RBL Wk4: 9. The Villian 3-2 vs. 10. The Franchise 2-0

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am Pacific
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Pacific
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-30 lines!
    u must agree on an amount in ya check in
    & match whatever amount u agree on


    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler.
    1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra
    vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
    No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
    No Crew Voting!

    -General Rules-
    --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
    --No editing after BOTH verses are posted
    --if u post a no show verse, & ya opponent posts after
    u do, then u can't edit another verse in
    so get ya editing done before BOTH verses are posted!

    --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted
    will result in a 2 vote deduction from your own battle!
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  2. Fantom

    Fantom :ihadadream:

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  3. MC Conflict

    MC Conflict New Member

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    special announcement fant..

    ..20 it is fruit case,
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  4. Nick Icon

    Nick Icon The Specialist

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    Yeah I'm 2'n 0 offa no shows, but fuck dude
    The fact that you showed proves they both smarter than you....

    I promise you will...



    I'm not one to Judge, but yo Vill' you suckin at text
    So I'm about to take it to Court' like an angry Ex..
    This lame is vexed...
    Think you got flow f'real? Just stop son
    Cuz last week you beat EP, but you'll never drop one...
    Silencer ducked, it pissed me off so I'm gunnin ya crew
    Normally I'm Herbin' Legends- but a VIRGIN'll do...
    Stop frontin... You know it's true, just don't be mad, V
    We know you never seen Bush til Nebz changed his avy...
    This Villain is CRAZY... But fag you far from INSANE
    I'm known to take the ILL out... this clown just tries in VAIN...
    You feelin the pain?
    You ain't dope boy don't even pretend
    That's why we all "Quote Status"... instead of him...*
    Shows over Court'...
    The one TV NOBODY watches, in fact
    if this kid's here "Courtesy of Hip Hop", then FUCK RAP...*
    You'll never get the chance to beat me, bitch
    NO ONE EVER DOES...
    But I'll give you a window of opportunity- to jump out of...
    Cuz we all know fuckin wit Franch' is bad for ya health
    Maybe instead of "Hustlin heat", you shoulda saved some for yaself...
    I smash through Vill's.. So hide all the women'n children
    Cuz I'm a nice guy... But this week I had to play The Villain...




    *courtesy's custom text was "Quote Status", The Villain's was "Courtesy of Hip Hop"...

    Guess he changed it... [dunno]
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  5. Courtesy

    Courtesy Level With Me

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    yeah i did..

    ..neways, die u nobody

    fant's never had skill so why antagonize, ur not lastin..
    hid behind The Franchise..cuz u'll never be that status..
    voting circle all ready in ur crew, now thats def crack..
    an they only vote in favor of u..cuz they owe favors back..
    theres similarities between us, check in made a surface..
    u were laughing just like me!..before i ever see ya verses..
    ..maybe u need lessons dumbie, so stop rhymin stupid..
    how can u be captain of HL..if your the biggest newb in it?
    backpackin an ounce of shit,guns tight to me like beaters..
    fant casts more shadows of doubt than the apollo theatre..
    balls drop in ur court? fant never had a memory seriously..
    ^^cus that wouldnt happen, if a judge scared u into puberty,
    never try me an good riddance, finally a battle with a curve,
    bullet in before a sentence out of you..like microsoft word..
    i pop about a million pills a month, ur jokes start no giggling,
    fant?..described hard to take down?..ahaha ur jus riddilin..
    so now ur hallucinatin with my gun clap, no need to slap..
    i'll leave red on ya cap.....HL when i shoot through his hat..
    an now your navy in the blue so i've heard, fant get a clue..
    never sleep on ya verses, we laugh at ppl sleepn above u..
    an lol at u usin fran's name to get rep, ill unplug this slut..
    ..he was the most electrifyin man in text..ur jus washed up,

    Can i get a soul clap?..
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  6. Mr. Professor

    Mr. Professor Angel of Death

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    am i trippin? the thread says The Villain vs Franchise...courtesy and fantom check in...then Franny and Courtesy post verses?? wtf is going on in here lol
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  7. Nick Icon

    Nick Icon The Specialist

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    i only edited cuz you did yo, I fucked up and had "made" instead of "mad"...


    that cool?
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  8. Nick Icon

    Nick Icon The Specialist

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    courtesy= the villain

    fantom= the franchise...



    just like mr professor= AOD...


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  9. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    i have a feeling i didnt get some personals in this battle buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut heres a vote im doing out of boredom

    Franchise -- Your lines are boring, not content wise, but they aren't pleasing to the READER, try writing like you would for audio.

    no actual content wise --

    I'm not one to Judge, but yo Vill' you suckin at text
    So I'm about to take it to Court' like an angry Ex.. -- Decent nameplay

    This lame is vexed...
    Think you got flow f'real? Just stop son
    Cuz last week you beat EP, but you'll never drop one... -- hah

    Silencer ducked, it pissed me off so I'm gunnin ya crew
    Normally I'm Herbin' Legends- but a VIRGIN'll do... - meh, unless hes really a virgin, then it'd prolly be harder hittin but eh

    Stop frontin... You know it's true, just don't be mad, V
    We know you never seen Bush til Nebz changed his avy... - had me chuckeling

    This Villain is CRAZY... But fag you far from INSANE
    I'm known to take the ILL out... this clown just tries in VAIN... -- decent wordplay


    You feelin the pain?
    You ain't dope boy don't even pretend
    That's why we all "Quote Status"... instead of him...* -- hahaha


    Shows over Court'...
    The one TV NOBODY watches, in fact
    if this kid's here "Courtesy of Hip Hop", then FUCK RAP...* -- ooooooooooh


    You'll never get the chance to beat me, bitch
    NO ONE EVER DOES...
    But I'll give you a window of opportunity- to jump out of... -- im sure this is played but it sounds nice


    Cuz we all know fuckin wit Franch' is bad for ya health
    Maybe instead of "Hustlin heat", you shoulda saved some for yaself... -- ahem


    I smash through Vill's.. So hide all the women'n children
    Cuz I'm a nice guy... But this week I had to play The Villain... -- nice wrdplay in first line, pretty nice finisher

    overall verse response -- it moved slowly but the punches/plays were pretty funny, i liked this verse probly one of the better once i've read in a while, nice drop

    Courtesy -- Your lines feel stretched, and you should work on harder hitting punchlines, or better setups

    fant's never had skill so why antagonize, ur not lastin..
    hid behind The Franchise..cuz u'll never be that status.. -- eh opener

    voting circle all ready in ur crew, now thats def crack..
    an they only vote in favor of u..cuz they owe favors back.. -- im so amazed **flashes sarcasm**

    theres similarities between us, check in made a surface..
    u were laughing just like me!..before i ever see ya verses.. -- the flaw is that he was laughing at you too, u know? probly the worst line of the battle


    ..maybe u need lessons dumbie, so stop rhymin stupid..
    how can u be captain of HL..if your the biggest newb in it? -- hahaha

    backpackin an ounce of shit,guns tight to me like beaters..
    fant casts more shadows of doubt than the apollo theatre.. -- setup seems personal, but second line is maaaaaad played


    balls drop in ur court? fant never had a memory seriously..
    ^^cus that wouldnt happen, if a judge scared u into puberty, -- this line sucked, flow was off, rhyming was shit, punch felt forced

    never try me an good riddance, finally a battle with a curve,
    bullet in before a sentence out of you..like microsoft word.. - your wording is getting shitty, but i guess the bullet part was coo

    pop about a million pills a month, ur jokes start no giggling,
    fant?..described hard to take down?..ahaha ur jus riddilin.. -- no, just no

    so now ur hallucinatin with my gun clap, no need to slap..
    i'll leave red on ya cap.....HL when i shoot through his hat.. -- really weak on the flow, and you arent substituting for hard punches either

    an now your navy in the blue so i've heard, fant get a clue..
    never sleep on ya verses, we laugh at ppl sleepn above u.. -- uhhh, WHAT?

    an lol at u usin fran's name to get rep, ill unplug this slut..
    ..he was the most electrifyin man in text..ur jus washed up, -- that was pretty dope, i aint know he took frans name, but ok, pretty dope.....

    overall look back on verse -- ehh maybe im stupid but i think you need to work on your shit a while before being allowed to have an "i can rape u" sort of attitude because this verse didn't hold to how much shit talking has gone on in this thread

    vote -franchise for an overall more consistancy and doper lines


    ps -- i've never talked to either of u in my life
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  10. Courtesy

    Courtesy Level With Me

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    ur not in the rbl either..
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  11. Fantom

    Fantom :ihadadream:

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    it counts...

    [dunno]
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  12. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    fant had 1 line and court had 2...nuthin really much to quote here...


    vote=court
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  13. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    shouldn't have posted the link in hookups

    and while i noticed this

    JdotC's breakdown was ONE LINE

    where the actual vote isnt part of the breakdown


    and doesnt count due to second chance voting


    and further more while i might attract the attention of dilly or jook or someone whos suppose to RUN THIS LEAGUE the way they say it'll be run

    the voting in this league is absolutely horrendous and you should hire a mod in your fourth available slot whos job will be to soley run through votes and make sure the bullshit ones DON'T COUNT

    because to be honest some of these votes i see ppl drop are the biggest load of bullshit

    second edit: something else i noticed

    since crew voting is still not allowed and with the return of crews you shuold REALLY be watching the votes
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  14. Courtesy

    Courtesy Level With Me

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    hey how about u shut the fuck an get out of the thread now,

    ..thanx pussy, go write for rstl, noone cares about what u have to say
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  15. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    how about you shut the fuck up and learn to write a punch
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  16. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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    Cuz last week you beat EP, but you'll never drop one.
    ^good
    if this kid's here "Courtesy of Hip Hop", then FUCK RAP
    ^good stuff
    We know you never seen Bush til Nebz changed his avy
    ^chuckle worthy
    a lot of lines I felt the set-ups could've been better & really
    assisted the punchline as a whole & at times the concepts were
    good but the lines could've been better worded.

    vs.

    how can u be captain of HL..if your the biggest newb in it?
    ^lol
    an lol at u usin fran's name to get rep, ill unplug this slut..
    ..he was the most electrifyin man in text..ur jus washed up
    ^ nice personal
    when I was reading your verse I felt a lot of pauses ecterra.
    if you look closely you'll notice a break from periods or comma's in
    everyone of your lines in your verse, takes away from a steady
    flow also the rhyme scheme was off at times...

    overall I'm going with TheFranchise a more consistent verse &
    fantom had a couple concepts I wasn't feeling. anyways it was
    good battle, take care.

    vote- the franchise
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  17. Who? ClayFac3

    Who? ClayFac3 PLUMERZ CRAK

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    I'm not one to Judge, but yo Vill' you suckin at text
    So I'm about to take it to Court' like an angry Ex..
    This lame is vexed...
    2
    Think you got flow f'real? Just stop son
    Cuz last week you beat EP, but you'll never drop one...
    2
    Silencer ducked, it pissed me off so I'm gunnin ya crew
    Normally I'm Herbin' Legends- but a VIRGIN'll do...
    2
    Stop frontin... You know it's true, just don't be mad, V
    We know you never seen Bush til Nebz changed his avy...
    2
    This Villain is CRAZY... But fag you far from INSANE
    I'm known to take the ILL out... this clown just tries in VAIN...
    You feelin the pain?
    1
    You ain't dope boy don't even pretend
    That's why we all "Quote Status"... instead of him...*
    1 didnt really catch that one

    Shows over Court'...
    The one TV NOBODY watches, in fact
    if this kid's here "Courtesy of Hip Hop", then FUCK RAP...*
    3 i liked that one

    You'll never get the chance to beat me, bitch
    NO ONE EVER DOES...
    But I'll give you a window of opportunity- to jump out of...
    2

    Cuz we all know fuckin wit Franch' is bad for ya health
    Maybe instead of "Hustlin heat", you shoulda saved some for yaself...
    2
    I smash through Vill's.. So hide all the women'n children
    Cuz I'm a nice guy... But this week I had to play The Villain...
    2

    total 19/30

    overall above average verse... some nice personals/disses... was easy to flow...

    court..

    theres similarities between us, check in made a surface..
    u were laughing just like me!..before i ever see ya verses..
    1 opener sucked

    ..maybe u need lessons dumbie, so stop rhymin stupid..
    how can u be captain of HL..if your the biggest newb in it?
    1 simply kuz he aint a newb... newb to the crew is what your sayin but i aint feelin

    backpackin an ounce of shit,guns tight to me like beaters..
    fant casts more shadows of doubt than the apollo theatre..
    2
    balls drop in ur court? fant never had a memory seriously..
    ^^cus that wouldnt happen, if a judge scared u into puberty,
    33333333 lol... funny... nice... ohhhh..... lol 3

    never try me an good riddance, finally a battle with a curve,
    bullet in before a sentence out of you..like microsoft word..
    2
    i pop about a million pills a month, ur jokes start no giggling,
    fant?..described hard to take down?..ahaha ur jus riddilin..
    1

    so now ur hallucinatin with my gun clap, no need to slap..
    i'll leave red on ya cap.....HL when i shoot through his hat..
    well it aint really a diss nor that clever... but for some reason im feelin it a bit more than average so ill give it a 2

    an now your navy in the blue so i've heard, fant get a clue..
    never sleep on ya verses, we laugh at ppl sleepn above u..
    1
    an lol at u usin fran's name to get rep, ill unplug this slut..
    ..he was the most electrifyin man in text..ur jus washed up,
    didnt know he wasnt the original franchise... so i give that a 3 for nice

    score= 16/30

    ya verse was cool man... flowed easy also, but punches jus not as hard hittin a franchises

    puberty line was fawkin nice... battle was actually kinda close but my vote is goin to the franchise.. more consistent...

    v franchise

    yo in real life battles someone could have conistent ass shit that just like oh... but once someone spits a line thats real fawkin nice n everyone like ohhhhhhh n dont stop ohhhin then iss usually over... but this is text lol....
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  18. Courtesy

    Courtesy Level With Me

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    i mean besides ridin it,

    do u suck his dick too?..
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  19. Fantom

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    I am the original "The Franchise"...


    Why you think homey had to register theFranchise?

    Check the dates dood...


    [dunno]

    <<~~~ORIGINATOR 99'

    3-1 or 3-0?

    Is J Dot's vote gonna count?
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  20. Who? ClayFac3

    Who? ClayFac3 PLUMERZ CRAK

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    courtesy.. i just rated the punches 1-3.... if i was kinda feelin it i gave it a 2... if i wasnt really feelin it i gave it a 1.... if i was feelin it alot i gave it a 3.... if it was a real life battle i woulda gave it to you for that puberty line... but its text dude... consistency n all the other bs makes a diff i guess
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