RBL Wk5: 21. Lares Viales 1-0 vs. 22. Allah 1-0

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  2. Allah.

    Allah. nice with the hands

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  3. Lares Viales

    Lares Viales EWG Martyr

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    sure thing.
    Good luck as well.
    zp.
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  4. Lares Viales

    Lares Viales EWG Martyr

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    edit
    no extention needed.
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  5. Lares Viales

    Lares Viales EWG Martyr

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  6. Lares Viales

    Lares Viales EWG Martyr

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    Here.



    Allah you're wayyyy fat. Stick to your active masterbation
    Talk about your body of work? Girls won't even send an application
    Computer geek. A girl was interested, but is this a joke bruh?
    You said "She ain't my 'type'.. I prefer arial or tahoma"
    You're just a scared nicca I'ma smolder this weak
    Got this black russian away from my bars like he ordered the drink.
    Dawg you ain't a star you're just brittle and hopeless
    Thinking you're a legend on the map
    ..but I'll leave this "legend" in the middle of the ocean
    And that verse is like ya driving. I'm fa real here kid
    Whenever you put in a standard punch.. you kill it QUICK
    Allah thinkin his bars dope. Ya shits sloppy like gnawed boobs
    He thinks he dropped the shining verse,
    ..but it'll put you in a copywrite lawsuit
    Lares is makin bank & Al can't spit. I leave veterans slim
    Funny how my cash is flowing.. Waaaay better than him
    N.igga I'ma pimp. I got mad hoes you ain't in my field
    The only bitch screamin ya name
    Has a horse face, red hair, and High heels



    for the dumb people.
    Legend - bottom of the map
    Closer is peg bundy from married with children
    ehh if you don't get anything else PM me or something.
    zp.
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  7. Lares Viales

    Lares Viales EWG Martyr

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    Delete mods.
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  8. Allah.

    Allah. nice with the hands

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    I thought u werent showing.

    posting now

    mods delete this.
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  9. Allah.

    Allah. nice with the hands

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    3 years & No one knows u?, sure ur perfect for fame
    the minds a powerful thing to waste, & ur verse worships the brain.
    And Lares your too gay, I’ve just about had it kid.
    my dick?, lady’s jacket; Ur just wearing a lady’s jacket, dick
    my knife leaks imagery, I’ll carve different faces on him
    u tie concepts together, only when ur laces have phrases on them .
    you had to explain your punches??, this ain't a fair thread
    but at least u have 4 straight lines.. cuz of your square head
    statistics say most marks are fags, so I’ma herb kid
    I’ll give ur face so many marks, it could start a gay escort service
    u dumb right? I’ve seen ya whackness on some sites
    we’ll give you a bit of respect, the day you bite someone nice
    all that ANGER in ya verse, yet it was fuckin dull kid
    havent seen that Raging Bull movie, but I just saw Ragin’ Bull, Shit!
    you really must be tall, Im glad for the misses schmuck
    cuz theres No way you can belittle, all of Your disses suck
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  10. GooseMan

    GooseMan Naptown's Finest

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    Vote= Allah...

    his verse was just constructed better and the punches hit way harder. To be honest with you I am not a fan of cats having to explain there punches. The verse should do that for you. Otherwise it just isn't a good enough punch to be in the verse. Anyway... Allah had much better punches that Lares had. I mean the last 6 bars pretty much dicked Lares whole verse...

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  11. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    Over no shows.
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  12. Insense

    Insense take one...

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    vote= Allah

    LV had a pretty decent verse, and I was really really feeling the type, arial tahoma line too. Ummm, it kind of went downhill after that. I mean it wasn't bad lines but they weren't very hard either. Allah had a lot more consistancy to his punches and worded them a bit better then LV did...the ragin bullshit was nice too
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  13. Fold

    Fold *NEW* DIC - just add gay!

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    Computer geek. A girl was interested, but is this a joke bruh?
    You said "She ain't my 'type'.. I prefer arial or tahoma"

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    3 years & No one knows u?, sure ur perfect for fame
    the minds a powerful thing to waste, & ur verse worships the brain.
    And Lares your too gay, I’ve just about had it kid.
    my dick?, lady’s jacket; Ur just wearing a lady’s jacket, dick
    my knife leaks imagery, I’ll carve different faces on him
    u tie concepts together, only when ur laces have phrases on them .

    this battle was cool...lares had some decent shit but nothing worth quoting and allah's first 3 bars were pretty hard hitting..he stayed a tad bit more consistent throughout his verse

    v/allah

    hit up my battle
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  14. Lares Viales

    Lares Viales EWG Martyr

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    ok...
    About the explanation pope.. I only added it, because I look at a lot of the voters on here and they vote against the person, because they don't get a certain punchline when it's simple. That's all I did it for.. so I don't get voted against on some bullshit homie.
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  15. So Sick

    So Sick New Member

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    Allah did real well in the battle and definately gets my vote, Lares had the legend one which was kinda cool but that Arial/Tahoma one was fucking cool... other than that nothing really big hitting while allah had some pretty nice wordplay, the jacket line i've seen something similar, but that 4 lines, square head punch had me actually laughing... good battle but....

    vote goes to allah
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  16. perma frost

    perma frost gay stars suck taint

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    what the
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  17. Allah.

    Allah. nice with the hands

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    4-0 me.

    good shit lares.
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  18. L o n e O n e

    L o n e O n e New Member

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    Lares


    Computer geek. A girl was interested, but is this a joke bruh?
    You said "She ain't my 'type'.. I prefer arial or tahoma"

    Lares is makin bank & Al can't spit. I leave veterans slim
    Funny how my cash is flowing.. Waaaay better than him


    You had a couple of interesting concepts that could've been executed better, imo...

    Allah

    And Lares your too gay, I’ve just about had it kid.
    my dick?, lady’s jacket; Ur just wearing a lady’s jacket, dick

    you had to explain your punches??, this ain't a fair thread
    but at least u have 4 straight lines.. cuz of your square head

    u dumb right? I’ve seen ya whackness on some sites
    we’ll give you a bit of respect, the day you bite someone nice


    Allah just edged it out--Lares had a couple of good concepts that fell short. Allah missed a lot, but had more hits that resonated.

    Vote = Allah
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  19. Lares Viales

    Lares Viales EWG Martyr

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    fa sho.. god damn @ being rusty.
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  20. Ovadose

    Ovadose Don't Get Smoked

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    Vote-Allah

    Allah - you came off as more of an MC here, your wordplaywas good and overall laid down a verse i didn't have to re-read to understand...bravo

    "u tie concepts together, only when ur laces have phrases on them"

    word

    Lares -
    Hey I'm italian too so i like to see people comin up but you gotta work on verse structure a lot of that shit was too shrouded in nothing to see a geniunely dope punch, work on breaking it down not building it up

    vote up imperial vs dose if you haven't already
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