RBL Wk4: 9. The Villian 3-2 vs. 10. The Franchise 2-0

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  1. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    lol.
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  2. Ovadose

    Ovadose Don't Get Smoked

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    I read em both a couple times pickin em apart

    Courtesy-your not a stranger to this but I fealt like you lost the drive about half way through and started to sound cheesy with gun claps an generic bullshit like that, started off strong tho...

    Fantom-very nice, the structure was feelin a little off but your punchlines were much more personal and you took the wordplay for a walk...

    I commend you both...get em next week

    Vote-------Fantom/Franchise...

    whatever the fuck yo name is...haha
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  3. zoloxian

    zoloxian I pimp you bitches

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    Liked this set of rhymes here:
    Silencer ducked, it pissed me off so I'm gunnin ya crew
    Normally I'm Herbin' Legends- but a VIRGIN'll do...
    Stop frontin... You know it's true, just don't be mad, V
    We know you never seen Bush til Nebz changed his avy...

    This is another one I liked all the way through:

    The one TV NOBODY watches, in fact
    if this kid's here "Courtesy of Hip Hop", then FUCK RAP...*
    You'll never get the chance to beat me, bitch
    NO ONE EVER DOES...
    But I'll give you a window of opportunity- to jump out of...
    Cuz we all know fuckin wit Franch' is bad for ya health
    Maybe instead of "Hustlin heat", you shoulda saved some for yaself...
    I smash through Vill's.. So hide all the women'n children
    Cuz I'm a nice guy... But this week I had to play The Villain...

    ...altogether gave the verse a 6 outta 10...

    I was feelin' this line:
    voting circle all ready in ur crew, now thats def crack..
    an they only vote in favor of u..cuz they owe favors back..
    theres similarities between us, check in made a surface..
    u were laughing just like me!..before i ever see ya verses..


    This line was ok:
    never try me an good riddance, finally a battle with a curve,
    bullet in before a sentence out of you..like microsoft word..

    ...I wasnt feelin anything else so I give it a 5 outta 10...

    overall my vote goes to The Franchise
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  4. Look im Gangsta

    Look im Gangsta New Member

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    then why's your reg date 2001?
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  5. Fantom

    Fantom :ihadadream:

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    I got here in 00...

    lost my password...

    re-registered...

    duuuurh...
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  6. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    franchise

    I'm not one to Judge, but yo Vill' you suckin at text
    So I'm about to take it to Court' like an angry Ex..
    This lame is vexed...
    Think you got flow f'real? Just stop son
    Cuz last week you beat EP, but you'll never drop one...


    I smash through Vill's.. So hide all the women'n children
    Cuz I'm a nice guy... But this week I had to play The Villain...


    even though Villian should of not beat me....i thought your opener and closer was solid...had a couple okay concepts...the window of oppurntunity been used to many times in the rbl...still not bad verse...

    Villian

    backpackin an ounce of shit,guns tight to me like beaters..
    fant casts more shadows of doubt than the apollo theatre..

    Thats all i thought was a good concept....had a few okay liners...but nothign stood out....IMO

    My vote Franchise...his opener and closer was enough to win...over Villian one line i liked
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  7. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    6-1 Franchise

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  8. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    eyedill if you are counting jdotc's vote, im gonna flip on this league for being ran by crooked ass muhfuggas
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  9. Twisted Flowa

    Twisted Flowa King Has Found His Thrown

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    Yo man I have to gives this one to Franchise his flowand delievery was on point, Villians verse was kind of boring, I couldn't really get into it. While Franchise's verse was pretty much on point except for when he said:

    "I'm known to take the ILL out... this clown just tries in VAIN..."

    Cuz when you do take the ill out of Villians name you get VIAN but it's ok cuz we know where you were goin with that.

    It seems to me that this battle was pretty one sided my vote's for Franchise...

    VOte = The Franchise
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  10. L o n e O n e

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    Franchise

    Stop frontin... You know it's true, just don't be mad, V
    We know you never seen Bush til Nebz changed his avy...

    The one TV NOBODY watches, in fact
    if this kid's here "Courtesy of Hip Hop", then FUCK RAP...*


    Verse was alright...more aggressive, confrontational, clowning style. Liked it ok in some spots, didn't like it in others. You lose MASSIVE points for the fuckin "window of opp" line, cuz that's played as fuck.

    Courtesy

    Honestly, maybe it's just me, but i was NOT feeling this verse at all. The language was stagnant, the concepts were either forced as fuck (wtf with the "ball dropping" sequence?) or had no impact. There weren't even any challenging rhyme patterns to dress the verse up with. I'm sure I'll be labeled an idiot, but this is my opinion--there was nothing in that verse that stood out to me, at ALL.

    Vote = Franchise
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  11. Genius.

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    Franchise
    Yeah I'm 2'n 0 offa no shows, but fuck dude
    The fact that you showed proves they both smarter than you....
    eh...
    I'm not one to Judge, but yo Vill' you suckin at text
    So I'm about to take it to Court' like an angry Ex..
    eh..
    This lame is vexed...
    Think you got flow f'real? Just stop son
    Cuz last week you beat EP, but you'll never drop one...
    nice
    Silencer ducked, it pissed me off so I'm gunnin ya crew
    Normally I'm Herbin' Legends- but a VIRGIN'll do...
    eh..
    Stop frontin... You know it's true, just don't be mad, V
    We know you never seen Bush til Nebz changed his avy...
    good
    This Villain is CRAZY... But fag you far from INSANE
    I'm known to take the ILL out... this clown just tries in VAIN...
    eh..
    You feelin the pain?
    You ain't dope boy don't even pretend
    That's why we all "Quote Status"... instead of him...*
    ok
    Shows over Court'...
    The one TV NOBODY watches, in fact
    if this kid's here "Courtesy of Hip Hop", then FUCK RAP...*
    ok
    You'll never get the chance to beat me, bitch
    NO ONE EVER DOES...
    But I'll give you a window of opportunity- to jump out of...
    ok
    Cuz we all know fuckin wit Franch' is bad for ya health
    Maybe instead of "Hustlin heat", you shoulda saved some for yaself...
    eh..
    I smash through Vill's.. So hide all the women'n children
    Cuz I'm a nice guy... But this week I had to play The Villain...
    good


    The Villian/Courtesy

    fant's never had skill so why antagonize, ur not lastin..
    hid behind The Franchise..cuz u'll never be that status..
    ok
    voting circle all ready in ur crew, now thats def crack..
    an they only vote in favor of u..cuz they owe favors back..
    ok
    theres similarities between us, check in made a surface..
    u were laughing just like me!..before i ever see ya verses..
    ok
    ..maybe u need lessons dumbie, so stop rhymin stupid..
    how can u be captain of HL..if your the biggest newb in it?
    good
    backpackin an ounce of shit,guns tight to me like beaters..
    fant casts more shadows of doubt than the apollo theatre..
    eh..
    balls drop in ur court? fant never had a memory seriously..
    ^^cus that wouldnt happen, if a judge scared u into puberty,
    nope
    never try me an good riddance, finally a battle with a curve,
    bullet in before a sentence out of you..like microsoft word..
    weak
    i pop about a million pills a month, ur jokes start no giggling,
    fant?..described hard to take down?..ahaha ur jus riddilin..
    weak
    so now ur hallucinatin with my gun clap, no need to slap..
    i'll leave red on ya cap.....HL when i shoot through his hat..
    nope
    an now your navy in the blue so i've heard, fant get a clue..
    never sleep on ya verses, we laugh at ppl sleepn above u..
    eh...
    an lol at u usin fran's name to get rep, ill unplug this slut..
    ..he was the most electrifyin man in text..ur jus washed up,
    nope

    Vote = Franchise
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  12. Fantom

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    for people who don't get the crazy/insane part... I was saying he'll never be INsaneVillain... [dunno]

    Now for the "Take the ILL out/try's in VAIN" line...

    I had a decision to make: Take the line out because Courtesy can't spell VILLAIN, or leave it in and hope you kids could spell...

    [dunno]

    V-I-L-L-A-I-N= Correct spelling of the word...
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  13. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    8-1 The Franchise wins 3-0
    The Villian loses 3-3
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