battle like 5times and wanted to vote for Trouble... But AOD caught fire after the disaster relief line and just didn't stop...

    i started voting at :All times are GMT -5> . The time now is 12:45 PM.

    vote= AOD.... shit was tough to decide though...
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  13. L o n e O n e

    L o n e O n e New Member

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    Irritating battle in some ways....

    Troublesome

    Squeaked by MFB last week...came close to gettin beaten
    With such a tso-tso verse...the general started gettin heated
    This vet's conceited, older heads are over-rated clowns and wack
    And you're living proof...so i'm about to lay down the facts
    You ugly fuck...pimply-faced bitch, you got the queerest grill
    I'll straight toss you out the window...just so you could clear a sill
    I'm severely ill, this is the week that you depart the crown
    While Dill is gonna get Wall Street with your rank and market down
    AOD a drug dealer? Pffft...you aint sellin man
    I'm writing you off quick...because you couldn't tell a gram
    I'll melt ya plans with personals, watch how fast he pouts...
    But ima let you off the hook...so I won't be casting Doubt


    wtf was up with this verse...opener was wack...General Tso line was forced...lay down facts was weak...clear a sill line was just bad, not to mention set-up with an insult that can't really be verified...I DID like the "market down" line, that was your best. But where the fuck did AoD being a drug dealer come from??? Am I missing something? I smell STACKED PUNCH...which was ironically followed by "melt ya plans with personals", lol...by the time your closer came along, I was already not feeling the verse.

    Angel of Death

    write for ur ghostwriter..so really all your rappin is me
    kid ive fed more fuckin lines than the disaster relief
    you got a couple fans, but no rhymes that actually amuse
    yea u have cult following...how many times u gon battle me and lose
    i end careers the second time, u should be nervous as shit
    Jesus battled Death twice... n!ggas aint heard from him since


    That was all I was really feeling from Angel's verse, and that was all he needed. Good stuff. Easy vote:

    Vote = Angel of Death.
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  14. BiggRic

    BiggRic Doin Bigg Thangs

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    Angel of Death? Hold up... just stop a second
    I got more scraps than him...so i'm about to pop the question
    ok

    Squeaked by MFB last week...came close to gettin beaten
    With such a tso-tso verse...the general started gettin heated
    hehe
    This vet's conceited, older heads are over-rated clowns and wack
    And you're living proof...so i'm about to lay down the facts
    ehhh

    You ugly fuck...pimply-faced bitch, you got the queerest grill
    I'll straight toss you out the window...just so you could clear a sill
    eh.

    I'm severely ill, this is the week that you depart the crown
    While Dill is gonna get Wall Street with your rank and market down
    LMAO

    AOD a drug dealer? Pffft...you aint sellin man
    I'm writing you off quick...because you couldn't tell a gram
    hehe

    I'll melt ya plans with personals, watch how fast he pouts...
    But ima let you off the hook...so I won't be casting Doubt

    hehe

    aod


    im respected by everyone, what u supposed to be dawg?
    when nice heads from my time dont even know who u are
    eeeh ok

    i brought him into this world and now im pullin him out
    i said its time to MEET ur maker...not put in ur mouth
    LOL

    i write for ur ghostwriter..so really all your rappin is me
    kid ive fed more fuckin lines than the disaster relief
    IIIILLLLLL

    you got a couple fans, but no rhymes that actually amuse
    yea u have cult following...how many times u gon battle me and lose
    eeeh

    i end careers the second time, u should be nervous as shit
    Jesus battled Death twice... n!ggas aint heard from him since
    OOOOHHHHHH1

    theres something bout my skill and ya not comin near it kid
    he just cant put his finger on it...or his hands, or fuckin touch it period
    haha

    i'd call u a legend, but thats a WASTE when this boy fails
    plus if i try callin myself, it goes str8 to my voicemail
    haha that was nice

    Overall good battle from both.. Ithink aod had a better verse though. Trouble came to win though no doubt... both had a few good lines, but honestly..AOD had a few great lines...

    Vote-AOD
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  15. Ovadose

    Ovadose Don't Get Smoked

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    Wow -

    It's all been gone over...

    Troublesome - dope shit but i guess you'll get em next time

    AOD - Thats what i expect out of a reigning champ...that jesus shit was hot forreal...

    props to both sides but this cat retains the title

    Vote- AOD
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  16. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    i end careers the second time, u should be nervous as shit
    Jesus battled Death twice... n!ggas aint heard from him since

    damn

    AOD came hard in this battle. Both had real nice verses. I liked a lot of Trouble's lines, shit was witty. But AOD came more personal, and his disses hit harder. Nice battle folks

    Vote: AOD
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  17. Dukane

    Dukane The God

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    Troublesome

    This vet's conceited, older heads are over-rated clowns and wack
    And you're living proof...so i'm about to lay down the facts
    ok
    You ugly fuck...pimply-faced bitch, you got the queerest grill
    I'll straight toss you out the window...just so you could clear a sill
    ok
    I'm severely ill, this is the week that you depart the crown
    While Dill is gonna get Wall Street with your rank and market down
    nice
    AOD a drug dealer? Pffft...you aint sellin man
    I'm writing you off quick...because you couldn't tell a gram
    ok
    I'll melt ya plans with personals, watch how fast he pouts...
    But ima let you off the hook...so I won't be casting Doubt
    ok

    AOD

    im respected by everyone, what u supposed to be dawg?
    when nice heads from my time dont even know who u are
    ok
    i brought him into this world and now im pullin him out
    i said its time to MEET ur maker...not put in ur mouth
    ok

    ^ Those are your best lines but I felt AOD more

    Vote = AOD
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  18. *NativeTongue*

    *NativeTongue* New Member

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    v - AOD

    i end careers the second time, u should be nervous as shit
    Jesus battled Death twice... n!ggas aint heard from him since

    say it ain't so

    murder in the first right there.

    trouble came good, so did aod, basically, it all came down to that line, which pushed AOD over the top.
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  19. MFB

    MFB Ciroc Boys

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    i write for ur ghostwriter..so really all your rappin is me
    kid ive fed more fuckin lines than the disaster relief
    LMFAO!

    i end careers the second time, u should be nervous as shit
    Jesus battled Death twice... n!ggas aint heard from him since
    OMG

    and btw AOD, i'm not on your dick....i'm just showin' props to a dope ass verse.
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  20. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    Troublesome

    You ugly fuck...pimply-faced bitch, you got the queerest grill
    I'll straight toss you out the window...just so you could clear a sill
    I'm severely ill, this is the week that you depart the crown
    While Dill is gonna get Wall Street with your rank and market down
    AOD a drug dealer? Pffft...you aint sellin man
    I'm writing you off quick...because you couldn't tell a gram
    I'll melt ya plans with personals, watch how fast he pouts...
    But ima let you off the hook...so I won't be casting Doubt

    VERY GOOD....IMO.....u started out slow the 1dt 4 lines but picked it up quick....closer was good...creative...tell a gram line was good.....props..

    AOD

    i write for ur ghostwriter..so really all your rappin is me
    kid ive fed more fuckin lines than the disaster relief
    you got a couple fans, but no rhymes that actually amuse
    yea u have cult following...how many times u gon battle me and lose
    i end careers the second time, u should be nervous as shit
    Jesus battled Death twice... n!ggas aint heard from him since


    Unfortunaly for Troublesome he going up against the champ...and that JESUS line killed it..murder...are u serious....

    Still AOD ego is something else with that closer...

    My vote AOD...
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